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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Love, loss and redemption are found in the most unlikely places.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active, Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 114
Read Count: 34093
Published: February 05 2013
Updated: March 15 2013


Title: Good Grief

This story is GOOD!  I haven't disliked a character so much, in a while, until I read about Suzy.  That is one evil bitch, I had to call her that and I hate the word.  Poor Sienna.

I can't wait for Jason to drop the Bane bomb on her. We know he has the power to take her down completely and I'm looking forward to it.  

Thanks for this story.



Author's Response:

Lol Thank you for the encourgement! Ah Suzy is just too much. I struggled in writing her character because I have sisters and can't imagine someone so evil. But I've heard of crazier things happening in real life sooo yea I hate her too. Lol New chapters to come this week. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

What happens when Spock can't get Uhura out of his head.



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Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3470
Read Count: 5743
Published: February 26 2013
Updated: February 26 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Short, but hot.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 275]
Summary:

Laura MaCalister is an aspiring fashion designer. While on her way home from work her world collides with the dark life of Nicholi Gorbachev. Nicholi is the boss of the Mogilevich Family. He has plans for the young and inexperienced Laura. However she wants nothing to do with him. Her mind is telling her he is nothing but trouble but her body goes up in flames just from hearing his name. What will become of this couple? When all their secrets are exposed the only thing that can keep them together is love but love could also tear them apart.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 30777
Read Count: 41271
Published: March 31 2013
Updated: March 31 2014


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13-Believe This

I'm glad she'll be able to protect herself when Nicholi's enemies find out about her.  Thanks for the update, I'm enjoying your story.



Author's Response:

they both have enimes and it going to be on hell of a ride when everybody figures out what happening.

 

Thanks for reading and review. I hope you continue to enjay the story

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Date: April 30 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 209]
Summary:

Loki

What happens after Loki falls from the Rainbow Bridge? My first fic EVER. M rating for later chapters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 49769
Read Count: 40308
Published: April 13 2013
Updated: April 22 2014


Title: Chapter 15: The Gun in the Bun

Poor Noni. I like the relationship that Noni and Loki are making. Both are wounded and it's great they found each other.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Not Quite Dead

I'm enjoying this story.  I waited to start because I'm not really into Loki, but I started, I'm on chapter 4 and I'm loving it.



Author's Response:

Yay! Welcome to the Loki Side. :P

 

But really, I am glad you're enjoying it. Tell me what you think when you're caught up. :)

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19 2013

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Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196756
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Oh Sasha, you were doing so well until then end. I understand that Sasha always wanted the love of a family, but she doesn't know Dimitri's whole situation.  Her heart may be in the right place, but she needs to find out the complete situation, also I wouldn't want Dimiti around his father too much anyway.  He's a straight asshole.

Thanks for the update.

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Date: October 03 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Hate that it was stopped there lol, but this was good.  I was thinking the brother would be an issue, which he still could be, but Nadia is going to be terrible. 

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! More coming soon!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Get it Sasha! Good chapter, but Nadia is living up to my expectations.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! Maybe she'll surprise you (emphasis on maybe) lol

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2013

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Summary:

Tomaso lived for Nicholi and they both survived harsh times together but now Nicholi was moving on with someone else and Tomaso was on his own. That is, until he meets Nathaniel. The attraction is instant and Tomaso wants nothing to do with him for several reasons, the first and most important one was that no one knew he was gay and he wanted to keep it that way. If only forgetting Nathaniel was as easy as forgetting the rest.

 

Nathaniel knew he was gay and he didn't try to hide it. He hated commitment and loved playing around, that’s why Nathaniel thought he would be a bachelor forever. However things changed when he met Tomaso. The Italian wasn’t the type that Nathaniel would usually go for but he couldn’t get him out of his head. Now he wants more than the Italian’s body he wants his heart.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Slash, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9019
Read Count: 4041
Published: June 13 2013
Updated: April 02 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Interesting.  Looking forward to Nathaniel meeting up with his sister so they can campare stories.  Can't wait for the update.



Author's Response:

An update is coming soon. There reunion is going to be interesting.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 353]
Summary:

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82571
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chance Encounter

Thanks for the update. I'm really enjoying this story.  I didn't like Charles or Janie, but I'm wishing the best for them now, and that Charles' Uncle gets his.

Love Billy and Paris.  It's beautiful to read how Billy is so sure and won't be swayed.  It's going to be hard for Paris and Billy, they may need to leave Virginia to flurish in their careers, but I look forward to reading the rest of their journey.

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Date: August 06 2013

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[Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Shanna's car craps out on her in the middle of now where.  In all honesty her poor planning is what has got her into this predicament but the rude yet goregeous guy that  is helping her out of has something about him that she just can't shake.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14100
Read Count: 14247
Published: July 22 2013
Updated: January 05 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm enjoying your story. Thanks for the update and can't wait for the next part.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

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Date: October 27 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 345]
Summary:

College student Rory Daniels has a problem, and it isn’t how she’s going to pass her final exams.

You see, she can do this thing where she can manipulate objects… and other things, and as far as she knows she’s the only one who can. So when she’s forced to use her powers at a crowded bookstore and attracts the attention of a fellow student, she’s anything but happy about it. When it turns out the student has no interest in turning her over to the government and actually wants, of all things, a double date, she’s pleasantly surprised. That is, until her date ditches her for her friend and she ends up stuck with his.

His friend turns out to be Victor Ryken. He’s tall. Built like a Greek god and has a set of the most memorizing hazel eyes Rory’s ever seen. And, oh yeah, he does nothing but infuriate her. After the date from hell, Vic has for some reason taken an increased interest in her and what’s worse… her powers light up every time he touches her. When Vic’s around her abilities go haywire and his presence marks the beginning of a string of unusual events. Suddenly, she’s become a person of interest to nearly everyone she meets and strange people pop up in her life that have her question her own weirdness. When Vic himself displays a whole new level of weird while saving her from an attacker, Rory ends up concluding one thing. 

Maybe she’s not as alone as she thinks.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126441
Read Count: 55757
Published: August 22 2013
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 37

Really enjoyed your story. I hope you decide to contine it here because I'm looking forward to more.

Thanks for writing it.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 76]
Summary:

 

British Mogul, Sir Benjamin Harvey Nichols VI has always gotten everything he wanted out of life. He worked hard and played hard. He lived in a world of celebrities, models, and money. However, a series of tragic events has him re-evaluating his priorities. When fate serves him a cup, which will he choose?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 14759
Read Count: 17242
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: January 25 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm enjoying it so far. Looking forward to the next part.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09 2014

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Summary:

A story how even though you think you have your life planned out, cupid's arrow will hit you when you least expect it. Chris and Kat both attend Tulane University. This is Chris last year and after graduation he's leaving town. But, what happens when a beautiful African American woman catches his eye?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 55615
Read Count: 159191
Published: March 01 2014
Updated: August 20 2014


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thanks for the update.  Chris and Kat are hot together.



Author's Response:

Your welcome. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is interesting. I'm enjoying it.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29 2014

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm really enjoying your story.  Kat and Chris are great together.



Author's Response:

Thank you Tootall. When I write something I know I like it but am never sure if someone else would. Soo thank you so much for your review.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29 2014

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Summary:

In the small southern town of Perry, Mississippi, an unlikely pair get much more than they bargained for when they fall madly in love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 24408
Read Count: 54482
Published: April 27 2014
Updated: November 27 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Interesting start. Looking forward to more.

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Date: April 29 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Interesting twist. I'm always up for a wolf shifter story. lol chrlie is going to hit the roof. lol

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

Poor Reese, but I understand Charlies  reaction. Thank you so much for the updates!

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Date: November 27 2014

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Summary:

Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118381
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Lovers' Dance

Thanks for the two updates.

 

I knew Matt's parents were going to be worst, especially his mother.  Madi has so much crap thrown at her, but hopefully she continues to be strong.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Awww, thanks for the updates! 

I happy for Madi and Matt, but we know it won't be all roses and sunshine when the news of their engagement gets out in England. Matt's mother is going to be worst than Aunt Cleo.  Speaking of which, I'm glad Madi confronted her Aunt and family about the past underlying issues.

Can't wait for more! Love this story. 

 

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I love Matt and Madi.  First time reviewing because for some foolish reason I waited to read this until it had 54 chapters. lol

I'm glad that Madi is seeing someone about the deaths of her parents, but I was worried that Matt and Madi may be done after what Matt was thinking for a minute.  You had me dislikng Matt. lol

Looking forward to them going to New York and meeting up with Aunt Cleo. lol

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Good luck Matt with Cleo. lol

Glad Matt's siblings and nieces treat Madi right. His parents can suck it.  I know it may be a while for the next chapter, but thanks again for the updates and i'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Thanks for the update!  I love that Madi and Matt face their possible issues.  Can't wait until they're at Aunt Cleo's and glad Madi said that line about protecting Matt. It was sweet.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Thanks for the update.

Okay, Madi needs to chill regarding the bodyguard/s. Yes, it may be strange to her, but she shouldn't be that shocked.   Hopefully she'll work this out for herself quickly.  Matt the old horn dog. lol The initial meeting out the way now can't wait to see where it goes from here.



Author's Response:

Madi girl is learning to adapt, hopefully at the required pace! And Matt is a bit naughty, isn't he  :)

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.