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Sasha: The Wallflower by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196764
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

nice update! im really hoping for a pregnancy in the epilogue ppppllllleeeeaaasssseeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 01 2014
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

loved it!! i would very much enjoy one shots from them starting with their baby story ppppllllleeeeaaassssseeeee!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 28 2014
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

im loving these rapid updates! im not really liking the fact that dmitri keeps telling himself and her that shes only good enough to screw. i still enjoy your writing style though and im interested to see where this goes. more please..........



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I understand your frustration. :-)

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Date: June 04 2013
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

thanks for the update! im glad theyre getting closer but it really hurt to see him treat her sooo poorly right after they had been intimate. i wanted to slap him upside the head for real!!! hes gonna have to do better MUCH better. i was looking forward to their first time but not if hes gonna be showing her the door right after sheesh!!!! more please..........



Author's Response:

haha. My sentiments exactly. He's struggling with his feelings for her and their relationship will definitely not be the easiest road since he is so unused to being with someone long-term. But, hope for the best! Thank you for your review!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed
Date: June 19 2013
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

was his dad at the door?????? im glad hes going to tell her. i thought dominic might show up and try to make a play for sasha which would make dmitri INSANELY jealous and possessive! more please>>>>>>>>



Author's Response:

Maybe...more coming soon! Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 27 2013
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

thanks for the update!! i really feel like faye shoulda been knocked the f**k out!!!!!!!!sooo glad dina was there to stick up for her.

 im really glad both relationships are progressing wonderfully!! i really hope you dedicate a whole chapter to both of their first time for real!!!! cant wait for that!! im pleased to see that dmitri seems to be taking slades advice and trying a little tenderness as my boy otis would say. more please!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, more time will definitely be dedicated to Slade and Dina as well as Dmitri and Sasha. I should be able to update soon. Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 14 2013
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

noooooooo u cant stop there!!!!!!! it was just getting good!!!! i did a lil happy dance when i saw you had updated. part of me wants her to take him back quickly but another part wants him to grovel a bit longer. im not totally convinced he really fully understands what he put her through for real. more please...............

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Date: February 18 2014
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

lovely update! i enjoyed hearing how dmitri feels. fayes a bitch for real!!! she doesnt sound like a friend at all!! i wonde how dmitri will react when he finds out sashas a virgin. more please!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: June 03 2013
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

thanks for the update! id like to hear some of dmitris internal dialogue especially since he tried to kiss her and she ran away. more please..........



Author's Response:

Yes, I will definitely include more of Dmitri's POV in future chapters. Thank you for your review! 

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Date: June 02 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

lovely update! i enjoyed this chapter a lot! i cant wait to see what her so called 'friends' have to say about this. since she prolly doesnt have the strength to do it herself i hope dina, slade, and dmitri step in and put them on the curb for her for real! im looking forward to their first time. he'll be totally obsessed after that lol! more please..........



Author's Response:

lol I'm very happy to hear you are enjoying the story. More will be coming soon!

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Date: June 07 2013
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

ooooh u are sooo wrong for stopping there!!!! im not liking nadia at all! more please!!! tomorrow works for me. :-)



Author's Response:

haha. No worries, more coming soon. Thank you for reading!

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Date: July 04 2013
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

lovely update!! please dont let nadia come between them! i would be really good if he overheard nadia being a bitch to sasha. it would soooo serve her right!! more please........



Author's Response:

That's a great idea! Thank you! I will try to update by this weekend- sorry for the long wait! 

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Date: July 05 2013
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

loved it!!!! she is soooo pregnant!!! more please!!!

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Date: July 03 2014
Title: Sasha: The Wallflower

lovely story!!! i was truly hoping to get to experience a pregnancy with them.... all the belly rubbin and dmitri protectiveness wouldve been sooo precious. maybe in the sequel? hint hint :-)

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Date: October 24 2014
Wolf Highway by Acdromance
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Shanna's car craps out on her in the middle of now where.  In all honesty her poor planning is what has got her into this predicament but the rude yet goregeous guy that  is helping her out of has something about him that she just can't shake.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14100
Read Count: 14250
Published: July 22 2013
Updated: January 05 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hmmmm very interesting so far..........

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Date: October 28 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

jealous much gage?

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Date: October 28 2013
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

lovin it!! more please.........

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Date: October 28 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

hows she gonna find him? does she remember what road she was on that nite?

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Date: October 28 2013
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Alfred by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 267]
Summary:

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Response to the Made to Order challenge!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54406
Read Count: 50809
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: December 18 2013

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Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Obsession

damn and damn!!!!

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Date: October 23 2013
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 A New Crisis

WHOA!!! more please!!!!!!! please dont let him be dying!



Author's Response:

More is coming.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: October 12 2013
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 The Chase

please please please let anne get whats coming to her this time!!!!!

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Date: October 19 2013
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Coming Together

whoa!!! the plot thickens!!

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Date: October 16 2013
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Trouble

this bitch is cray cray!!! more please!!



Author's Response:

Yep! And more craziness is coming!

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Date: October 17 2013
Semblance of Control by Veruca Pierce
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Rule One:  Keep your regular life and your Domme life separate.

Rule Two:  Keep your relationship with your sub professional.  It is a business transaction.

Rule Two:  Never fall in love with a sub.

 

Talia Lawrence is a photographer by day and private dominatrix when she is not behind the camera.  All is balanced in her life until one of her subs moves clear across the country, leaving her with an empty spot in her schedule and on her spanking bench.  When a chance meeting turns out not to be so random, she has to ask herself if the new sub who offers himself presents too much of a risk to all three of her rules. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM
Challenges: Bottom Bitches
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 13578
Read Count: 6562
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: December 11 2014

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

wowza!!!!! dont stop now!!! more please.........



Author's Response:

Working frantically and fingers flying!  By the end of the weekend.....thanks for reading!

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Date: November 04 2014
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Consequence by Joelle Jax
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 702]
Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91992
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Entrances and Exits

im enjoying this story immensely!! barbara and richard are both on my fucking nerves!! if she refers to the baby as 'that thing' one more time ill punch her in the face MYSELF!! im looking forward to seeing these two find their way together. more please!!!!!!!!! BRAVA



Author's Response:

Lol.  The line of people waiting to get a piece of Barbara is steadily growing.  We'll see if she gets her comeuppance, and how Natalia and Anthony fare in this tale.  I'm working on the an update.  Hopefully I'll have something to post soon.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Brownskingurl!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06 2014

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