Penname: KeiKei [Contact]

Real name: Keiondra Sanders

Member Since: March 03 2015

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The year 2016 looks promising for Faith Jamison she's finally going to acheive her purpose in the world and feel good about herself for the first time in her life. Women are now finally allowed to train to be Navy SEALS. Faith isn't going to let that oppurtnuity slip by her not when she sees a future that is brighter than her painful past.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 25940
Read Count: 51698
Published: September 29 2015
Updated: March 21 2016


Title: Chapter 11: THANKSGIVING

Wow.... Dude showed up at the front door. I'm glad that he found out though. I can't believe that she ran off and left her newborn child with her mother. That's beyond low and females like that don't deserve to have children in my opinion. If you couldn't take care of a child then don't lay your ass down and make it. He deserves soo much more. 

Netflix has a great mini series on SEALs training. It might be a great help. Youtube has some good stuff too. Update soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 12 2016

Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 301721
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021


Title: Chapter 15: Breaking and Mending

Jasper Jasper!!! Oh no!!!! Don't call him Will. He is crazy and absolutely no good for you. Leave him alone. Is this Juliette's sick and twisted way of getting what she wants from Sebastian? Bitch!!!!! I truly hope Sebastian kills Jasper and Juliette hell.

Update soon!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 05 2016

Title: Chapter 22: Lost Children

This was a very good chapter. I'm glad that Willow is starting to understand him, it doesn't excuse killing someone but I completely get it. I just don't need Sabastian to loose it. I'm afraid of what he will do if he does. I feel like he will kill without a second thought in this state if you look at Willow or him in the wrong way. Not good!

I completely understand, the school year is always hectic at the end. Between the students trying to do thngs last minute and end of year duties for teachers. It's a lot. They don't understand how much we need summer vacations. LOl. Update soon!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 10 2017

Title: Chapter 12: Guest of the Hour

In your parents house while they are downstairs Willow?!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 21 2015

Title: Chapter 13: Oh, Where; Oh, Where!

I enjoyed this chapter. It will open the doors for more in depth chapters to follow.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 21 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Punishment

Oh my.. I'm glad he was able to get the upper hand so Jasper didn't hurt Willow but he is going to look tore up after this. So he had a wife and daughter?! Interesting. Why did they die? Did he have to kill them? What debt does he owe his father and what truth does he hold over Juliette's head?? So many questions!

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 21 2015

Title: Chapter 11: When a Monster Becomes a Man

Lol haha. He's dead and I'm going to enjoy breakfast.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 21 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Clean, Bone, Destruction

I like Sebastian's point of view. It reveals a lot. I love his protective nature for her but I'm a bit afraid of it too. Lol

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 20 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Creature of Habit

Holy crap!! Is Sebastian killing Simon because Willow said that's what she wanted while emotional and upset?! Oh goodness it just got real

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 20 2015

Title: Chapter 8: The Golden Pig

Wow that's so evil. I can't believe simon did that asshole. Where is Sebastian going??

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 20 2015

Title: Chapter 1: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

Her mother gives me a bad taste in my mouth. Its a shame she turned it around on her like that. Why isn't she sending Willow to the spa? Hell she is the one who actually was attacked. Thank God that guy was there to help her. Most people would act like they don't see a thing.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 20 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Home is Where the Heart is

Oh okay.. I hope this doesn't change things.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 20 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Tipsy

Jealousy!! Lol

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 20 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Cold, Hard, Rough

Lol Sebastian handled himself very well. I would have done the same. Now all that shut talking done got her in trouble.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 20 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Silly Little Fool

Well it was rude for Simon to not make sure she at least got into the car. And he kissed her!! That is so damn random but for some reason I'm okay with it. Lol.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 20 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Slim Whims

Yes sir!! That's how you do it Sebastian

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 20 2015

Title: Chapter 20: Far, Far Away

I can definitely understand why she is being reluctant to forgive him so quickly. This is exactly why he didn't tell her in the first place. But if I recall correctly.. Didn't she say something that she wanted something to happen to Simon while she was emotional about what happened? If she did, then you can't be upset that Sebastian did what you asked; if she didn't then your emotional state led him to doing that. Simon hurt someone he loves deeply and they must pay for that. Now did he need to die? No but he definitely needed to be taught a lesson. Get used to him love because he isn't going anywhere. LOl. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 09 2017

Title: Chapter 21: Step in the Right Direction

Lol now that's some make up sex. But I'm glad that he knows that all is not forgiven and he still has a ways to go before he is completely back in her good graces. But in the meantime, she should get hers. It seems to be worth it. LOl. 

Update soon 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 09 2017

Title: Chapter 16: Show and Tell

Awwww man!!! So he didn't get to kill Jasper's punk ass. That's not fair. His father needs to punish that wife of his for creating this problem not him. He can't seriously still owe his father that damn much. I would kill them both.

I'm glad that he went to Willow's house. Hopefully he works things out with her and this just ins't a quicky. He also needs to tell her who Jasper really is. At least make her aware that she's in danger.

Update soon!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 26 2016

Title: Chapter 2: The Cold Breakfast

Her savior is becoming her crush. I would love to learn more about Sebastian

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 20 2015

Title: Chapter 17: Yes

Wow.... That is truly how you make up. Lol. I'm glad they are back together. I hope this isn't a rush decision because he just doesn't want to see her with someone else. Sadly, I'm glad that she said yes. LOl. Wedding!!!!!!!

UPdate soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: March 04 2016

Title: Chapter 18: Monster's Wife

Wow... What a way to find out that your new husband is really about that life. LOl. The fact that he wanted her to kill him is truly scary. And I think she still wants to jump his bones even after all that. Haha. I wonder if he will tell her. I think he will because her leaving him will do more damage than her shooting him in my opinion. So time to spill the beans hubby!!!

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 13 2016

Title: Chapter 19: Self Destruct

I loved this chapter. It seemed so real. It's all the emotions that any person would feel after learning those kinds of things about the one you love. Personally, I don't think you have to explain yourself to anyone, it's your story. I can see why you did it but you're the one writing this so go wherever your muse takes you. I'm enjoying the ride. LOl. I wonder where he takes her? She really needs to figure out if she's going to accept his life or not.. Until then, she won't be able to heal from anything and it will continue to eat her alive. Hopefully she can move on from this. 

Update soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 30 2016

Title: Chapter 23: Tiny Punishments

Wow... his upbringing was horrible. How could anyone entice their child like that? And when they react on it and give you exactly what you want then its woe it's me. No! You asked for it and now you're getting it. That dream is crazy. I wonder if that's how they died though. I mean, they were just chilling and the shots came out of nowhere type of thing. I wonder where those wounds came from on Willow, I don't remember her getting hurt in any way. 

Update soon. 



Author's Response:

Hey, KeiKei! Willow got her wounds from the previous chapter when she fell on broken glass. The dream is a mix between memories and a horrific nightmare. The interaction between Nathaniel, his wife Giselle, and Valerie are real up to the jumping on the bed by Valerie, but violence is fabricated by the nightmare. However, the bullet wounds that were inflicted on them are a true detail. Valerie was shot in the chest. Giselle was shot six times. Nathaniel played no part in their deaths. Their deaths were an act of revenge against him when he was a police officer. Hope this helps. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 13 2017

Title: Chapter 24: A First Time for Everything

Oh wow. I was not expecting this ending at all. Its so sad to read about Valerie and Giselle being killed because he did his job. I know that guilt eats at him constantly, mot to mention his partner. Can't say I blame him for becoming an assassin. Revenge and all.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 21 2018

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