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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


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Summary:

 

COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 284084
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 9: Sweet Talk

Miles is a real good photographer, but then again, the subject is hella impressive. DAMN. This man. I see now that I can't eat or drink while reading this book. hee



Author's Response:

Read at your own risk, chica! LOL 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07 2017

Title: Chapter 10: Hot Affair

“Then what is he then, Shug?

He's none of your damn busy with your little nosey ass. Mallory makes ME want to hit him on Shug's behalf. He should be doing his job and stop acting like a damn man-child. So glad that Shug docked the little shit's paycheck. He needs to learn. He's got the nerve to complain about Helena. Although, Hel seems to be a little "extra", but she makes me laugh, so, OK.  Lory is a pain, but, what are little brothers good for but to get on your last nerve. He does love his big sis for sure. I can't wait for him to become a fully formed man. HA

Sully, honey, he is a force. It will be interesting to see what happens when he meets Miles. Too much fineness in one room. whew.

Miles Thibodeau, TAKEN. Alright now. Shug, pay attention. EVERYTHING says this man is SERIOUS about you. HA.

So Shug, do you always buy special lingerie, drive like a bat out of hell and rush around getting ready for a thing? Just asking for future reference. And your reaction, heart paps, all this tension, for a thang? Sure, Shug. Keep telling yourself that. You'll prolly be chanting that when you're walking down the aisle to marry Miles. And more chanting when you and Miles welcome your first born. HA

Compare and contrast, Lance, who has the outer trappings of being a gentleman, while Miles IS one, treating Shug as someone that he respects and cherishes. Lance, who uses words to denigrate and teardown Shug, while Miles uses words to affirm Shug. Her reaction to Chef, playfully, saying that he was mad at her was telling. That ex-husband of hers tried to do a real number on her.

Chef, that man makes sure that there in no ambiguity with Shug. whew

I see I'll have to add to my list of things not to have in my mouth when I'm reading this book, my dental appliance. That thing prevents me from laughing my ass off and screaming. Maybe, I just want put ANYTHING in my mouth when reading this. HA

Yep, Lance sure knows how to pick 'em. Karma, thy name is Renard.  kmsl.

You have a gift, Chica. You really do. Thanks so much for the update. It'll hold me over until the next one. Shug, letting her freak flag fly? I'm so there for that. hee.

re: that delusional collegue of yours, stay the course.



Author's Response:

Stop putting things in your mouth when you read, woman! I need you alive, but you're so right about Sugar doing all those extra steps to get ready for Miles for this date, LMAO. She went the extra extra extra mile to make sure that she's ready for "a thing". She's in denial, but she'll learn. Miles and Lance are compltely night and day, but because she's only ever been with one man most of her life, she'll always compare Miles to Lance even though she shouldn't. :<

 

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Date: August 13 2017

Title: Chapter 11: Sugary Sweet

I'm seating here laughing, 'cause Chef and Sugar just created a little Chef or Chefette. Hee

Sugar is going to be worn out with Chef proving her wrong. kmsl.

Love the update, Chica.



Author's Response:

There may or may not be a little Chef or Chefette. I cannot confirm or deny. 

trying not to laugh

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Date: October 29 2017

Title: Chapter 18: Bitter Pretending

Sooo, "pretending", huh? Riiight. Chef has been straightforward. Shug is "coming" around.

Perfect chapter. I was howling. But, Helena is scaring me. This could've turned out so differently. She must not watch the crime shows on the ID channel. I hope that he used protection. She doesn't know what kind of diseases this dude might have. Reckless. I'm going to have to go back and re-read the previous chapters and pay closer attention to Helena. There's some sh!t going on with that girl that has nothing to do with Lory, it seems.

You delivered better than Amazon, Chica. Great update.



Author's Response:

I left a lot of breadcrumbs about Helena in a few previous chapters. If you are interested, read: Sour Sisters, Salty Reunion, Hot Soup, Yummy Cake, Hot Affair (Sugar/Lory conversation), and Juicy Sausage. 

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Date: April 01 2018

Title: Chapter 19: Sour Surprises

YAY! I'm hoping that Chef is right. I hope that they are pregnant and that she carries to term. Your dialogue is so clever, funny and poignant. Brillant job, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! You know I love playful banter!

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Date: May 07 2018

Title: Chapter 25: Bitter Pill

Yes, it is a mighty bitter pill, but one that he needed. I feel so bad for Miles. Rene did more harm than good by keeping this secret for so long. However, this was not going to be easy no matter when he spilled the beans, but he should've done it sooner for Miles' sake. Now, not only does Miles have to deal with the past but also what his current reality is since Rene finally told the truth. I'm hoping that Miles doesn't turn away from Sugar. No way, especially with a child on the way. That abandonment would be a repeat of what was done to him by his parental units.

Has Miles seen a therapist? With all of this piling on, he'll need some psychological help.

On a more real note, I don't care that Rene is in the hospital, I'd like to punch him in the throat. And bust Clara's kneecaps while I'm at it.

Brillant execution of a well written chapter, Chica.



Author's Response:

Counseling is in the cards for Miles. Stay tuned. LMAO @ "punch him in the throat." 

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Date: September 09 2018

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Summary:

 

Emmeline Carson always had a crush on Jason Bryant, but feelings would eventually change, when she became involved with his best friend. When her heart is broken, she swore off anyone who had ties to her ex—including Jason. Yet, a chance meeting leads to an embroiled love affair that is kept secret and locked away inside each other’s respective bedrooms. And although Jason and Emmeline have their own secrets, they will soon find out they aren’t the only ones.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 68048
Read Count: 13851
Published: September 08 2017
Updated: April 16 2021


Title: Chapter 4: The First Secret

Wow! I resisted reading this as I thought it was going to be about infidelity. This is so much more. I knew that Brendan had a thing for Emmeline, how else do you explain his intense over the top dislike for her. Their "story" is so much more interesting to me than what's going on with Jason.

It was only until the beginning of this last chapter that I started to suspect what was really going on with Troy and Becca. Goodness, what havoc the sperm donor has wrecked in their lives and the "mother" is just as complicit. Special place in hell for those two.

I'm liking this story. Waiting for the next update and to see what the hell else is going to happen. Good update, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08 2018

Title: Chapter 7: Reunion

You are doing a really good job with this story.

I really don't like Michael or any of his friends. They were complicit in the deceit. He can miss me with his self-righteousness. I mean, he did marry his side-piece. Shouldn't all be great in the garden? What a pig.

I haven't connected with Jason and I think that Emme needs to get as far away from these toxic group of people as possible. Those people are not her friends and I can't see them having her best interest at heart.

I'm really interested in finding out more about Brendan. I'm not sure why I'm so drawn to him. I hope he doesn't turn out to be a stalker. I just see him as someone who can't come to terms with his feelings for someone who his family would not approve, given his family's apparent history regarding black folks.  He's been carrying that torch for a very long time.

The stuff with Mrs. Chambers, now that's some deep and freaking stuff. I can't wait to find out what that is all about.

Keep doing it, 'cause you are killing it. Great updates, Chica.

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Date: July 24 2018

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Summary:

Bumping into an old childhood friend might be exactly what Caitlyn needs, and Duncan Everston can still make her smile. Can an unexpected lunch turn into more? Or should the past remain exactly that...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19677
Read Count: 2980
Published: October 09 2017
Updated: November 13 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love little Caitlyn and little Duncan. Their conversation was too cute. Enjoyable read.



Author's Response:

Hi BellaChica,

Hope things are great with you. Glad to hear you enjoyed the short.

K.

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Date: October 10 2017

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

lovely.

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Date: October 10 2017

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Summary:

Daphne Gregory is on the run. She's looking for a place to lay low until things calm down back home. When she lands in Oklahoma, the last thing she expects to find is a friend in resident playboy Landon Phelps.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Outlander
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 53311
Read Count: 22109
Published: November 15 2017
Updated: October 03 2019


Title: Chapter 23: September 2011: The Exes

I wonder if that family of Todd is behind this. Blaming her for him killing his crazy behind.

Please don't let Daphne be an idiot and poo poo the real danger she's in. She's walking around unaware of her surroundings,  That's a good way to become a victim.

Nice updates.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstar
Date: April 23 2019

Title: Chapter 23: September 2011: The Exes

I clicked the wrong rating on my review. Not sure how I messed that up. 🤔

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Date: April 23 2019

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Summary:

Fourteen years after his twin brother's suicide Brian Callaghan has to face all the guilt and emotions that he's been carrying for years head on. An unlikely companion from high school Mahalia Evans is there to see him through.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 18262
Read Count: 2622
Published: January 05 2018
Updated: March 08 2018


Title: Chapter 2: REASON WHY

Good story.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07 2018

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Summary:

Ethan West has never been one to control his wolf, he let his instincts rule and they never failed him. Until his wolf insisted on marking Mia Kane as his mate. Maybe it wouldn't have been so bad if Mia wasn't a human. Ethan despised humans and taking one as a mate was the last thing he wanted to do.

Mia Kane should be living her best life, her music career took off, she won a Grammy for best new artist and she was selling out arenas all over the world. Life was perfect except for the fact that she tragically lost her family in an accident the night of the awards show. When the whirlwind was over her best friend and manager Elizabeth Jones forces her to take some down time at her parent's bed and breakfast. When Ethan shifts and bites her, her life takes an unexpected turn for the worst.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 28478
Read Count: 67156
Published: January 22 2018
Updated: July 08 2019


Title: Chapter 3: New Reality

I'm enjoying this story. When Ethan appears before Mia, I hope Mia knocks his behind out. She's about to go thru some things. I guess Ethan knows now that he needs to control his wolf a little better. I want to punch him.

Great job, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thank you ma'am! Ethan may be an Alpha but he has a lot to learn.

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Date: February 09 2018

Title: Chapter 4: The Change

While I'm willing to give Beth a pass on events PRIOR to Ethan losing his damn mind, the way she handled Mia AFTER, NOPE, she's making decisions what she tells Mia without any regard to what Mia might want. It seems to me it's more about Beth than about Mia. Beth being uncomfortable with how Mia will react. Mia seems to be a strong person, yet Beth seems to want to treat her as if she's this fragile dove. At some point, after this change is done, Mia needs to have a talk with Miss Beth.

Now for that so called alpha, I hope that once Mia goes through the change that she becomes a force to be reckoned with. I hope that she rips Ethan a new one, in more ways than one. This woman is going thru hell because he can't control his behind and then runs away like the coward that he is. And he can miss me with the growling because Shawn might be taking care of what is his responsibility.  Shawn is there and helping Mia as best that he can. He's more of a mate to Mia than Ethan is at this point.

Ethan has me heated. hee

Thank you for the good update. It just makes me want the next one even sooner. No pressure. :)



Author's Response:

Yeah she definitely cant with hold information directly related to Mia and her personal life. its not fair.  Shawn is stepping up to the plate for sure. ethan should watch out thats how people get replaced. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2018

Title: Chapter 5: The Next Day

I'm glad that Mia talked to Beth in a reasonable and calmed manner. It just made what she said that much more devastating. Beth needs to internalize what Mia said in a real way. I'm not seeing it yet. Hopefully, Beth will be able to put herself in Mia's place and see how she would feel. That's something that it's not clear to me that she's done yet.

Ethan, still an ass. Will continue to be one in the forseeable future. I'm looking forward to his first interaction with Mia.

How is he even surprised at the response from his family. I'm with his father, he is not ready to be alpha.

I still want to hit him in the throat, after I've cut off his naughty bits. :)

Loving this story.



Author's Response:

LOL not cut off his naughty bits!! thanks for reading.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26 2018

Title: Chapter 6: Pack House

All right now, Mia. Get your training and beat the hell out of your so-called mate. You need to teach him a lesson that he won't forget.

While I still want to do harm to Ethan, I'm looking forward to his growth as an Alpha, 'cause homie is a loose cannon right now. He can't seem to control himself and that's not the hallmark of a good Alpha, I would think. I'm looking forward to Mia's training and learning what a Luna does and how important she will become to the pack.

Shawn is a good friend to Ethan and becoming a good one to Mia. So glad that he popped Ethan, but I want it to be Mia that really whups that ass. Can you imagine how bad Ethan will feel if he finally resolves his human adversion and comes to accept Mia as his mate?

CB, I'm sure you'll be able to bring us along during Ethan's journey and also Mia's journey and, subsquently, their journey together. I'm looking forward to their separate journeys and their journey together, if that is your ultimate goal. I'm not counting Ethan out just yet. Yeah, he's an el primo ass, but that doesn't mean that he can't change. We'll see.

Enjoying this story and this chapter really delivered. I'm hooked.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for the kind words! we have a long way to go.

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Date: March 12 2018

Title: Chapter 13: The Return

Ethan, Ethan, Ethan. You still haven't learned. You big dummy! SMDH

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Date: July 09 2019

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Summary:

The Bones is the sequel to Outlander.

Four years after getting married, Landon and Daphne appear to be happily married. Behind closed doors, the two are struggling with fertility issues that threaten to claim their marriage.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Outlander
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 85331
Read Count: 11479
Published: January 08 2020
Updated: November 02 2022


Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

Landon, you probably should get rid of old girl, before you become a part of a "Misery" reenactment. She ain't right.

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Date: October 25 2021

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

Oh, and the dinner for London's parents had me in stitches. Dusty is a real hoot.

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Date: October 25 2021

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12

Landon is making a big mistake in his misguided efforts to "protect " Daphne. Secrets never stay secret. Daphne will be pissed when she finds out and make no mistake, she will.

Nice update. Looking forward to the reveal.

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Date: December 15 2020

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

I don't know what the sister said to Landon. I'm more worried what he might've told her that could be used by the viper. Landon sure is playing naive when it comes that employee of his.

Nice update

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Date: July 05 2021

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27

Lucy's here!!! Yay!

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Date: November 04 2022

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20

Well, that didn't work out like that thirsty twit planned. Good. She still scares me. Sociopath vibes coming from her. Landon seems to be getting a clue. Good.

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Date: September 18 2021

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

I'm afraid for Daphne. Claire is psycho.

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Date: August 23 2021

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