Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
JJax, my hectic life caught up with me during your telling of this story and so I was not able to participate in the dialogue between yourself and us, your avid followers/reviewers. However, I want to thank you for restoring my faith that one can read a powerful story, one without the usual sexual exploits. Don't get me wrong I love stories laced with the lustful attraction between a woman and a man filled with pages of excitable descriptions of them getting it on.
But this time, your story had so much depth about a love that is grounded in something that is spiritual and lasting, and so it went beyond the normal boundaries that we have become accustom to these days. And your characters came off the pages and entered a realm where they could be easily identified as everyday people. My favorite was Pearl of course. A wise woman indeed. I love that the story was told through the perspective of Joss.
The happy ending was welcomed. However I live in a multi-ethnic country and I have seen so many similar real life stories and they dont always have happy endings.
I believe you outdid your previous work with this one. This is a keeper and I hope you publish it soon.
Author's Response: Aawww, thanks for the wonderful review, Introspection! It's always a pleasure to read your insight. And I'm so excited you enjoyed the story as is, and found the characters likeable and relatable. That is truly a compliment, and I greatly appreciate it.
Reviewer: Introspection Signed
Date: October 18 2013