Penname: Divsionred [Contact]

Real name: Sharon

Member Since: July 10 2008

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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Bouquet de Fleurs (Bouquet of Flowers) by tpeezy22
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 275]
Summary:

Six months after being attacked, Grace moved to Paris with her boyfriend, Henri. Once there, she must overcome adjusting to French life, working with her crazy new boss, and move on with her life. Henri is trying to find the right time to propose to Grace, but will her pride and his family get the better of her?

 

Sequel to Floraison d'Amour (Blossoming Love)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 50
Completed:Yes
Word count: 90875
Read Count: 33732
Published: May 25 2011
Updated: September 15 2014

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Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I like the scene with Henri and Grace.  Thank goodness they are back together.  Grace shouldn't go see Julian by herself.   Her man is home waiting for her.  If she wants to know what Julian wants then she needs to let Henri know so that he can go with her,   Grace is just now starting to come into her own,  She shouldn't let some idiot disrupt her good vibe.  Especially now that she is having dreams that aren't a nightmare.  Why would Julian invite her to his home?  That is just wrong. Thanks for a great update.

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Date: February 25 2012
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thanks for a great update.

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Date: May 31 2012
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh my, why did the police arrest Grace? I hope that she will be ok and that Henri can get her out quickly.  I guess anothe case of racial profiling. Thanks for the great update.

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Date: June 04 2012
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update.  I am glad that Henri was able to get Grace out of her predicament. 

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Date: July 10 2012
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thanks for a great update. Glad that Grace had a safe place to ho to discuss her concerns. Henri is very patient with Grace.

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Date: November 08 2012
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Glad that Grace is being more agreeable to adapting to her new country. I love Henri, I have been very impressed by his dedication to Grace. Thanks

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Date: November 14 2012
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Thanks for a great update. Looked like Grace and Henry had a great Thanksgiving.

HAPPY THANKSGIVING

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Date: November 23 2012
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I liked the girl time. Thanks

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Date: June 23 2013
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Grace and Henri seem very compatible. I can't wait fir the wedding. Thanks

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Date: June 08 2013
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

This event should be interesting. Thanks

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Date: May 08 2013
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Thanks for the great update. Who is the person that just walked in that has Julian flustered?

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Date: May 16 2013
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Good for Grace for fighting back. But I feel sorry for her everywhere she goes she is like a magnet for trouble. It seems that Veronique is nothing but a drug addict gold digger. Julian can do better than her. I was surprised that Henri didn't offer to help Grace ice her hand cheek. He lost cool points for not being more helpful. Thanks for a great update.

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Date: May 31 2013
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Henri sleeping with deho was in the past. Not sure why Julian thought Henri would have told Grace about something so dispicable. Thanks

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Date: July 05 2013
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Thanks for a great update. I liked the Henri and Grace sensual moments. as for Grace's dream, she needs to forget that Henri had been with deho because he is marrying her.

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Date: July 14 2013
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Thanks for a great update. Grace needs to understand that she is marrying a wonderful man that loves her very much and he wants to protect her. I don't think that there is anything wrong with him being protective because clearly she needs all the help with her talking trash all of the time. She shouldn't have teased Henri the one that she did. I am looking forward to the wedding.

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Date: September 16 2013
The Lightning Scar by Reckless Runaway
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 69]
Summary:

Zora McQueen only wanted one thing... to go to Hogwarts. It wasn't until she got there that she found out she would be in for the adventure of a lifetime. Who knew meeting a messy haired boy with a scar on his head would lead to so much trouble?

 

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 101074
Read Count: 91776
Published: May 28 2011
Updated: February 15 2014

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Title: Chapter 6: The Not So Happy Birthday pt. 2

Thanks for a great update.  That Lucius Malfoy is such a spitefil individual.  To taunt Sampson the way he did was just evil.  As for his son Draco I would like him more if he wasn't so mean to those around him.  The way that this family treats their house elves is just obscene.

It was interesting reading about Hermione Granger before she knew that she was a witch.  So she suspects that Zora is different.  I can't wait to read when Hermione realizes that she is different too.

Thanks



Author's Response:

Yeah, the Malfoys aren't going to be the winners of the perfect family dynamic award or the nicest-people-you'll-ever-meet award but that's just life lol. It's also why they make awesome baddies. Hermione I thought was always a very scientific, practical child before she knew about magic. My head-canon says that if it wasn't in a textbook/journal/or easily proven or seen Hermione Granger wouldn't give it second glance. Also, for the people that think that she had friends, um no lol...just no...not the way that she was following Ron and Harry around at Hogwarts. Her friendship with Zora is a new experience and its going mellow her out...a smidge..like a very tiny smidge. The aspect of friendship in general and magic are going to hit Hermione hard, but she will adapt and thrive. 

 

Thanks for the awesome review Divisonred :)

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Date: July 05 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

The model that you have for the main character is very pretty.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review Divsionred :)

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Date: June 03 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Happiness Is..

Great start to the story.  I guess her mother was killed by Voldermots henchmen. Thanks



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Thanks so much for the review :)

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Date: June 03 2011
Title: Chapter 3: A day in the life of...

What is a Metamorphmagus?  I like the different twist to the story.  I am a huge Harry Potter fan. Thanks



Author's Response:

A metamorphmagus is...wow...um...the simplest way to explain it is that, it is a witch or wizard that can transform their physical appearance at will. They don't have to use polyjuice potion or a spell. Tonks is a metamorphmagus. It's kind of like a person who is animagus.

Thanks for your viewing. :)

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Date: June 03 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chances Are...

Thanks for the great update.  I like the idea of a magical dog that can protect you.  Zora seems to be the bell of the ball.  She will have all of these young boys liking her at Hogwarts.



Author's Response:

Oh I don't know about that...lol. Just tune in a find out. 

Thanks for the review :)

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Date: June 03 2011
Title: Chapter 3: A day in the life of...

Thanks for the explanation. I forgot about Tonks abilities.



Author's Response:

No prob :)

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Date: June 14 2011
Title: Chapter 5: The Not So Happy Birthday

Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

Awww :) Thanks for an awesome review

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Date: June 14 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Black Cats, Flying Erasers, and Cupcakes...Oh My

Thanks for a great update. I was shocked that Zora could turn into a cat. I guess Dora decided that it was best that Dumbledore was aware of Zora's ability to transform . I am sure that he probably knows. As for Hermione she made those drawers move and attacked that girl. That was funny.

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Date: July 30 2012
Title: Chapter 8: It's the Most Wonderful Time of the Year...Or is it?

The Christmas dinner between the McQueens and the Grantees was a success. Who was that that took Zora's bow? Love the grandparents. They give very nice gifts. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012
Title: Chapter 9: And We All....Fall...Down

Wow I am blown away that Malfoy is obsessed with Zora. I can't wait to read about the party. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

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