Penname: jahchannah [Contact]

Real name: Carlotta

Member Since: January 25 2015

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I love to read and support aspiring authors!




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[Reviews - 35]
Summary:

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One Night Will Change Their Lives Forever.

 

Sexy Banner by Elizablu



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9960
Read Count: 13085
Published: May 26 2016
Updated: June 05 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I don't like when grown women like Gladys try dictate the behavior of friends...tell your friend what you don't like and then let it go...Aria isn't a child...Harvey needs to dump his yucky date...good chapter...

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Date: May 26 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Such a good start...here's hoping for more...

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Date: May 26 2016

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Sad story with a happy ending...good job...

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Date: June 05 2016

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[Reviews - 185]
Summary:

Coming home can be harder than staying away sometimes.

Home has now been published on Amazon and there's quite a bit more added from where I had originally ended this story. Hope you all enjoy it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 21
Read Count: 18591
Published: June 10 2016
Updated: October 06 2016


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Good story...I'm giving Charlie the side-eye as Alec's argument about her working for Sean was valid...but Alec's a good man to compromise...Charlie has to deal with the fallout of leaving Jamie when he was too young to really remember her...actions have consequences and she can't escape the consequences of leaving her young son without his mother for 3 years...she just has to take time to fix the wrong she committed against her son...



Author's Response:

Hi jahchannah,

The dreaded side-eye, but you're right in your assessment of Charlie and the results of her actions. Glad you're enjoying the story.

K.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 30 2016

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That Vanessa is a stank heffa...she is trying to reunite with Alec...Charlie is right to give that woman the side-eye...it was good to see Jamie accepting Charlie as his mom...I liked the approach she took with disciplining Jamie...she is making strides with him...the possibility of losing a child is becoming quite real for this couple...such a sad chapter...well done...looking forward to more...



Author's Response:

Hey Jahchannah,

Thanks for the review. Stank heffa and the side eye, love your description! Charlie is trying her best with Jamie and they're learning each other slowly. More to come and I hope you enjoy it.

 

K.

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Date: July 05 2016

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Such a good story...sad, but good...

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Date: August 29 2016

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Good chapter...the talk was much needed...Charlie and Alec are now on the same page...

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Date: August 29 2016

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

For a sociopath who killed his step father Jackson "Jack" Ford has a heart of gold despite his tough and cold exterior. However fellow paitent Aaliyah "Al" Nelson diagonosed as a schizophrenic has a heart of glass that's been shattered too many times to count.




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19024
Read Count: 48491
Published: September 12 2016
Updated: January 20 2018


Title: Chapter 6: SIX

I like Jackson for his righteous indignation against men who harm women and female children who are much weaker...more men should be like Jackson to stand for right and not back down...good story...

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Date: November 14 2016

Title: Chapter 3: THREE

Jackson protected his family...he's not a sociopath...poor Al is messed up but hopefully we'll learn the reasons soon...good job...

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Date: September 22 2016

Title: Chapter 2: TWO

Good story...

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Date: September 15 2016

Title: Chapter 7: SEVEN

I like Jackson and Al...good story...

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Date: January 17 2017

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Imagine a parallel universe where soulmates existed.

A world where you and your soulmate would grow old together and live happily ever after.

A world where if you hadn't found your soulmate, you'd be 18 years old and cease to age until you found your other half. 

Join 7 couples and their journey to finding their soulmate. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 18057
Read Count: 12800
Published: September 15 2016
Updated: February 05 2017


Title: Chapter 2: Rayna - Pt. 2 of 2

If you stop aging when your soul mate dies why wasn't Sheila stuck as a 10 month old?  She got the scar supposedly as a 10 month old meaning her soul mate had died...yet clearly she wasn't stuck as a 10 month old, so a big contradiction was made here...



Author's Response:

Hi jahchannah! Uhm, you stop aging when you turn 18 regardless of whether your soulmate has died or you just haven't found them. I mean, i did say multiple times that you stop aging at 18, so you age until you're 18, no matter what. Thank you for acknowledgin it. I will make a note of it so others can understand if they too are confused :)...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed half-star
Date: October 08 2016

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 133]
Summary:

As a young woman struggles to provide a better life for her and her brother. She first has to face the many challenges that come in her path. One being a big bad wolf.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5788
Read Count: 15253
Published: September 22 2016
Updated: October 11 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Characters

That's Josh Mario John...great choice...he's beautiful and smart..

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Date: October 12 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

Twenty-seven year-old Layla Jones made a promise to Dominic Slater ten years ago that she intended to keep. But the night her Step-Father took her innocence was the night she knew she could never keep that promise. Besides, why would Dominic want her if he knew what had been done. So she did the only thing she could do to protect him from that. She ran away and never looked back.

Dominic Slater never forgotten about Layla. In fact, she haunts his dreams and even more so took a piece of him that he could never reclaim without her. So when she comes back into his life, he won't let whatever hurt in the past pull them apart again. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 48063
Read Count: 20928
Published: January 08 2017
Updated: May 09 2017


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I really like Stone...he has great chemistry with Layla as written...right now, I'm not even feeling Layla and Dominic...I prefer her with Stone...good story so far...



Author's Response:

Thanks Jahchannah for you review!

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Date: January 17 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

Natalia loves children, and she loves being a nanny. After being fired from her job, she goes in search for a new nanny job. That's when she meets Jesse Stone, the badass rockstar and his sweet daughter Sydney. Jesse makes her job harder by being an asshole, but she loves being there for Sydney. Will Natalia push through and keep being a nanny to Sydney or will she leave, causng Sydney...and Jesse to miss her?



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 14256
Read Count: 15253
Published: April 04 2017
Updated: July 14 2017


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Uh Oh...I don't think Jesse's mother visiting right when he gets out of rehab is a good idea...why is she there...good story...

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Date: May 11 2017

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Good update to a good story...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: July 12 2017

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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

Emily has never wanted a man so bad until Elijah Smith. An Illinois born and bred small town bad boy who grew up just down the road from her. The only problem is, he's her childhood and high school bully. So when he comes around with flowers, muscles, and tattoos she isn't so willing to forget his torturous ways so easily.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 20124
Read Count: 15211
Published: June 04 2017
Updated: May 26 2018


Title: Chapter 4: Square one

Good story...I hope you keep going...

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Date: May 12 2018

Title: Chapter 1: Excerpt

Why get angry after the deed is done...she wasn't forced...when he told her he was in love with her, why not confront him then...girl's got issues...interesting start...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: June 07 2017

Title: Chapter 2: Where you fit

Though interesting, the story seems disjointed and doesn't flow well...is Emiliy hesistant because of her history with Elijah or does she want him...this chaptert she's kissing him and in the next she doesn't know if she wants him...definitely interesting but  strive for better clarity...



Author's Response:

You are right. *sigh* I'm not doing justice to this story because I'm so distracted with other things.

It does feel bunched and put together.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: June 20 2017

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 960]
Summary:

 

COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 284273
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 14: Sweet Satisfaction

I love this book...excellent work...



Author's Response:

blowing a kiss

Thank you!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2017

Title: Chapter 3: Bitter Treasure

Interesting encounter...someone needs to shake up Shug's life...



Author's Response:

You know he's on his way.

wink

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Date: July 22 2017

Title: Chapter 4: Sour Sisters

I really like this story...it's well written and fun...it's awesome to see the protagonist is a professional woman learning to stand on her own...such a strong presence is often lacking in stories with black women...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It is different but fun writing Sugar because she is such a determined businesswoman. She wants to do right for herself by making sure her restaurant is successful. It's like a product of her hard work. 

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Date: July 24 2017

Title: Chapter 5: Salty Reunion

Sugar is so judgmental of Chef...she should get knocked off her high horse...Chef will be good for her...



Author's Response:

She is very judgmental, but she is also very skeptical of Chef's interest in her. She doesn't trust any man right now, but she'll learn the hard way. 

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Date: July 26 2017

Title: Chapter 6: Sweet Jasmine

Beautiful chapter...loved it...Chef is just who/what Sugar needs...excited for more...



Author's Response:

I am so happy that you enjoyed the chapter! Chef is exactly what Sugar needs. 

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Date: July 26 2017

Title: Chapter 7: Hot Soup

Not surprised Lance rolled back around just like the bad penny he is...Chef was sexy putting Lance in his place...wished Sugar would open herself to something more than physical intimacy but I think Chef wants more and will use her conditions to wear her down...good story...watch yourself around the snakes...walk in your integrity and all will be well...



Author's Response:

Chef definitely wants more than physical intimacy, but he's gonna play and bend Sugar's rules to get her exactly where he wants her: by his side. But while he does it, there is nothing wrong with having some physical fun along the way, especially if it shows Sugar the errors in her ways. And you are absolutelyright about keeping my integrity!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30 2017

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.