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Lovers' Dance by K Carr
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 572]
Summary:

Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118381
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014

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Title: Lovers' Dance

Ooooo, Matt's going to ask her uncle for Madi's hand. Too sweet. Good luck with that,Matt. lol That cousin Jenny is shady and I don't trust her. 

Thanks for this chapter and can't wait for the next part!

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Date: August 15 2014
Title: Lovers' Dance

Thank you for the updates!

Jenny and Jamal are both terrible.  These two chapters really show the family dynamic. Poor Madi really has/had it with those cousins. At least Aunt Cleo tried to make up for the differences being made towards Madi by her Uncle's family.Matt tried to do what he thought was nice but he over stepped wit that surprise.  

I really do love Matt and Madi's relationship. The way they stand up for and love eah other is beautiful to read.

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Date: August 17 2014
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Adaline:The Silent by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40809
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Good start.  Seems both cousins had a thing for Dominic. Looking forward to the update.

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Date: October 24 2014
UNSCRUBBED: the tale of a sleeping beauty by Elizabeth Griffin
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 67]
Summary:

UNSCRUBBED: The tale of a sleeping beauty (The Scrub Series Book 1) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]             WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 22462
Read Count: 4648
Published: November 27 2014
Updated: January 28 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Chapter 5

Enjoy this. Please continue soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback.  Please continue to read.

 Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28 2014
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Good Fit? by Dion
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 153]
Summary:

Appearances can be deceiving



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 26983
Read Count: 37227
Published: May 30 2015
Updated: June 13 2015

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This was great!!

It was too short, but I loved every moment of it. Wish there would be more, but thank you for what did write. 

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Date: May 30 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Thanks for continuing this story.   Completely understand Adele's decision. Gabriel should just think about what Humphrey just said to see the attitude Adele still had to deal with working there.

Can't wait for more!

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Date: June 05 2015
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Thanks for the update.

Slowly but surely Gabriel is getting his eyes opened to what a crappy place that office was for Adele. Looking forward to more!

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Date: June 07 2015
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Thanks for the updates.

Duh, Gabriel! He's finally seeing for himself what Adele went through.  He'a a little thick, but I still like him with Adele.  Also, I think Max is gay. Just a vibe, but I'm probably wrong. lol

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Date: June 08 2015
Lovers' Dance Part 2 by K Carr
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 225]
Summary:

Part 2



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11288
Read Count: 22097
Published: June 09 2015
Updated: October 05 2015

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Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Thanks for continuing this story. I'm sorry that it gives you grief, but I really do love your writing of it. lol  So happy to read Madi and Matt's story again. I think Matt is correct about being cautious about Dougie. Yes, we know Madi isn't interested, but Doug  could be very annoying to her.  

Hopefully whatever motivates you to write this story will continue, and thanks again. 



Author's Response:

Hi Tootall,

Glad you enjoy my story and I'm working on it. Thanks for reviewing.

K.

 Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2015

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