Penname: KeiKei [Contact]

Real name: Keiondra Sanders

Member Since: March 03 2015

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Perfectly Imperfect by Candice Caine
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 173]
Summary:

 

Sometimes people are beautiful. Not in looks. Not in what they say. Just in what they are.     




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 36570
Read Count: 15115
Published: July 15 2017
Updated: September 30 2017

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Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I must admit, I was a bit confused when I initially saw this online. I could have sworn I had read this before. LOl. I like the beginning, it helps to understand them more. Reading about what happened to him is still hard, no child should experience that. Raeann is funny to me. Big things come out of Texas they say. LOl. I love how her mom got her together real quick. You've had your moment, now get it together before I help you do it myself. Haha!!

 



Author's Response:

Ha! I am glad you came back to read this story again. It is going to be a fun ride.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 19 2017
Title: Chapter 2: Love Is Definitely In the Air

Just adorable. She fits right in with them. She's apart of the family, she just needs to make a move on Johnny so it can be official. I can't help but laugh reading about him at this party. I know its not funny but I all but died. Lol

Update soon. 



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL! I actually laughed myself when I wrote that part about the party. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 20 2017
Title: Chapter 3: No Regrets, No More Subtlety

I don't think I have ever fully laughed like that reading anything in awhile. It's soo adorable it just has to make you sick!! He passed out from a tongue kiss. Raeann knows she wrong for that. She went completely bold. Heck her outfit alone almost gave this boy a heart attack and then you do that?! Jesus, that was one heck of a kiss. 

UPdate soon! 



Author's Response:

Johnny definitely felt the heat, literally. It was just too much! ;)

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 30 2017
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Sugar Mama by Missus James
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 960]
Summary:

 

COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 284424
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019

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Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet

I really like this. It is completely different from what is mostly on this board. An older woman who is fresh out of a divorce to an asshole I must say. I'm for it!! Lance is truly a butt. It is not her fault that your son was stillborn, I despise men who blame the mother for that (is she isn't actually doing anything). That girl is old enough to be his daughter, freaking perv. I hope she takes him for everything he owns. I know that Sugh is going to be successful, she has nothing to lose. Lory is a fool already. I love how hard Roc went for her sister, I'm the same way about my family. 



Author's Response:

Rochelle does go hard. She is a bit of a pitbull when it comes to fam, LOL. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 20 2017
Title: Chapter 2: Unsweet Beginnings

I do not like Lance or his paid whore, not wife. I love how she checked her too, scary trick. How dare you throw a woman's miscarriages in her face?! It says a lot about your character and you deserve a monster like Lance. I'm glad that all her hard work is paying off. I think she needs to hire someone to help her manage all that stuff though, she needs to enjoy the fruits of her labor. She's worked her entire adult life, now it's time to enjoy it now. You deserve to. Those pictures of her restraurant are beautiful!! 

Update soon! 



Author's Response:

Sugar is gonna learn that she needs to enjoy life, but she needs a reason and she's about to get one. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 20 2017
Title: Chapter 3: Bitter Treasure

I wonder why whoever did that to him? What did he do to deserve that? Just being hot headed? I like this feeling she is getting too! I think she should play the piano sometimes during operational hours. I think the staff and customers will get a real kick out of it and it will allow her to get away from just being an owner all the time and enjoy the fruits of her constant labor. 



Author's Response:

Keep reading to find out why he got tossed out of the car! :) As for the idea about Sugar playing the piano, well ahead of you. ;)

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 30 2017
Title: Chapter 4: Sour Sisters

That is interesting. I don't think there is anything wrong with being recluse sometimes. I just think you have to remember that life is still moving and you have to actually live a little at times. I don't think it was cool of Roc to start putting her business out like that though, it was definitely not the time nor the place for that conversation. More like a private spa day or an in the house type of chat. I like that Chef caught her off guard, throw her off her game. She needs it. Not every man is Lance. 



Author's Response:

Rochelle was wrong for saying what she said in a public place, but Odette luckily put Roc in her place. As for Chef, he's always big on surprises. It'll be explained later as to why he likes surprising her so much.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 30 2017
Title: Chapter 5: Salty Reunion

LOl. I really like Chef, he is just what mama order. A charming hard-working Southern gentleman. What more could a lady want. Just say yes and see what happens. What's the worst thing that could happen? You enjoy yourself too much. 



Author's Response:

The worst thing that could happen for Sugar is the best thing for her.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 30 2017
Title: Chapter 6: Sweet Jasmine

I really like Chef. There needs to be more men like him. A gentleman under all circumstances, a man that can sweep you off your feet with simple conversations and have you ready to rip your own clothes off. LOl. I know it won't be an uncommitted relationship long, it only took him less than 24 hours to get there. Haha. 



Author's Response:

LOL, Sugar is stubborn. She thinks that by laying down her rules that she has everything under control, but Chef is smart, calculating, and utterly determined to bend to bend her boundaries, so he can get closer to her.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 30 2017
Title: Chapter 7: Hot Soup

This was funny, I'm glad she allowed him to come over and take care of her. I love how he handled Lance's trifling ass. You couldn't remember my birthday while we were married but now you can when you're married to someone else? Is there trouble in your jacked up paradise? I know this next chapter is going to be intense! And I'm all for it!!! She might not be sick after this honey!! LOl.

I'm glad you were able to get back into your classroom, they haven't let us yet. I'm sorry that you have to deal with a walking snake this year. Just focus on your kids, deal with her as little as you can. Hopefully you get a new grade level partner either mid-way through the year or after this year is over. Update soon! 



Author's Response:

After Chef hung up on him that second time, Lance was like:

lance mad lol

As for the two-legged snake, I'm shutting my door and teaching. I'm not even going to bat an eyelash in her direction unless we gotta do something together under principal orders.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 31 2017

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