Penname: KeiKei [Contact]

Real name: Keiondra Sanders

Member Since: March 03 2015

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Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

Zaira Jacobs and Eli Jacobs (her son) runs away from their past, from the pain, and from a 6 foot 4 German (Adrian Hitzag).

 

However, Adrian is not too eager to let his beloved mate escape from his grasp.

 

Follow the story of a determine mother, a curious son, and a possessive German.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 24066
Read Count: 43590
Published: April 01 2015
Updated: January 07 2016


Title: Chapter 3: The Collision of Fate [2]

I can't believe the Mayor himself went off because she did a damn good at her job and took him down. Usually, they would be praising you for that. How interesting that he finds his mate in the one person that took his brother down. I wonder how Conrad is giong to feel about this. Dang, he killed someone becuase they couldn't find her. Wow. Does he find her? 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 11 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Darkness, take me please[7]

I'm soo excited that you posted. I was beginning to think this was discontinued. I hope all is well with you. Are you feeling better since the accident?

I wonder how Zaria got that message to Adrian? Either way, I'm glad he got it. Now he can save her and kill that low life backstabbing whoring trick Elena and Igor's crazy ass. I know Z is going to survive this. She has too. I just hope that they find her before Igor rapes her or tortures her even more. I know she isn't going to back down, no matter how bad he beat her. Don't forget about lil Eli!!!

Update soon!!!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 11 2016

Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning [1]

Oh gosh.... I was definitely wondering how they meet. And this dude is 375?!!! He's a warewolf? This just got really interesting. 2 years turns into 65 warewolf years. LOl. They both old as hell!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 09 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Opening Credits

Lil Eli is so adorable!! LOl 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 09 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Revenge is best severed cold [5]

 I love reading again. I get to comment all the thoughts I had when I originally read it. LOL

Oh gosh who kidnapped her? I hope it was Conrad's people or Adrian's. I can't believe that girl really is a whore. Going from one brother to the next. How pathetic. I wonder what she and Duncan plan on doing. I hope they rip her to shreds. I just know Conrad isn't going to hurt her, she is his brother's mate. Be mad at her, yes but don't hurt her. Is there any way to make someone else your mate if you want them to be. Like can Colin mate with Zaria if he wanted? 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 09 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Never let them tame your soul [6]

I hope all is well with you. I'm glad you're back though. I look forward to hearing from you. Now I'm going to reread this...

 

OMGosh poor Zara. I hope Adrian finds her soon. I can't believe they didn't recognize each others voices over the phone. I wonder what Colin is going to do when he gets to the house and finds Adrian there.can we just kill Elena now. Stupid bitch!

 

Update soon.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: June 09 2015

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Summary:

 After escaping the terrors of human trafficking at 14 and the abuse of the adoption system at sixteen Serenity Hall dedicated her life to helping others trap the no good goons of the world, as a undercover C.I.A agent. Her work is dangerous but who ever said fun should be safe. While tracking down her latest target she runs into a bit of trouble that will change the world she knows forever. Shifters, secrets, lust and survival will leave you wanting more in this sensual adventure.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6938
Read Count: 9486
Published: April 22 2015
Updated: May 07 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wait?? What the hell? 

So she has the power to control water. There is a talking wolf and a man that turns into an eagle following and protecting her. What prophecy needs to come to pass? What's going to happen to the planet if it doesn't? Who is Eric??? She's CIA. Nice. Was she abused by this Scott Gores guy? Why did he call her a nymph??? 

I'm interested. 



Author's Response:

Hi KeiKei,

Your first two sentences are spot on, you'll learn more about the wolf and eagle that is protecting her as the story progresses. I really want to tell you about the prophecy but I feel that it may be giving away too much for later chapters, so I'll hold my tongue, but the profacy is very important and the reason that everything in her life is happening at this very moment. Eric is her protector who was watching over her, the eagle shifter.

No Scott Gores didn't abuse her but he is closer in connection with her abuser then she knows.

Stay tuned for more and feel free to leave any questions or comments!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 25 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So is Andrew her brother? I don't blame her for her reasoning but don't drag him along. He wants more that you can offer because of your career. The sooner you ended things the better. You can try to control your emotions all you want but it's going to hurt both of you if you don't end it soon. Something could still happen to him because you have been messing with him for over 2 years. 

Update soon!! 



Author's Response:

Hi KeiKei,

Thats all true, but did he ever complain through out the chapter, and he has also stayed with her for 2 years without any progress. He knows what their relationship is and how much she is willing to give he just wants more because he cares for her. He knows she cares for him even if she is hiding it behind a her tough exterior.

Will they progress in their relationship or will he get tired of her on and off attitude?

Stay tuned to find out!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 25 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm glad that she is going to attempt to end things with ole boy before something bad happens to him. I don't know how I would have reacted to learning that the people who sold her like a sex slave are involved in the case that she is working on. I would have pulled out. I don't think I would be able to think straight. Not completely. That is horrible!!! I feel bad for what her and her brother had to endure while in foster care. I'm glad they were able to survive and she not get raped. Dang, he hurt them that bad that his leg had to get amputated. Wow! I wonder if he killed the mother after he found out she called the police. Took her long enough, it should have never gotten to that point. I understand that you're scared too but he could have killed those kids because you were too afraid of him hitting you. But I am glad that she found some courage that night. 

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 18 2015

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Summary:

 

Undercover agent and assassin, Nina Thompson knew this was going to be the hardest mission she’s ever had to accept for the international secret agency she was in.  It was going to test her in many ways she knew she wasn’t prepared for.  This was going to break her and change her and she didn’t know if she was ever going to be the same.  She falls into a downward spiral of drugs and resentment towards the mission leader, Maxim Sokoloff, an agent she’s always admired until now.  Can Maxim and another fellow agent pull her out of her hole?

 

*Dark Fic*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 35257
Read Count: 20560
Published: May 09 2015
Updated: December 06 2019


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Interesting... She is trying to run from one problem by creating another. She needs to focus on getting herself together and off those drugs. I hope he doesn't take advantage of her in her state of vulnerability. It's just going to make things worse. 

Update soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 13 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting... I know this is going to be full of twists and turns. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I don't blame her. I don't think anyone is prepared to be the victim. I think what makes it worse is that she already knows what's going to happen to her unlike the other women that he has brought into his sex trafficking ring. This is definitely going to test her strength. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh my.... This was a twist of events quicker than I expected. Did he just have this girl raped in front of everyone like it was like getting some woman a drink of water or something?! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I know that had to be hard to go through.. But I'm glad that she wasn't raped.. At least not this time but I know it's coming. I can't wait for her to take this asshole down. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my... I'm sorry but she is right. It's not worth it to get raped and brutilized to take down a sex trafficking ring. Not to me. Why couldn't they send in another man? He isn't raping them! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This cocaine is going to make things easier and harder for her. She is going to get lost in that to take away the pain, I feel like she is going to forget what she's there for if she doesn't get that under control. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh Lord... This just gets worse and worse. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I agree with Maxim, snorting coke the way she has is not good for the mission or herself. She will quickly become an addict. I hope this mission is over quicker than it started. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That's sad... She has been gone for 3 years?! What if Nina has to do that? I couldn't go through things like that for years at a time. It's pure madness. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Damaged goods?! She wouldn't be that if you weren't destroying her like that. Ass. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

She is lost in coke and Maxim is lost in revenge. Both aren't good. I hope he doesn't drag that guy's sister into this. That's not cool. It's really pushing a line you've already pushed to the limit. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Like I said... this whole mission is shit. I know I couldn't do that. Fuck a mission. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

She really needs to get a damn grip and stop with the coke. She is going to blow her cover. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I hope she doesn't get high and is able to complete this crap so this can be over and done with. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yay!!! She was able to complete the mission.. Not before she got high yet again though. But whatever, the mission is complete. It just sucks that she wasn't able to do that before he raped her again. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 22 2016

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