Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

Membership status: Member

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I just love to read.




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Return To Me by chocolate470
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 105]
Summary:

For long as she can remember, Mika's life revolved around work and home until her research into the Ozuno clan changed her world forever. A ninja assassin named Raizo unexpectedly entered her life then quickly disappeared. Could a new assignment bring about his return?

Disclaimer:

All publicly recognized characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The plot is the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 38881
Read Count: 25756
Published: October 26 2011
Updated: October 01 2013

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Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That was hot and sexy!!!!  I love me some Rain!!!



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles,

Definitely his hot bod would drive any woman wild. I've always felt he has the strength to hold a woman in any sexual position ;) Thanks for your continued support of my support! Loved and enjoyed your review!

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Date: March 03 2013
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ryan is so stupid, he doesn't realize the insanity that he has involved himself in and Rai I won't be able to save him.  I am so glad to see that fine Raizo loving Mikaand Mika loving Raizo.  So awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for all the support you've given me throughout this story. I'm so grateful and it keeps me going and giving me the will to write the next update - Thanks! I believe the next update will mark the conclusion of this story.

Raizo and Mika loving of course was the highlight of this update :)

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Date: April 11 2013
Retired
Sick by TheSouthernScribe
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 114]
Summary:

 

Wren Blue didn't do mornings...

 

Especially when she found herself as the fourth victim in a twisted killer's game.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Femslash, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 19929
Read Count: 15745
Published: November 09 2011
Updated: February 26 2012

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Title: Chapter 3: Unraveling the Mystery

This is so good, when are they going to find her?  I hope that they find her before Ryan rapes her.



Author's Response:

Questions will be answered soon...promise

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Date: November 10 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Strike Zone

That is not going to end well for Avery!!!  She's geting therapy but since she is not talking to her therapists she will never heal!!!  I can't stand that defense attorney she and her client need  to hit by a bus!!!  More please!!!

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Date: January 02 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Preliminary Hearing

Therapy doesn't seem to helping her, it won't help if won't talk about it.  She may have real feelings the River, however until she is right within herself she shouldn't be in any relationship.  She has been unfaithful to Avery  and he doesn't deserve that.  I can't wait to read more!!

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Date: December 20 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Fear Factor

Whatever bad thing happens to Camille she deserves it.  I want Donner to rot in hell!!!  I can't wait to read more.

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Date: January 09 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Wake Up Call

This fool is crazy, and yet Avery still doesn't have proof that Wren was kidnapped.  Avery, I can help you through this rough time!!  I want this Ryan person dead!!

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Date: November 18 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Layer by Layer

Avery sweetie an adult needs to be gone for 24 hours in order to be considered missing.  They are wasting valuable time, but you need to calm down.  Maddie is now on your side and will fight the good fight with you.  Great update!!

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Date: November 21 2011
Title: Chapter 11: The Final Threads of Sanity

Wow, this therapy ain't helping becasue Wren doesn't want to release the pain.  Wren if you don't want Avery anymore then let him go!!  If you want your life back you need to truly embrace your therapy to heal.  Wren you didn't want what Donner did to you, if you are thinking that then he won.  I need more of this story please!!!

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Date: January 20 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Seek And You Will Find...

Wren is such a mess, she's going to therapy but useless she wants to get better.  Let Avery go, becasue you are only hurting him Wren.

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Date: February 07 2012
A Perfect Fit by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 245]
Summary:

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Maximillian Peterson was a man who appeared to have everything...looks, money and good health.  There was just one little problem...he was lacking where he thought it mattered most.  Selma Bloomfield was a widow who hadn't had sex in five years. She and Maxie had hit it off, but he was hesitant in taking their relationship to consummation.  How would Selma take it when she discovers Maxie's "little" secret?

A Perfect Fit is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57110
Read Count: 39394
Published: November 10 2011
Updated: April 20 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was freaking awesome Brenda1257!!!  Maxie deserves to find the woman that fit him to a tee and Selma deserved to be loved once again.   That was sexy as hell!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, PM:  Maxie found his perfect fit.  I may bring them back in the future.

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Date: November 10 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Kelly is now working her asset!!!    Russell is such a punk Melza still makes him speechless.  Somehow I had the feeling the Hope would turn out to be Melza's daughter.  Brenda you rock!!!

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Date: November 17 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

When he confronts Selma that conversation is not going to go well.  Selma theman deserves to know that you are pregnant with his baby.  You are being selfish, loving you shouldn't keep him from being a father.  Now that you are pregnant you might as well carry that baby to term and marry the man.  Brenda this is so awesome, I am so glad that she got pregnant.  God don't like ugly Selma, and your attitude about having more children was ugly. God showed and Brenda showed you!!  LOL



Author's Response:

Selma is scared and not thinking straight.  More is coming!

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Date: November 13 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I forgot to mention what an ahole her late husband was, he was truly selfish.  He wanted to recieve but didn't want to give dying was what he deserved!!



Author's Response:

Stephen Sr. did have issues.  thanks for the review.

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Date: November 19 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I don't know how I feel about Maxie's family,  Rowland and Michigan seem to good people.  But Russell is a ahole!!!  Selma's boys need a good old fashioned ass whooping for that behavior.  Selma knew that Maxie wanted children so why waste his time if you don't want the same thing.  Maxie deserves to be father to children that come from his loins.  They need to sit down and have a serious conversation and she needs to let him go so that he can find a woman that wants to more children.  Brenda you are a rock star!!

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Date: November 11 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Russel the ahole as struck again, the jealousy is eating him up.  Russell is such a punk, I am waiting on Maxie to beat him like he stole his dollar especially with the way he is drooling over Selma.  I hope that Russel doesn't do anything stupid as Maxie will kill him if he lays one finger on Selma.  Russell is so disrepectful and angry at himself for not pursuing a sister.  He keeps saying that he loves Kelly but he never said that he was happy with her and his life.  Russell you are such a wuss!!!  Thank you Brenda for another amazing chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review PM.  Yes Russ has some issues, but he and Maxie are going to lay their cards on the table, real soon.

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Date: November 16 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Another baby, that was awesome!!!  I love Maxie and Selma as a couple, they loved each other so hard and their children equally as hard.  Stephen is stepping up to the plate marrying Vivian.  I just hope that they really loved each other as marrying for any other reason is just plain crazy.  Marriage is hard enough but starting out a marriage with a baby is even rougher.  Great ending, although I do hope that you revist them in the future!!

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Date: April 20 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Maxie went straight caveman, he man and Selma is his woman!!!  I love it!!!  Selma the man loves and is concerned about your safety and everyone knows that malls around the holidays isn't safe.  Maxie you did that damn thing and made her eyes roll to the back of her head!!  That was hot!!  Brenda you are so awesome!!



Author's Response:

that's right.  Maxie wants to protect what's his!

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Date: November 19 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Maxie told her about herself, and it was good!!!  Stephen needs to apologize to his momma and Maxie both, he also needs to tell his momma about his father cheating.  Stephen Sr. was a low-down, dirty dog who needed to nuertered or is it spayed.  I don't like man, his getting diabeties and dying was karma coming back to bite him in the ass. Which was well deserved if you ask me!!!!



Author's Response:

Stephen is not going to tell his mother about his father.  He doesn't want to cause her any more pain.  I think Selma knows some of what went on with her husband, she's just not sharing it with her children.  Thanks for the review. More to come soon!

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Date: November 14 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Stanley is going to have to die and I mean soon!!!  Selma don't owe you a damn thing Stanley, and she should have let Maxie choke him.  There is nothing wrong with a little violence.  Some people need to be forced into an understanding and Stanley is once of those people.  I want to see Maxie beat Stanley and beat him good.



Author's Response:

Uh-oh PM...

I'm going to have to keep my eye on you.  "nothing wrong with a little violence"  indeed!  LOL

See, now you've given Maxie permission to snap Stanley's neck...

 

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Date: November 22 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Brenda you are so awesome, I am so happy to read one of my favorite stories by one of my favorite authors!!!  You rock!!  Selma and Maxie got married, yay!!!  Selma has made Maxie so happy, she have given him everything that he has ever wanted.  I am waiting for that troll Stanley to show up and try to get what doesn't belong to him. 

 

You made my day, Brenda!! Have a great week!!!



Author's Response:

Stanley didn't know about the wedding.  He is going to show up again and I am sure Maxie is going to take care of the situation. 

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Date: December 05 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Selma, you are tripping!!!  Maxie loves you and your dirty draws.  He just wants you to take care of yourslef and holding in all that anger was not good for you or the babies.  I am so glad that they had twins, so now Maxie gets boy and girl.  Selma has some strong genes as those babies didn't get any of Maxie's that is noticeable.  I hope that he doesn't let that racist womans comments intrude on his happiness.  This chapter was so good and nice and long.  Thank you Brenda!!



Author's Response:

LOL  You are so funny!  Maxie does love him some Selma.  Her hormones were making her cranky and weepy. Now that the babies are here, Maxie just wants to enjoy being a father.  More to come soon!

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Date: December 12 2011
Lotus Flower Bomb by nikki
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

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When shannon mckinleys finds herself at a new high school she doesnt know what to do or what will happen. She believes in love at first sight and when she meets Conner, the head football captain and boy of her dreams she couldnt be more happier. Hes charming, sexy, athletic, and everythig shes every wanted in a guy. But what happens when Racheal Truman, queen bee of the school and Conners ex tries to sabatoge their love for her own benifit. Will the stay together or fall apart? And what will happen when they find out something is not right in the suburban paradise.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers o any media franchise. No copyright infringement is inteneded.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2114
Read Count: 26491
Published: November 13 2011
Updated: January 07 2019

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Title: Lotus Flower Bomb

Wow, a castle in america and Mickey Mouse doesn't live there. LOL  I knewt it, Connor is her mate and the Alpha, with his fine self.  I hope that it comes to her soon before something bad happens!!



Author's Response: I know right lol I want to live there and I hope it come to her soon too but I'm just the writer its their story. Thank you for the review!!

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Date: January 04 2012
Title: Lotus Flower Bomb

Shannon is dreamwalking and I love it.  Why is she so attitudinal?  She talked to her grandmother in dream she should be happy.  Why the hell did she pass out and please tell me that she ain't dead?  Does it have anything to do with seeing her grandmother in her dream?  Damn no one got smacked down in this chapter!!  Thank you the this chapter I really loved it!!!



Author's Response:

That wasn't a dream she saw her great grandmother in, she was actually there this time. The attidude came from when she was being brushed off by her father then to come to practice and find out she's not allowed to practice with the others plus you gotta remember the night before when her parents got on her about being with Conner lol. I can promise you she is not dead but think about what was going on in the vision she had and how similar it is to a certain event someone else went through hint hint ;) Glad you loved it!

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Date: November 27 2013
Title: Lotus Flower Bomb

I so love this, I am big fan of paranormal stories. Love vampiries and werewolves!



Author's Response: Thank you I love them too thats what made me want to write one.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: December 26 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.