Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

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I just love to read.




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Right Place, Wrong Time by Bryleigh Lisette
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 101]
Summary:

Leslie West is a quiet beautiful southern belle who just moved up to New York, Blake Caldron is a fashion guru who can't seem to keep his eyes off of a new church attendee. Due to certain circumstances he needs to watch from a far... But for how long?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 28720
Read Count: 33058
Published: August 14 2011
Updated: December 31 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Hello New York

Someone had better tell Leslie that that fool is married, because tells me that he won't.  Why did he marry her if his parents weren't crazy about her?  Just crazy. I can't wait to read more.

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Date: August 14 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Don't Let It Break Your Heart

It is about that those woke up and smelled the coffee.  I hate that the baby died but it was for the best.  I still had my doubts that the baby was his, Kim was a liar and can't be trusted. But hey he is free from that ho!!!!  Yay

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Date: November 14 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Feel It In The Air

Marco is insane and she shoukd feel guilty brcause Blake warned her bout Marco but you didn't listen.  The has a pathological hate of Blake and dated accepted his ring anyway. Dumb, dumb ditty! 

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Date: December 31 2013
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Time in Italy

Marco is fine. but Leslie's in love with Blake!!!  Marco's father is crazy!!!  Blake destroyed the trust that Leslie had put in him, he will have to work hard to earn that back.  His father told him to start divorce proceedings,  This is going to get ugly, I know it.  I love this story!!!

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Date: August 20 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Every Tear Drop is A Waterfall

Leslie didn't handle that well, Blake has every right to be angry at her.  I am wondering if Leslie really knows what she wants.  SHe knew that it was a possibility that the baby was his, so I don't understand want her problem is.  Hopefully being with her family will help her to know what she wants and if she really wants Blake.  I am really not feeling Leslie right now, she is making my teeth itch again.

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Date: October 27 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Oh Wow

I really don't like Marcello anymore, he's jealous that Blake has Leslie.  I really hope that Leslie isn't going to do or say anything stupid but something tells me she will.  I want her to maintain her faith and love in Blake.  Blake wanted that baby so he would kill Kim, besides they were getting a divorce anyway.  Marcello on the other hand was angry because Kim's messed his trying to get Leslie.  Marcello is crazy like fox!!  Love this update!!!!

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Date: November 23 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- I'll be there

Leslie is working my last nerve, she is some timey.  Marco is crazy and Blake is going to be frame and all because both Kim and her were stupid. Leslie this is all your fault.  I wish that Blake had recorded that conversation with Marco though.  This is going to be bad!

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Date: January 28 2012
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Feel It In The Air

I am so glad to see this story return but it ended so quickly. I am going to reread this from the beginning to refresh my memory. Good stuff!



Author's Response:

ended? it's far from over! haha

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Date: July 04 2013
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Claiming Mina by crocuslady
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 332]
Summary:

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Lucas Spaulding waited three years before he could claim his woman his mother brought into their privilaged home. She swore that she would never leave, now it looks like she needs to be reminded who she belongs to. she's on notice. Lucas is on the hunt and he doesn't intend to play fair.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: The Alphas of Spaulding Inc.
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 41598
Read Count: 74122
Published: August 17 2011
Updated: July 26 2012

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Although I like this story, I am still troubled by the age difference especially now that he's telling about being dominant.  That growling was sexy though!!  I hope that they are able to protect Mina because she's stupid!!  Great update!!



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Date: May 02 2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am trying to read this story, but the age difference is really bothering me!!  That grown man is lusting after a child.  I have a niece that is 14 and this story just scares me.

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Date: August 17 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Who did she call?  This is going to drive me crazy.  How did that phone help her to stand on her own two feet?  At 18 you may be considererd an adult by law but you not fully adult until you are 21, she is a little playing at being grown.  She will regret that phone call, and only Lucas will be able to save her.

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Date: April 29 2012
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, who did she call?  I smell trouble, the shit is about to hit the fan!!  Mina  is about get hurt and it won't be Lucas but the her adopted mother.  Looking forward to reading more.

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Date: April 28 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Cast Pics

Great update! It seems that Mina has been claimed. That was hot!! More please!

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Date: April 27 2012
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Good Things in a Small Package by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 670]
Summary:

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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140135
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11 There Really Is No Place Like Home II

Now, Brenda you know that you are wrong for this.  Please let Daniel be okay, I am expecting HEA's for both couples.  Tamera you wasted so much time playing that game with Daniel.   I understand how Amaris feels, I was often embarrassed by family.    In my immediate family it was my oldest brother, I didn't claim him for many years.  I can't wait to read what happens next.  So Amaris does acknowledge Selah's jealousy.  I love Mark and Jayla they are good people.  Her mama and Selah need Jesus and need to drowned in a whole vat of holy water!! This chapter hurt my heart, please don't kill off Daniel!!



Author's Response:

Now pmgayles, there's nothing like a little angst to keep things interesting.  LOL.  I like Daniel too much to let him go and baby does need a daddy!

The difference between Mama Paula and Seleah is that Mama just like to have fun and Seleah likes money.  

Remember what Mark said about her.  LOL

 

Thanks for the review.  More to come soon.

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Date: September 11 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Seleah should be run over by a mack truck, Demaris would be better off without her. Seleah other crumb snatchers would be better off without her as well.  Tamera is really stepped up and I am impressed.  She is actually behaving like a woman in love should.  I love Daniel, I am glad to see him fighting his way back to Tam.  I love this story!!!

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Date: September 16 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

Shit is about to hit the fan, Seleah ain't ready for the truth to come out but it will.  When the truth comes out it won't be pretty, but everyone will understand Seleah's major malfunction.  Daniel is too funny, a peanut butter condom!!!  I rolled.  I am so happy that they are working it out.  But it was stupid to take someone elses viagra.  Brenda you have made my day!!



Author's Response:

LOL a friend of mine told me that she came home from work and found her husband sitting inthe bedroom (uh where else couldhe go, they have kids!) and he was hard as a brick because he tried out a viagra pill.  The man has no sexual malfunctions!  She was dumbfounded and she said he was hard all evening andthe rest of the night.  LOL and he was lucky that it went down by morning.  Yall know I don't have that much imagination.  Reality is so much better.  LOL

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Date: September 20 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

I don't like that bitch Seleah!!!  Now I've got that off my chest I feel so much better.  Tam what a way to tell the man that you are pregnat, but has she been to the doctor yet?  Seleah is user and I do hope that Julian doesn't fall the banana in the tail pipe.  That ho needs to woman up!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  You must know a Seleah type.  I'm glad you feel better.  Yes, the girl is a piece of work to be sure.  She is jealous of her little sistah!  Tam has an appointment coming up.  Thanks for the review.

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Date: September 09 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21 Road to Recovery

Wow, Joseph actually got Seleah to go to church and she went down for altar prayer!!!  Dem bless his little heart he is still so hurt and confused.  I am so glad that he went to see Tam who set the young straight.  Yes, they your momma lied to you about Gerald being your father.  But in every since of the  word he was and is your father.    Your mom was raped as a child and that trumps your being lied to, she gave you love and made sure  that you were surrounded by love.  She gave you to Amaris, so that when she let the circumstances of your birth got to her, you still received love.

Dem let them back into your life, they love you. To top it off you brought Amaris' father back into the picture. Lord this story just gets better with each Chapter.  You rock!!!!



Author's Response:

Dem just needed to talk out his feelings, so who better than Aunt Tam to be a sounding board.

I think he will heed Tam's advice and make up with his family.  

Thanks for the review! More to come soon!

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Date: October 04 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3 Seeing the Real You

Julian had an ephinany!!  I am glad that he is going to try and forgive his sperm donor and his sons.  So he can freely love and be loved in return.  I can't wait to read his conversation with his mom.  She will be estatic!!  Great chapter!!  I love how both Amaris and Tam told each other the truth about themselves.  I am glad that they have each other.

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Date: August 23 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2 Leaving Your Comfort Zone

That was sexy as all get out!!!  Tamera has met her match and I love it.

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Date: August 23 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

I forgot to mention Amaris, that poor living in house full a ho's.  She might as well live a brothel like Richard Pryor was born in.   I know that she will be happy to move to DC.  I am very glad that she had someone in her corner.  Paula loves her but she and her daughters aren't setting a good example for Amaris.  I can't to read about the good times that are coming Julian's and Amaris's way.

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Date: August 22 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1 The Size of Things

That was good, Tamera is a hot mess!!!  Julian wants him some Amaris!!!!  This was good!!!

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Date: August 22 2011
Title: Good Things in a Small Package

Me likey the premise, I can't wait to start reading!!!

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Date: August 22 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

I can't say that I blame Julian, I wouldn't have given that fool my kidney especially with the way he had treated him his whole life.  Now he wants to call him son, Julian get on with your life. !!! I can't wait to read more!!

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Date: August 22 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7 Learning You All Over Again

Daniel is going to regret those words, and Tamera would well be in her rights never forgive him or take him back.  That is except for the baby that she maybe carrying.  It wouldn't be right for her not to tell the Daniel.  Selah is an *itch!!!  How could you send your child away with no money and no place to live? Just becasue you're family it doesn't mean that you can take advantage of them.  I don't like her sisters or mother!!  They make my teeth itch!!



Author's Response:

Seleah is very self centered.  Amaris steps in a lot of times because she loves her nephews!  Daniel has a lot of making up to do and Tam will not take him back that easily!  Thanks for the review.

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Date: September 04 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.