Coming home can be harder than staying away sometimes.
Home has now been published on Amazon and there's quite a bit more added from where I had originally ended this story. Hope you all enjoy it.
Awww that's not good. Especially for them to do that in front of the boys. It's never that important for you to argue in front of your kids. I don't agree with that at all. I hope they work things out or at least truly figure out what they are going to do before it drowns both of them and those kids are collateral damage again. They don't deserve that.
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedLol. Awww make up sex. Hopefully this is a step in the right direction and things get better. Lord knows they need to.
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Reviewer: KeiKei SignedI'm sad to see this end but it was a great ending. I'm glad that they were able to be a complete family again. They have been through a lot and deserve happiness. Especially happy that Olly is healthy and his life is returning to that of a normal young man. Great story.
Hi KeiKei,
Thanks for your kind words and I'm so glad you liked this story.
K.
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The saga of a southern family rooted in forbidden love told through the eyes of the biracial daughter Beatrice.
That's soo sad. I'm glad that Lillian still has her innocence and doesn't even know what she is doing is wrong by society standards. But I know that her mother's thoughts of Beatrice and Teddy are going to eventually rub off on her and she will feel differently. I somewhat think that Salmone overreacted. Let your child know that you're proud of her but explain why she shouldn't be so open to talk about that. Don't just chastise her and leave her confused about learning. I feel like Lillian's mother is going to find out somehow and it's going to be bad.
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Reviewer: KeiKei SignedThis is going to be interesting. I can't wait to see how you develop this story.
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedWow... How crazy is that. All his children have the same birthday. I hope that the Flemings don't attempt to make her life a living hell because she gave him his first son. Technically, she gave him his first son and daughter if I'm reading this correctly. Lol.
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedDang.... Why does Eleanor have to act like that. Be mad at your husband for messing around but don't take it out on those children. They didn't ask for any of this. Hell they didn't even know who their father was. Jealousy is a demon forreal.
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedThat's crazy. So they gave their virginities to each other. Interesting. Did Salome's mother have relations with Levi's dad or something? Why does Pearl hate her so much?
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedThat woman is the absolute worse. How can you expect a damn child to clean a chandelier? Then get mad because the child almost killed herself doing what you told her to do? I'm telling you, jealousy is crazy man.
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedThat's sad. I do hope that they both find out the truth soon. Sucks to say but I wouldn't mind if Levi's wife died too.... It might make things a bit better. I'm glad that Teddy has Cato to look up to. It would be good for him.
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Reviewer: KeiKei SignedFor a sociopath who killed his step father Jackson "Jack" Ford has a heart of gold despite his tough and cold exterior. However fellow paitent Aaliyah "Al" Nelson diagonosed as a schizophrenic has a heart of glass that's been shattered too many times to count.
I have to agree with Jackson... I don't like this Wilson character around Al. I feel like he's some sick fuck having sex with her while she's knocked out. I feel bad for her. And Jackson, why label him as a sociopath becuase he was protecting his family from his step father? I don't think that's crazy at all. I think that Jackson and Al are going to get each other through this.
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Reviewer: KeiKei SignedOMG. I seriously don't blame her for killing her mother. Who does that to their child? If you hated her so much why didn't you just let her father have full custody so you could live your damn life? You don't deserve to be a damn mother! I can't believe that happened to her. I feel horrible for her. Jealously is truly a spirit and it had a massive hold on her egg donor. I bet it was that nurse guy that was acting all weird with Al that just raped her. I can't believe this is happening to her. I hope that either she or Jackson kills his ass too. I'm sure this kind of thing happens in mental facilities all the time. Drug them up and have your way with them. And they wonder why these patients never fully recover. They have added trauma to deal with on top of whatever sent them there in the first damn place!
I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedSo that's why she's there. She killed her mom... I guess I can see why from the snippets of flashbacks you give us. It was nice to hear Jackson's story. I really don't blame him for killing his stepfather. I figure he would be doing it anyway but it would only be after he killed his mom or raped his sisters. Fucking bastard did deserve it so kudos to Jackson for saving the world from one sick fuck.
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Reviewer: KeiKei SignedI'm glad that he was there when she had her episode. Nurse's and staff at mental institutions are quick to dope you up whenever something happens. Like they want to keep you in a damn comatose or something. Drugs aren't the only answer to helping these people get better. Looks like they both have found a friend in each other. I'm glad, they could use it. I do not like Wilson at all. He should kill him. LOl. Only kidding...
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Reviewer: KeiKei SignedOh my goodness... He got that damn girl pregnant. My Lord, will she ever be able to completely recover from trauma? Forgive me but I want Jack to beat the living day lights out of that rapist!!!!! Kill his ass for all I care.
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedI love how Jackson rides for Al like that. Especially because she has no one. I want her to get better so they both can leave that horrid place. Something better be done about Wilson or Jackson better kill him.
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedWow.. You wanted to cut your daughter's breast off? Again, why didn't you just let her damn father take her? It's clear you didn't want her for whatever reason. I don't think Al should feel bad about killing her mother. I fel like she should have done it on purpose a long time ago. She never deserved to be treated like that. I am also glad that Jackson is there for her. I wonder just how much she will tell him about her mother. Is her father still alive? Is he not looking for her or something?!
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Reviewer: KeiKei SignedAwww I'm glad he broke her out of that horrid place. It wasn't good for either of them. I wonder how this plays out. I hope her father is alive, Lord knows how she will handle things otherwise.
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedImagine a parallel universe where soulmates existed.
A world where you and your soulmate would grow old together and live happily ever after.
A world where if you hadn't found your soulmate, you'd be 18 years old and cease to age until you found your other half.
Join 7 couples and their journey to finding their soulmate.
I actually found this to be interesting. It's definitely a different way to look at finding your soulmate. A kinda scary way too when you think about it too. I find it interesting that in the beginning Rayna didn't care so much about finding her soulmate and then after hearing that story, she went to bed concerned that she might not. Quite the turn in opinions.
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It is scary when you think about it lol. And i've been doing a lot of thinking on the subject lol. My brain is fried from it. We all have a change of heart sometimes. Thank you so much and I will!
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedWow... I don't know how I would take hearing my husband's last moments like that. It would literally break me. I'm not sure if tough is the word to describe her though. She seems a bit selfish... Most people spend a lifetime looking for a love that what she had with Jonathon and here she is more worried about her damn beauty. I'm sorry, that just doesn't sit well with me. Not even 12 hours after his death you go and buy a damn hair dye kit?! Are you serious?!! There is nothing wrong with loving yourself more but come on chick. I figured that as soon as he said he was going for a ride that something was going to happen to him. Poor Jonathon.. Not Lexi.
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HI KeiKei!
lol yep, she's a selfish biotch who only carea about herself and her beauty.
Yes I'll try! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedWow... This is soo interesting. It makes you think about your own soulmate and stuff. Granted, things don't necessarily happen like that for us it's an interesting concept. I had to stop myself from checking for a scar before I thought about it. LOl. I feel bad for Sheila. But at least she knows that now rather than search for someone that isn't alive anymore. But to know that your soulmate has been dead since you were a baby is hard. She will never know what that love feels like. Truly sucks. Each story is soo different but finding real love is different for each person so it makes sense to share completely different stories.
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Aww hahaha the fact that you made sure to look made me smile way too hard! Yeah it is tough but she can always have a relationship with someone who is suffering the same way she is. Granted it's not the same but let's try to give Sheila a somewhat okay ending? Thank you so much KeiKei! I absolutely will!! :)
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedIs she seriously paying someone to be her husband... Finding someone else's soulmate doesn't have anything to do with finding your own. If you are good at what you do, that won't matter. I have never in my life heard of someone getting plastic surgery to look older. Now that's bizarre. And I wonder what's going to happen when she meets Andrew's soulmate? Will she recognize her? Now maybe she can take some time off to focus on finding her own damn soulmate and be happy forreal.
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Hey KeiKei! Yup she is hahaha
I haven't heard of that either so I thought why the heck not? Yeah, she desperately needs to take a break and find happiness!
thank you so so much for reading and commenting!! :))))
Reviewer: KeiKei SignedAs a young woman struggles to provide a better life for her and her brother. She first has to face the many challenges that come in her path. One being a big bad wolf.
Wow... That's horrible that they would put a little boy in a damn wall. What happened to their mother? I'm guessing she either died or left them. That's so sad. And mister Alec... About to pounce on the poor girl already. She doesn't even know you and not only are you claiming her but you're about to shift right in front of her and her brother.
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Reviewer: KeiKei SignedWow... That's one way to make an introduction. Haha. Damn near kill a man in front of her. LOl. I don't blame her for being a bit scared of him. Hell he did it with his hand and didn't even look like he was trying to do anything. Didn't he hear her say that Ryan was her brother? Why would you be jealous of a little boy touching your mate? He's a kid. Anyway, his wolf is very aggressive. He will definitely need to exercise much more restraint on him if he wants a shot at Renee at all. Damn near taking the woman and claiming her will not work, no matter how much her body may respond to you. So that's what happened to their mom, she died. I wonder how? I wouldn't be surprised if their father had anything to do with it. Or maybe she committed suicide to get away from it all in desperation. Either way, it's sad.
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Reviewer: KeiKei SignedWell damn. Was she about to give him the good stuff just then if her brother didn't walk in? And this damn man was about to bite her! Talk about freaking her out. I'm excited to see how this date goes. I know it will be intense. Who exactly is going to be watching Ryan? No doubt someone in his pack. But what makes you think that she is going to be okay with some stranger doing that?
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Reviewer: KeiKei SignedDisclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
