Penname: EvilAngelfish [Contact]

Real name: Crystal Bass

Member Since: November 02 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio: A med student who used to be a writer/editor and sometimes still gets that itch...


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Crossing the Finish Line by wisedec4u
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214692
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014

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Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I really like this story so far, and would love to see where you're going to go with it.

 Reviewer: EvilAngelfish Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2010
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Obsidian In Bloom by Ioneha
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
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Nadia of West Mississippi found out she was a princess but her kingdom was in Japan,the crown jewels were stolen,her knights were thugs and the family was only treated like royalty.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: With Love,Demeter
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6537
Read Count: 2614
Published: March 17 2012
Updated: May 29 2012

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Title: Chapter 2: His Duty

I'm a fan of your other work and I was really pleased to see an update of this story - it's really a twist to have the long-lost father be a crime lord. Nadia doesn't seem to be handling it very well. I do have a question that kinda been bugging me since the beginning. I am curious as to why you chose 'Aiko' as your male main character's name. I've never seen it used as a guy's name before. Is it an ironic nickname?



Author's Response:

Thank you so so much! I'm trying to update this story faster than I started off. The idea actually came from a daydream I had so it's a little easier to write it out. 

As for Aiko,I was wondering when someone would say something about him. For some reason,I needed Aiko to have a quirk and since I couldn't stain his militant-like attitude,I decided to make American girls a weakness (:P) and give him a girly name. 

But now that you say it,it IS rather ironic. 

 Reviewer: EvilAngelfish Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2012

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