Will you ever do a prologue of this story, please!Reviewer: katt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 04:06 am
Please complete your novel and publish it. This is really good.Reviewer: esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 12:50 am
Gabriel's having anal sex with Honey really disgusted me. To have her cherry simply because his Dad harped on his insecurities, she should have put him out. Just because he had his mind set did not mean he deserved what he wanted, bujt then he's a child that way, obviously that isn't an excuse since he's making adult decisions. And even if he did deserve it, she didn't want to do it, she wasn't even curious before he came at her sideways.
I'd been enjoying the story quite a bit beforehand, although ALL THE SEX felt unnecessary more times than not, but that scene felt like rape to me and I have never been so turned off by a sex scene in my life. I hope their relationship gets better and more of a balance is struck later on because Gabriel making decisions for them as a couple simply doesn't work.Reviewer: Die A Mouse Death Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 01:23 pm
I can't bgelieve this is the end. I want to read so more about the Wainwrights. There seems to be so much more to explore.
First off, Franklin got off easy. I wanted Sugar to get in a few licks. Then there is her trifflin family. I really wanted a show-down. And the revelation about Sugar's father was also intresting. I think Sugar needs her own story.
Gabe and Honey, I can just read more and more about them. I wanted to see them with growing family.
Date: January 21 2013 05:26 am
Awesome. This story is blowing my mind. Franklin has yet to truely suffer. I really wanted Sugar to get some licks in. As for Sugar's father, that was interesting. Is he still alive? I wonder what happen to him?
And Sugar and Gabe are as freaky as they wanted to be.
Date: January 21 2013 05:08 am
Great beginning... I can tell this story is going to be off the chain.Reviewer: natalieiw Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 21 2013 01:28 am
This was an AMAZING story!Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 09:22 pm
All good things must come to an end and this is one of the.. Love the ending glad Franklin was got and Albert has decided to stop pursuing Sugar.. I'm glad Albert realizes that nothing good will come from him pursuing Sugar and it will cost him the love of his life.. I'm with Albert on this one.. Take it to the GRAVE!!!! What they dont know won't hurt you or them..
Looking forward to you next story..Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 03:45 am
Franklin is going down color me happy!! I have loved this story, Brenda it has funny and at times some of the characters have pissed me off. So awesome, I really hate to see this story end but all good things must come to an end.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 01:03 am