Reviews For Acceptable Lies
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Omg I can't believe I am just ready this story. Loving it so far.

Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

All good things must come to an end and this is one of the.. Love the ending glad Franklin was got and Albert has decided to stop pursuing Sugar.. I'm glad Albert realizes that nothing good will come from him pursuing Sugar and it will cost him the love of his life.. I'm with Albert on this one.. Take it to the GRAVE!!!! What they dont know won't hurt you or them..

Looking forward to you next story..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 03:45 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Pearlsof wisdome, Franklin is Sugar's cousin her raped her when she was twelve.  Bruce was the guy that Albert Wainwright arranged to take Honey to the benefit that Audrey throws annually.  Bruce hit it off with Sugar and took her home.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2012 05:50 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

So... I've been reading this from the beginning and I don't know how I missed this but can someone tell me who Franklin and Bruce are and how they got introduced into the story.

Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2012 03:08 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Yay!!!! I love that Suga has someone special in her life, she deserves it and more..

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2012 02:59 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

I really enjoy Honey and Gabe, and Gabe's sister and her man. 

After reading some of the reviews, I know I'm in the minority but I really, really don't like the idea of Sugar ending-up with Albert.  Enought people have abuse, uses, shame, and treat sugar like she is shit all because of what's between her legs.  Albert is just the lastest one in the long-line it seems,  and he is doing everything in his power to get the chance to sexually use sugar all because his dick wants some. I don't want that for Sugar.

Sugar deserves a man who will fight for her and come after her, not because of what's between her leg but because of who she is. She will not trust that man at first because her whole life people have acted like the only good thing she had going for her was what's between her leg, unfortunately she believed that and she has used it to get what she needs. 

I love Sugar too much to want her with Albert and Albert has already proving that he is not worthy of Sugar. 

Anyway thanks for a great story, can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: Truth7 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 15 2012 07:46 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Okay, my last to reviews didn't post, so I'm going to really keep it short..

Great update!!! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 15 2012 03:20 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

P.S. What happened to Macy's rep Bruce Wallace?  He seemed half decent.  He should call Sugar back to begin the normal, respectable relationship she deserves after two rapes, single parenthood, and growing up on the streets. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reminding me.  My mind can be all over the place when I write.  Bruce will be back and Albert won't like it one bit.  LOL

Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2012 08:17 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Newsflash, Albert: Drugging someone, breaking into their home, and then licking them and penetrating their genitals with your tongue (while they're half-consious and can't consent) DEFINITELY counts as rape.  You are a CREEPO rapist and finding her old rapist doesn't erase the fact that you just RAPED her. EWWWW.

Reviewer: tens Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 26 2012 09:06 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

i forgot to say thank you for the wonderful turkey day update!!! you rock!!!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2012 04:25 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Daddy done lost his mind..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2012 01:43 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Poor Albert is sprung. Love where this is going.

Reviewer: cheer jam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2012 01:15 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Poor Albert his sprung from a taste.. I'm glad Honey was the voice of reason.. Hopefully, Albert will leave well enough alone but I don't see that happening anytime soon.. I think Albert will be Honey's stalker for a while.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2012 12:25 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

I ain't mad at Sugar.. Don't hate the playa hate the game!!!! Sugar used what she had to get what she wanted for her daughter.. She got nothing monetary out of that little tryst with Albert..

 Let's hope Albert learn to put this one time slip behind him and leave it there and when he thinks about tasting some of Sugar's brown sugar he'll go home and lay the pipe down on his wife instead..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2012 11:58 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Ya'll might be mad at sugar but i think this lady got mad game. she might be triffling however, she know how to work situations in her favor and especially in her daughters favor. can't hate.

Reviewer: wow sugar! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 11:12 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Hahahaha!!!! Sugar is a HAM!!

That's was an awesome update..

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 07:27 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

that was four stars by the way!

Reviewer: dante giovanni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 01:39 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

LOVED IT!!!! The line about the faucet though.... genius! 

Reviewer: dante giovanni Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 01:38 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

I have read this story so many times, glad to see an update. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: cheer jam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 04:10 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

I really like that you jumped right in to them being together. I love that Gabe is his own man.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 11:52 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Oh Sydney, don't you knopw that LIES always wind up coming eventually, you better tell the TRUTH... who cares what your father thinks you are a GROWN ASS WOMAN act like it.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 02 2012 01:58 am

Title: Cast Pictures

wow nice cast pics and why do the hot ones have to be gay how about some of these ugly men lol.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2012 12:26 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

See I would done the same thing have my father think that i'm gay lol just to tick him off lol. I can't belive he had a flie on lee and honey mom omg I see why she doesn't want her around her boyfriend she is ghetto lol. Like the story and thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2012 12:26 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Sugar's getting ready to give to Albert straight with no chaser.. Hahahaha.. I can't wait to see what Sugar has up her sleeve.. I'm sure it's going to be good..

Awesome update!!!

 

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2012 04:34 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Sugar maybe ghetto but she loves her baby. Gabe, time to wake up and check daddy dearest  before serious damage is done. Go Sugar, it time to go to work.

Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09 2012 03:03 am



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