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[Reviews - 415]
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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

FIVE STARS ON AMAZON

When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214764
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Please, Please, Please update again soon

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: June 23 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Nice update however I would like the story to focus more on Ryan and Charlene. 

 

I feel that the story is still just flirting with Ryan and Charlene's relationship when it should by now be more fully into their romance and all of the complications and pressures that this might bring. 

 

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: October 26 2012

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

This has to be my favorite chapter of the story so far. It was beautiful and kudos to Ryan for being the one who doesn't want to hide what he feels for Charlene.

 

Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Valis202.  I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think I'm falling in love with my own character..LOL  I'm go to sleep dreaming about this white boy sometimes. Haha!

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: December 12 2012

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Wonderful update as always.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: March 24 2013

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I love this story so much. Was so happy that Charlene was honest with Ryan. I would have hated it if she had broken it off because of Christi's threats.

It will be interesting to see the reactions of their families to their relationship. I hope it will be supportive. At least they have Wes in their corner but I fear some pretty nasty reactions from other people who they consider to be 'friends'.

I think that the characters are utterly relatable and realistic. Please update again soon.

 

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: April 17 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 439]
Summary:

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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 89295
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 12

Really love this story. Can't wait to see the direction that it takes.

Would love to see some sex scenes between Ellie and Nick

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: July 07 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9

Surprising update.

Am glad that Ellie has left him but I suspect that when the initial dust has settled, Nick will try furiously to get her back

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: June 13 2011

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 270]
Summary:

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Having chosen modeling over ministry, Jeremy Ferguson had often felt his father's scorn and disapproval.  Now he was coming home to visit and bringing the love of his life, Aura Vanderleigh who happens to be black.  Growing up in South Carolina, Jeremy knows what his father's reaction will be even if he is a minister!

 

The Preacher's Son is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2009 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2681
Read Count: 128938
Published: July 31 2011
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Family

congratulations and well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your support.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: December 05 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 670]
Summary:

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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140137
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11 There Really Is No Place Like Home II

Fantastic update

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: September 11 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Excellent start

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: August 23 2011

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

So glad this story is back.

Love Seleah and Joseph so much. Can't wait for more updates on this story.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: May 28 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 265]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104079
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

Can't wait for Jason and Devyn's date.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: June 26 2012

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 23

Nice update. Has set the groundworks perfectly for the fireworks that will no doubt occur in the next update.

Please don't keep us waiting to long for it. LOL

 

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: January 20 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 66]
Summary:

All is fair in love and war?

That's the way the story goes until Nita Floyd's promotion is handed to the son of her firm's managing partner. Fifteen years on the job, two failed marriages, and a son and daughter who hate her more than life itself, what's Nita's next move. How far will she go to right the wrong especially when her rival re-acquaints her with a little thing called fun.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 11731
Read Count: 48561
Published: December 12 2011
Updated: March 05 2012


Title: Chapter 7: Tentative Agreement

Am really liking this story

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: December 27 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Taught to see the worst in people so he lived life semi- emotionless, that is until he met her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1643
Read Count: 10513
Published: December 26 2011
Updated: August 23 2015


Title: Heat

Interesting start

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: December 26 2011

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 450]
Summary:

 

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William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 52745
Read Count: 78023
Published: March 29 2012
Updated: April 10 2014


Title: Chapter 1: {One}

Promising start.Please continue with this story

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: March 29 2012

Title: Chapter 5: {Five}

Wow. This story just gets better and better. The emotional depth that you have invested in these characters is amazing. I ache for the torment that Ana still carries from her attack and as for Glenna, I think that you did an amazing job of turning her from a really hateful character into a more sympathetic one.

Really good job and can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: May 20 2012

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 201]
Summary:

 

Shonti Brown, Chicago socialite and events/party blogger, is stuck in Hohenwald, TN due to her late grandfather’s, a man she barely knew, unusual stipulation of her having to stay two weeks on her newly inherited farm if she wanted to keep the farm in the family or the other partner, Richard Vaughn, would get full ownership of the farm.  Shonti goes through an emotional roller coaster as she tries to cope with living in the shadow of her late grandfather and falling in love, reluctantly, with Richard.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 39734
Read Count: 67998
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: June 25 2018


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Really beginning to like this story. Am intrigued as to  how Shonti and Richard are going to start really warming to each other.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: June 17 2012

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved this story. Love the direction that Richard and Shonti's relationship is moving in.

 

Please update again soon.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: August 23 2012

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
Summary:

 

Esther Hendrickson has loved teaching young children, mainly because she cannot have children of her own. What was once society's trophy wife, her abusive past has led her deep into dementia, but the love of hardened FBI agent A.J. Thomas may be just what she needs to heal her torn heart.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 46765
Read Count: 75329
Published: June 14 2012
Updated: January 03 2015


Title: Chapter 5: B is for Background Checks

Absolutely fantastic story. You've fleshed out Esther's character so well and I think that it's really good when stories deal with important subjects such as societal pressure to conform, self harm and suicide.

 

Please keep up the good work with this story.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: June 30 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

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A cop and a assistant discrict attorney hot moment.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1206
Read Count: 7764
Published: July 01 2012
Updated: June 17 2017


Title: One Last Time

Good start. Intriguing premise. Please update again soon.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm working on it.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: July 01 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:

Noah Bianchi has been in lust for his new secretary Eliza from the moment he met her, but how will he introduce her to his dominant lifestlye? By bending her over his desk of course.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 7176
Read Count: 8085
Published: July 26 2012
Updated: August 10 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Said the Spider to the Fly

Fantastic update. Really like the erotic quality to the forming relationship.

 

Please update again soon.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: August 10 2012

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 193]
Summary:

Carmen Shelly preyed on married men and usually won her sought after prize. Business is booming until her partner sets his sights on her single sister.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41535
Read Count: 39601
Published: July 29 2012
Updated: February 28 2016


Title: Chapter 5: Four- I declare...War {glimpse into the mind of a psychopath}

Wow, this is an amazing story.

It really was the glimpse into the mind of a psychopath. Of somebody who has no insight into the wrongness of their actions and who think that because it benefits them then it must be right even if innocent people get hurt along the way.

 

Great update. Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: August 24 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Six-Strategy{an ugly mind is a terrible thing to use}

deliciously nasty story

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: October 02 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

 

How could she love them? They destroyed everything...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4425
Read Count: 6948
Published: August 21 2012
Updated: August 25 2012


Title: Chapter 1: 1 - Storms on the distance.

Intriguing. Can't wait for the next update to see where this is leading.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed
Date: August 21 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.