Penname: hershey_kisses [Contact]

Real name: Victoria

Member Since: July 03 2008

Membership status: Member

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I am a Mississippi born and raised woman.  I am a joyful sometime sarcastic person as my sister would say i love my family and have a deep love for reading, working on computers and just being around my loved ones on first meeting i come off quiet but once i feel comfortable it is on and popping because i love to laugh and make people laugh!!!!!




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Good Things in a Small Package by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140135
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

uh after kayla passed away the woman that she learned all her digusting and rascist way from come from under a rock uh just sicking hope julian and amaris hand this witch her ass and run her back under the rock her snake ass slithered from i know julian and amaaris will protect little justine at all cost!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Thank You for this awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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Date: October 17 2011
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

oh damn trouble brewing for julian and maris already i know it will get better they just need to sit down and really talk to each other amaris needs to tell julian all her feeling of being thrown into a mother roll and just let it all out so they can continue to build a loving relationship...Joseph wants his woman and boys with him pronto i am sooo glad julian reigned his ass in when he started talkin about quitting school and shit i was like hold up and again i am loving julian he is for family 100% i mean he is getting his new ister n law an apartment and paying rent for  year so seleah and kids can move up where joseph is and dont have to worry about being attacked, harrased or robbed by any lowlifes agin whoo thank you for another wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Amaris is a little upset.  No wedding nite and no honeymoon.  Things do not always go as planned.  Yes, Joseph is right on insisting that Seleah relocate.  More is coming soon!

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Date: December 16 2011
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 31 Changes and Choices

uh that low excuse for a dog darrel is so f-cked up i the head he is just crazy following jamal trying to find out where he stays i mean damn so glad jamal had some good school friends who wouldnt give his ass no info and also alerted jamal to heis trifling ass loved that miss jada called the police on his creepy ass the police should have thrown his ass under the jail then but tht was all good because joseph and julian got a chance to tap that ass and his ass was knocked out and on his way to jail still but i feel that seleah is right about him being a slippery eel i know his dumb ass is cooking up more trouble even though seleah and the boys finally moved... anywhoo another wonderful update whoo still loving and adoring this story worth the wait all the way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: January 13 2012
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 32 Tell Me This Is A Dream

Wow i have being waiting on this update and wow it was about my new favorite couple all the way through I am soo glad that seleah and joseph had a talk about how she feels undeserving because of her past and i am happy that she is still going to a therapist woo they are such a wonderful couple and now joseph has given his love the ring its only a matter of time hopefully very soon that they will be married whooo love this story Thank You for the wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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Date: February 03 2012
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

Well worth the wait i am so happy that selena and joseph is finally married the wedding was awesome and loved that gerald gave seleah away... wow dem has sooo much bitterness its just sad but i am happy that he came to his mother wedding.  the honeymoon was just beautiful  joseph put it down for his lady love even though its been awhile for him and i see julian is not half stepping when it comes to his wife amaris either whooo Thank you for the wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: May 28 2012
ME&U by Elizablu
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 586]
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Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127257
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014

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Title: ME&U

oh my back to the old wonderful pics that you first put up i absolutly love it you absolutly rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yep, the original cast is back. I caught hell about changing the pics, people made sure to let me know that NUH-UH Don't Even...y'all love your girls so I had to bring them back.

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Date: September 12 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3...Part I

Absolutly love that mal broke that bitch darren face and that bitch francis time is coming she still hasnt learned; ok ginger scummy ass is getting her just when beeny sorry ass came and delivered that trick divorce paper it was so sweet and the finally hammer to that rotten nail was when beeny flashed that dirty piece of maggot sh*t the newspaper with a very beautiful pregrenant tabby with her loving jacewhoo ok you brought it on to third base with mal and coco who that was a little heat wave starting bt damn calise just had to come in for morning wake up ohhh dang it on that end absolutly love and adore this wonderful story of yours!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

So elated that you loved it! LOL...I wanted to show the people how Ginger and Benny was doing. CoCo and Mal have a while to go before they do the damn thing, but that doesn't mean that those two won't have any fun before the BIG BANG happen. thanks for reading!

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Date: September 12 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Pics.

of course we read the first chapter some pic changes was not gone to keep me away from reading this chapter and i must say it blew me away whoo you open with one hell of a bang and i can't wait til the pdate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

lol...I was just wondering...I'm glad that you liked the chapter!!! More craziness ahead!! thanks for reading.

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Date: September 03 2011
Title: ME&U

Damn as always your chapter leaves me wanting much much more oh whyyyyy can't we have more pleasssssssse i am begging for just one more update this week pleasssssssssssssssssssssssss filled with mal and coco anyway off the pleading and begging i really loved the update thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed it! I will try to put up an update by the end of week, if not then the new update will be up by the middle of next week. Thanks for reading!

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Date: November 08 2011
Title: ME&U

Oh my holy moley this chapter was wowwwwww Mal is just to lethal when it comes to loving his lady love i mean damn you have raised the writing of lovemaking scenes to the tenth power and its all because of this chapter whooo i give you around-the-clock applause, triple does of ooooh my and 2 snaps on this chapter just flawless as always with some scalding hott third degree burn kind of heat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO...I love your reveiws! Mal be putting it in! So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

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Date: May 01 2012
Title: ME&U

Oh my gosh the look in the past was just whoo unbelievable wow i was in tears when lundy came and got coco wow her evil mother left her in the hands of sickos uh that bitch deserve every vile thing that happens to her so freaking happy that lundy found lil coco in time before something terrible happen even more wow just completly blown away!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed the update. Sometimes to understand a person, gotta know the past. CoCo is a soldier, even then you can see that fiesty spirit, she had to fight even at such a young age. Mama Lundy was her angel. CoCo knew that Mama Lundy had a good soul, that's why she bestowed the title "nana" to her, because her Grandma Sang was her world. Thanks for reading!

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Date: September 19 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW WHAT A START SO OLD CHEF FOUND OUT HIS STOLEN FAMILY RECIPE HAS BEEN GIVEN AWAY BY HIS SLUT OF A WIFE WHOO AN ALSO ON THE MYSTERIOUS DVD WAS MALL SCREWING THE SLUT WHOO SOME WICKED SHIT IS COMING TOWARDS MS. I JUST KNOW IT!!!!!,; OK THAT NO MORAL HAVING SLUT LOOSE BOOTY TIME IS UP TIME TO WHOOP THAT ASS INTO SILENCE WHOO I KNOW COCO FEND TO GIVE HER WHAT SHE BEEN BEGGING FOR AND I CANT WAIT I ABSOLUTLY ADORE YOU FOR GRACING US WITH THE SECOND SERIS OF THIS WONDERFUL STORY WHOOO I AM SO EXCITED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!!! I bring the wickedness!! Guess what? Chef and his wife is just a small portion of Team Mal's problems...oh believe me there's more coming. ALB finna get her ass handed to her...it's been a long time coming. Hopefully CoCo can do it before someone calls Durbin on her. I'm so glad that you love this tale of my favorite couple. THanks for reading!!

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Date: September 02 2011
Title: ME&U

OH I SEE YOU CHANGE SOME OF THE CAST PICS ALTHOUGH I LOVED THE FIRST SET I CAN DEFINITLY FALL IN LOVE WITH THE NEW COCO AND TABBY AND JACE WHOO SOOOO FREAKING HAPPY, OVERYJOYED, CRAZY WITH EXCITMENT FOR THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I did change some of the pics, CoCo was different, but Tabby & Jace is the same people...just different lightning & pics.

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Date: September 02 2011
Title: ME&U

nice cast!!!!



Author's Response:

THanks!!

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Date: September 06 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

omg that punk delusional bitch darren punched coco oh my damn i was in rage i was soo freaking happy that mal beat that ass so bad that the sorry dog shit had to get taken to the hospital loving this story soooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Darren got dealt with the quickness...don't touch Mal's CoCo. Thanks for reading!

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Date: September 06 2011
Title: ME&U

Wow loved the update sooo Mals coco new roomie i know that room with be setting off heat signals and fire alarms whoo okAhbay is just super fine just to throw that in Thank You for another wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

So glad that you loved it! Yep, The heat that will generate off of that room...WHEW!! I don't think I'm ready...Ahbay is a sexy one!! Thanks for reading!

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Date: October 23 2011
Title: ME&U

Whoooo sooooo freaking happy that you didn't snatch this fantastic story I mean this story is just one of a kind you could have wrote a two line update and it would have gotten five stars because that's just how spectacular I think your writing is whoo mal and coco with ass cheeks dents on a expensive car is just too hott for words love this story and thanks for the wonderful update!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was a very rough patch,but I'm back. Thanks for reading!

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Date: April 05 2012
Title: ME&U

Oh my gosh all i can say is damn pretty much mind blown after what mal the man put on coco!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Mal is the man!!! Thanks for reading!

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Date: October 14 2011
Title: ME&U

ok i had a rant for all the sick and trifling mofos at the start of this chapter but damn Mal and Coco love scence knocked the damn rant right out of me and left me breathles and partially speechless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Damn wonderful end to an chapter whoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

HELLO MISSISSIPPI!!! I had ran across your page and saw that you were a fellow 'sippian also. YEA! I would have loved to have read that rant about the sick & trifiling mofos. Mal & CoCo are the truth, huh?! So glad that you enjoyed it and thanks for reading!

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Date: January 11 2012
Title: ME&U

Wow this update was spectacular and quite the eye opener about tony true feelings for calise whoo I just love this story!!!!!



Author's Response:

So glad that you are enjoying it. Thanks for reading.

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Date: June 03 2012
In The Eyes of the Beholder by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80849
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012

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Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Oh my gosh prom night was just an explosion of heat all the years of build up and just wow and can i say the dress loreila wore was just beautiful whoo micah learning tutorial taught him well!!!!!Thank you for the wonderful update........................



Author's Response:

Micah is so in love with Lei and he wanted to make the weekend memorable for both of them.  The weekend isn't over with yet.  More to come soon.

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Date: October 20 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Sabrina and teddy lee are still heating it up.. oh my so it look like the blue nervous might be coming back on micah face but i know that if it does lorelie will still be in love with him. ok whf is wrong with ronald sick ass he needs to stay far away from lorelie i just no that he has nothing but sick and bad things going through his mind!!!!Thank You for another wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: October 29 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Wow what an wonderful chapter it was good for loreil to know how much her dad loved her even though he didnt show it whoo micah is just to fine in those pics you posted and beth stank ass got a rude awaking that she is not as hott as she think she is whoo mercy lei and micah are just hott!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: December 09 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Oh my gosh just like i knew you would with this chapter you blew my mind whoo micah and lei are some freaky in love people and i love it wow it was so mature of lei to say that they should go out and get to know other people but only share their love between them whoo their loving was just explosive!!!!!(need ice)



Author's Response:

Alright, I admit that the muse has a freaky side.  LOL .  My mind can accept most things that are just between two people in love.  More to come soon!

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Date: October 22 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pictures

love the pictures and i know i will love the story also your like king Midas every story your write turns to gold in my heart whoo truly adore your stories!!!!!

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Date: September 29 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.