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Real name: Keiondra Sanders

Member Since: March 03 2015

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Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey by kwajeraspen
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 40859
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016

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Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Who does this Oliver Martin want? Her mom? It doesn't make sense. That could be the only reason why he's targeting the family business. Daddy Roberts might have to get his hands dirty to handle this guy for sure. So she finally finds out about Mila. I wonder how that is going to change things, if it even does so. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 08 2016
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

They are adorable in their own special way. Perfect for each other. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 08 2016
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Little Mila don't play that! Talk about her lack of a mother and you're getting one to the face! Haha. It's still sad that he has to share that information with her. It's never a good thing to break a child's innocence like that. I hope Mila is strong enough to handle it and it doesn't break her. She has a great support system so I know she will recover but it doesn't make it any less horrible. Seriously Kori? You can't love working that much?! It makes you look kinda pathetic, you dive into work becuase you don't want to deal with other things. It's okay for everyone else to find love and true happiness but not you? Yeah right. What's the deal? I believe that Elise is about to take that step and completely move out of her parents home. I'm proud of the growth she has had. Not that she was a horrible person before but it definitely made her a more well rounded person. 

Update soon! 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 18 2016
Retired
Lonely by daughter
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 542]
Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143285
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lol get a good lay and then take a nap. Haha. That always solves the problem. Hehe

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Date: May 28 2015
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow..... Did she just have sex with a pillow? That is extremely different. I won't look at my pillow the same when I get off work tonight. LOl. A freak for sure. 

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Date: May 28 2015
Forbidden Fruit by ChristinaElizabeth
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Forbidden Fruit

Magdalena was the only daughter of Ezra, the Great. She was the fruit that was never to sampled until an Alpha won her hand in the competition that was to be held at her 18th moon.  Now with her festival for her birthday about to start, who will win the right to claim her?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15365
Read Count: 6988
Published: May 24 2014
Updated: July 13 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I find it intriguing. They are competing for her hand as a mate. What if a punk wins by cheating somehow? I think that Maddox is going to be the mate that is destined for her. It's just a matter of him winning now. LOl. 



Author's Response:

Her parents have already led her to believe her entire purpose is to be used to form alliances because of how they have raised her to be a future luna and the way they have kept her from forming bonds with people in her pack.  And who is to say that someone isn't going to cheat? And if Maddox is her true mate then love will find a way, right?

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 14 2015
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That is sad. Everyone else has a choice but her. That is jacked up, to think that all these Weres are here only to mate with you because of your dad. Because of who Ezra is, I would wonder if they all would be there if he wasn't powerful like that. I hope she finds him in all of this. 



Author's Response:

It's the life that she was born into so there isn't really anything she can do about that, And who is to say that this challenge before her isn't what she needs to find herself.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 14 2015
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like Alexi and Maddox. I think it will be those two in the end. At least I hope so, I think she can't go wrong either way. It will ultimately come to who is her true soul mate but I definitely think it's one of them. 

Not sure if you know, but you are posting the same chapter twice in each post. I'm not sure if that's intentional or not. 



Author's Response:

Interesting, thank you for your review. And no, I did not know that each chapter was posting more than once. I will try to fix that.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 14 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Aww is she getting her period. LOl. I wish I didn't get my cycle until I was 18. 



Author's Response:

awww, lol. Something like that. Thank you for the review

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 14 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh wow.... I'm glad that Maddox was there to help her. I'm starting to not like Alexi. Ass. The healer should have told her that Maddox brought her there not Alexi. I guess because she hasn't had a period all of that is built up so it hit her hard. 

Update soon!! 



Author's Response:

Everyone has their purpose lol Thank you for your review!

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 14 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Dang mom. Why would you domthat? Let her mate with her true love, geez! I know her mate is Maddox, why would her wolf lie? It has to be him, plus I like him more. Lol

Update soon

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 15 2015
Sugar Baby Love by Jonara2010
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 519]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111870
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017

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Title: Chapter 24: New Friends

When it comes to ole girl I don't blame her for feeling some type of way. Any sane woman would have questions and doubts. I hope they work things out. He should at least tell her that he found the truth but maybe leave names out of it. At least tell her that the test was wrong.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: December 29 2015
Title: Chapter 30: Worth It

He is making moves on your behalf. Don't feel some type of way about it. You can't do this for hiim and then tomorrow be all sad and depressed about what he does again. I would have been doing this almost every night becuase he is protecting me. LOl. 

Update soon. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 10 2017
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Elise is beautiful

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 31 2015
Title: Chapter 2: School Woes

Aww poor Elise, that's a fucked up situation to be in but its reality. I hope this guy isn't crazy. He'll I should have thought of that in undergrad, saved me some headache. Lol

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 31 2015
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting. I really like that he achieved everything on his own. Especially so because he didn't have to, he had a ready made business waiting for him and instead he started his own. I'mthink his father should be proud not resentful, he proved to be more than just someone born into money. That says a lot about his character and work ethic. Mow, its never good to co sums yourself in any one thing, at least in my opinion. Focusing solely on work will lead to a life of loneliness. You are going to look back and life will have passed you by. Then what will you be able to say about the life you lived? You were successful yes but you didn't have true happiness and never experienced love.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 31 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Clause

Wow. That is definitely a clause to pay attention to. Lol. I'm glad their date wasn't all that weird, some moments but overall a good date. What does he mean she won't be in a world she has known? Is he going to inteoduce her to his world or something? What does he want from her? I know she's going to sign the contract, she needs the money. A year isn't long at all. But does love really have a time frame?   

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 31 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wait? So she has to give you a baby if she doesn't fall in love with you? Thats a bit dar fetched. She is in a male dominated profession so making male friends is inevitable. That whole you come when in call thing is kinda crazy too. What if she is in the middle of studying or research or clinicals or with her best friend. You can't expect her to stop her life for you. Not all the time at least. Why doesn't she believe in marriage? Even as a surgeon, marriage could work she would have to be with someone who understands how mich her career means to her. I don't blame her for crying, I would too. Its degrading almost. But you have to do what you have to do to survive

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 31 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Boundaries

Jameson is too much. Lol. She has a driver, chef, does she have a butler too? He was serious about the red thing. She can't even sleep. He wants to be close to her. Hehe

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 31 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Friends? Pt 1

I think they will develop a friendship. That's the only way they will survive this with each other. She's right, those gifts and money do nothing for her. He better give her time to study, becoming a surgeon isn't easy work.

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Date: July 31 2015
Title: Chapter 8: Compromise

This Jen chick needs to check herself. Let it go, damn. I'm glad that she realized that she was going over board and did that. Hopefully things get better

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Date: July 31 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Special Places

Aww look at her sharing something so special with him. I thought she was just studying. Lol. But I'm glad she is going to stop acting like that, it was quite annoying. These nicknames are adorable! And about this kiss honey!!! Whew. This is definitely going to develop into something.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 31 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Trips and Promises

Uh oh. This Mason character is not going to be good. I hope this upcoming drama from him doesn't sabotage her career and clinicals. Who is Larry? A bodyguard? Aww he is taking her somewhere tropical! Bathing suits!!! Just how thankful is she?  

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 31 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Dinner and Dancing

Woah!!!! She was extremely thankful I see. This is definitely a step. I didnt think she was a virgin, this makes things even more interesting because giving someone your virginity is special. I'mcan't believe his associate and wife has the nerve to say the things they did. How freaking rude. I commend her for holding face amidst that kind of treatment. People can be so judgmental.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 31 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Car Conversations

I think she is ready for a relationship but not to the degree he is ready for. But I think she will get there soon. She was ready to give up the goods. Lol. I like Carol, she shut those tricks up quick. Now this whole wife, fiancé thing is going to get them caught up if that doesn't happen soon or she isn't at least wearing a ring. She better not switch up once they get home. I would be passed if she does. Don't fight the progress.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 31 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.