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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40809
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

This story is going to be off the chain. I already feel empathy for  Adaline, this woman has been through hell and back. Plus a family from hell. Smh!  I hope thee story has so really happy points and even  happier ending.. 

 

Great jov, please post soon! ;)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

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Banner by: Siennna Gray

 

Croy Martin left her hometown in Texas for her dream job in a small town in Missouri. She falls into a seductive web that is weaved in front of her. Not afraid to fall in love, she dives in head first. Torn between three men, what's a girl to do?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 18155
Read Count: 15691
Published: October 29 2014
Updated: November 16 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

LOL!! Todd is something else. I laughed so hard on that last part. I really Seth amd Cory together. I am not sure what to make of Todd yet. I am SOOO mad at Kevin or what the hell his name is. I hope he is not coming back.

 

Please post again soon. Great job :D



Author's Response:

Todd is too much! lol the cop is what I call Kevin/Rodney. he was wrong for using Croy!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 298]
Summary:

 

Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69611
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

NOOOOO!! WTF, how in the hell did they get to hear, I'm totally lost. First, he's mad about not getting together back in the day, then her ignoring him at the club.. DAYS AGO!!!

Then accepting to meet and cutting her down to a lie... THEN, she doesn't apologize and try and explain, just plain ass answer, knowing he wants more. To just leaving?

AND he let's her take off knowing it's over?!!! WTF??!!

I'm not happy with this chapter at all, I thought they would get back to the passion not this shit.. UH!

Please post again, don't leave it like this... Great Job :D



Author's Response:

This chapter will definitely have you going through the motions thinking of what led them here. I will say, Elle definitely got a wakeup call. Dean is a respectable straight forward guy, so he’s not about to force anyone to do something they don’t want to do. He let Elle leave because he doesn’t feel like he should force her to do anything. I doubt the passion is dead and gone and I won’t leave you hanging. Thanks for reading and reviewing sweetlooking218.

CG

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 24 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 151]
Summary:

Ezekiel's parents took extreme measures to keep him hidden from his controling racist grandfather.  Ezekiel was adopted and raised by Rosa a black woman and his life is now about to take a drastic change.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11832
Read Count: 40499
Published: November 06 2014
Updated: June 17 2015


Title: Ezekiel Black

Oh Lordy.. Those two are something else. I can only hope Exekiel's has the intelligence and heart of gold because Mr. Zeke is not playing any games. I can't wait for more, please post again soon.

 

Great Job, as always :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 09 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 95]
Summary:

 

 

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Joss just knows this summer will change her life... If she can manage to tolerate her bunk leader 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 14449
Read Count: 16600
Published: November 08 2014
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Camp Outlook

Yes! A new story, I can't wait for the next post. Please keep going :D



Author's Response:

working on it! thanks for reading

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 08 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 67]
Summary:

UNSCRUBBED: The tale of a sleeping beauty (The Scrub Series Book 1) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]             WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 22462
Read Count: 4648
Published: November 27 2014
Updated: January 28 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Chapter 5

I love this story and Sleeping Beauty is one of my favorite fairy tales. Please post agian soon and Happy Thanksgiving :D



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Happy Thanksgiving!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

He was stuck, having a midlife crisis before the ripe age of fifty. But then he met her. And she became much more than life. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 29164
Read Count: 30446
Published: November 28 2014
Updated: March 13 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I wasn't expecting that at all! I can't wait for more. Please, post again soon 😄



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I am glad that I can give you the unexpected. You will hopefully get more. Stay tuned! :}

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 29 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Felicia Adams doesn't have a regular life. She's a single mother working two jobs trying to keep a roof over her and her son's heads. One of those jobs includes being a webcam girl. She does it all for guys who are too shy to meet girls in reality, from harmless flirting to sexual acts. She then meets Andrew Harper, the sexy mysterious billionaire. Andrew just can't keep a girlfriend. His dates are selfish gold diggers, and all they want is to shine in the spotlight. All he wants is a girl to one day marry, he can't possibly find a wife on Virtualdates.com, right?




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9176
Read Count: 25331
Published: December 21 2014
Updated: April 08 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW!!!  I like this new story, very different and fun. I can't wait for more, please post again soon :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 21 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Robert is a piece of shit character... How classless of a so called man to talk to another woman, hell a human being like that. Disgusting. I love Andrew, he is a real gentleman with honor. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope their date is much better than what happend at the resturant.

Great job, please post again soon :D



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 11 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

 

 

MINE

Who can you trust in this fucked up world? Nobody that's who!

 

Jelena was forced to live in the real world after her parent's were gunned down. It ain't all cotton candy and gumdrops either. You either have two choices here in Vegas: TO LIVE OR DIE. Jelena thought she knew life but nothing prepared her for life with Milo Castillo.

 

This is the story of Jelena Vera.

 

She fell in love with a Boss.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 7860
Read Count: 2960
Published: January 06 2015
Updated: January 16 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

I want more!! Great job, I can't wait for the next post :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Tina Hamilton's mother always told her to travel in style for she never knows who she could run into. Who knew her mothers words would actually prove true.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7744
Read Count: 4665
Published: January 14 2015
Updated: February 15 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Berlin - Munich

I love this story and German-English together. I really enjoyed Tina taking her goods international, LOL!!

 

Great job and please post again soon, I need more :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Years of craving can only end in satisfaction. Kory Lane and Kai Wu will soon learn that not all cravings can be appeased.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 16033
Read Count: 5582
Published: February 04 2015
Updated: July 10 2016


Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

DAMMMMNNNNN!!! I haven't read something so twisted and hot in a LONG time. Great job, I can't wait for more. Wow.. Please post soon.

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2015

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[Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Her mistake was underestimating his obsession with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 24639
Read Count: 40336
Published: April 23 2015
Updated: July 14 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one

Oh, boy! I'm not a huge fan of dark fic but this one has me wanting more. Please post again soon... I just hope its not too dark, lol! 

Great job :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 23 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Alexandria (Alex) McCarthy is an ambitious 23 year old in her first year of Veterinary school. Her best friend Vanessa(Nessa) Clare is a 25 year old second year medical student who despite the her money and privilege wants nothing more but to follow in her mother’s footsteps and heal the world one cure at a time whether it’s in defiance of her father or not. When Alex is offered an internship in the forests of Brazil she leaps at the opportunity. Having this chance of a life time Alex does not feel the need to get to know Spike Dark, who drips sensual arrogance from every cell in his body.

Spike has every intention of staying away from Alex, until his jaguar peaks interest in her. Having been thrust upon his presence for an assignment Alex is forced to endure him, and soon discovers that he may have been what she has been looking for all this time. Hidden secrets change the path of both their lives with provocative moments, Shifters, and mysteries of the rain forest this is a book that you will not want to miss.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 3356
Read Count: 794
Published: May 16 2015
Updated: May 16 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ow, great start... I'm loving this brave and strong woman. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Please post soon :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2015

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[Reviews - 181]
Summary:

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Chance Gyllenborgh seems to have it all. A pregnant, loving girlfriend, a close knit family, and great life.

 

Angelina Walker is running. She's a top chef and restaurantuer and a workaholic. She throws herself into work to avoid her personal life. Needing a break, she settles down in a town and meet a variety of different people, including Chance.

 

Things seem great at first glance but Below The Surface is where monsters lie and sociopaths dwell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 58269
Read Count: 48924
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: January 22 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I love the pictures, I can't wait to know more about them. I'm not a big fan of Chance right now, I mean he's in a serious relationship (it seems) and has a baby on the way. I don't think he deserves Angel.  

Jen is a little too forward and noisy.. I'm getting a trouble maker vibe from her. I hope Angel has a backbone and respect.. I can't wait to see how this goes. I LOVE "For Her Pleasure", so I'm hooked.

 

Great Job, please post soon :D



Author's Response:

Aww thank you! I'm still updated "For Her Pleasure" but...I'm about to round that out. I hope you enjoy this story. I appreciate you reading!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 22 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Wow!! Damn, that was hot! Lol!! I feel terrible because I don't like cheating but Jen is crazy and bitchy... I can't wait for more. Great job 😍

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed
Date: May 27 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

DAMNNNN!!!! So much drama in one chapter, this is defintely a record. LOL! Pretty please post soon. I can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 30 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

YAY!! You're back and hurting me with the BIGGEST cliffhanger, LOL!! I love your writing and I miss Angel and Chance, they are one of your best orginial characters. I can't wait for Chance to get at that crazed killer trying to get Angelina. I love them both happy and being a family, I would really be crushed if anything bad happend to them.

 

I hope Denise comes back and look out for her daughter she could use the support and protection.

Great Job!!

Please post soon and Happy New YEAR!!! :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30 2015

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

For all Richonne fans who are looking to work Jessie out of their sytem.  At the end of season 5 when Rick planted a peck on Jessie's cheek, I almost threw my TV out the window. Yeah, I didn't take it well. LoL! Anway, thank goodness for ValentChamber where I can work out my frustrations. Here is my way of erasing that imagery from my mind.  There is some Dasha too. Hope you all will like it and leave comments.

Thank you.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Michonne
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6393
Read Count: 10003
Published: June 13 2015
Updated: July 05 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: No One Gives a Fuck About You Jessie

Great job!!! My favorite Rick and Michoone story EVER!! I share your frustation, Lol!!



Author's Response:

I'm still pissed. 

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13 2015

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 433]
Summary:

 

Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 301925
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021


Title: Chapter 17: Yes

AHHH!!! They're getting married?! OMG! I love this chapter, I can't wait for more and finally those two are together and doing something right... *wink* LOL!!

 

Please post soon :)

 

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02 2016

Title: Chapter 15: Breaking and Mending

Great new chapter, I love how you took a different direction. I can't wait to read your next post. I hope Will and Seb get back together and their heads out of the behinds, LOL!!

 

Good luck at school and Happy New Year :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

 

What will a woman do when her back is up against a wall? Will she take the beating or will she charge forward? Follow the story of Ariana as she escapes an abusive relationship and tries to redefine herself. As she moves back to Texas, she struggles with adjusting to a life without the abuse. Take this journey as she tries to move forward with her life because she refuse to let her past control her future. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4413
Read Count: 2241
Published: December 08 2015
Updated: February 02 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Broken Heart [1]

Woah, powerful beginning. Done every nicely, I hope you continue. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 08 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 133]
Summary:

As a young woman struggles to provide a better life for her and her brother. She first has to face the many challenges that come in her path. One being a big bad wolf.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5788
Read Count: 15247
Published: September 22 2016
Updated: October 11 2016


Title: Chapter 4: Got You Where I Want You

Ohh... Date time! I can't wait for more! Great job, I love to know more about Alex and his wolf. Why is he at the hotel? What is his wolf like on date night?? Please post more soon :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

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"I’m a reasonable man. I came here, knowing you wouldn’t be able to pay the debt.”

”Then what do you want?”

“You’ve two choices, piccolina. Honour the deal and come with me or I’ll settle the debt. Right here. In blood."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Smoking Guns & Black Roses - A Mafia Series
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 2118
Read Count: 6995
Published: January 07 2017
Updated: February 05 2017


Title: Chapter 2: Drip...Drop...

Ohh!! I love a new Mafia story. I can't wait for more. Please post again soon



Author's Response:

me too XD I hope you will enjoy the read :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09 2017

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

Emily has never wanted a man so bad until Elijah Smith. An Illinois born and bred small town bad boy who grew up just down the road from her. The only problem is, he's her childhood and high school bully. So when he comes around with flowers, muscles, and tattoos she isn't so willing to forget his torturous ways so easily.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 20124
Read Count: 15210
Published: June 04 2017
Updated: May 26 2018


Title: Chapter 2: Where you fit

Very good! I can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2017

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.