Penname: Mjiki [Contact]

Real name: Zoleka

Member Since: September 15 2015

Membership status: Member

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[Reviews - 765]
Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78672
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021


Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Seconds from Disaster

I can't breathe,  my heart is shattered. I don't know how to feel, I'm scared of what might happen if Branden finds out what is sick twisted brother and grandfather did I'm afraid he might just give Diya's father the leverage he needs to get him out of Diya's life for good.

I'm so conflicted, I love Diya and Branden together, however, I hate how Branden refuses to acknowledge Diya's discomforts over his relationship with Marisol. It Kinda feels as if his forcing her to accept their relationship. 

I hope Diya seeks medical help and counselling after what happened to her. Ihope Diya and Branden heal because their relationship is turning toxic and I hope Marisol can accept that Branden can never be hers and allow him to find the love he deserves. 

Lol I feel like what I wrote doesn't make any sense at all 🤦🏾‍♀️. Looking forward to your next update, stay safe and blessed. 



Author's Response:

You too, Mjiki.

Your review makes perfect sense. Diya and Brandon clearly love each other, but are not effective at communicating their needs or setting firm, healthy boundaries for the people in their lives, including each other. Marisol will be a constant point of contention until Brandon realizes her attachment to him exceeds that of a normal friendship, even if her intentions are pure. And that's a big if. Rather than acknowledge that, he blindly defends the relationship and, in doing so, IS forcing Diya to accept it. And we all know that ain't gone work.

More on how it all falls down in the chapters to come...

Thanks for reading and sharing your insight, Mjiki!!!

Reviewer: Mjiki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2020

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[Reviews - 470]
Summary:

While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 54201
Read Count: 121651
Published: August 12 2015
Updated: March 02 2017


Title: Chapter 36: DAY 61

Is there going to be anotified update for this story. It's really interesting 

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Date: April 13 2019

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Summary:

Leviticus 20:21 states "And if a man shall take his brother's wife, it is an unclean thing: he hath uncovered his brother's nakednes; they shall be childless" Are circumstances different if said brother was a complete bastard? Let's explore what that verse really means.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 8565
Read Count: 1664
Published: October 23 2017
Updated: May 06 2018


Title: Chapter 1: THE BASTARD'S FUNERAL

Sage and I share a birthday, I love it already lol. Interested in seeing where your headed. 

Reviewer: Mjiki Signed
Date: October 23 2017

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.