Bloody fudging EPIC
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed
[Report This]Date: December 21 2014 06:54 am
Awwww this stuff is disney material
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2014 06:44 am
Right now you are just churning out gold i have No complaints
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2014 06:19 am
Awwwww how many of us want that just a person we can call and talk to about a rubbish day.
This chapter was flawless in its simplicity just Val's earnest reactions during that phone call...
[Report This]Date: December 21 2014 02:20 am
Brilliant absolutely brilliant those kisses that tone and Val-chan taking a chance favorite chapter thus far
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2014 02:09 am
What just happened was beautiful to see well until...the freak out 0_o
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed
[Report This]Date: December 21 2014 01:30 am
You go Henry flash those dimples...Val-chan enjoy the ride
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2014 01:04 am
I can definately relate Val issues....
Sweet Heaven that ending
[Report This]Date: December 21 2014 12:51 am
Vla is starting to realize that she is the only one responsible for her happiness and well-being. Every time she looked at Henry, he was laughing it up, telling jokes and being just fine. Although Henry did try to talk to Val, he is not relying on her to make him happy.
Take a note out of Henry's playbook and take steps to get well. Stop giving George more credit in your life than he deserves---no one is paying for his nasty actions, but you. I am hoping Val returns to therapy and sees a nutritionist.
Whatever happen to Apple and Peaches?
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2014 12:32 am
This story and Valerie's pain hits a bit too close for comfort. If this story does not stem from some personal place, you've got to be THE best writer ever. Regardless, it is brutal and beautiful; pulling out of one, a strong yearning for Valerie to find peace of soul and true love.
Have you ever heard or seen the British show My Mad Fat Diary? It's a wonderful companion to this story.
Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 09:36 pm
I had to reread this chapter, and my heart really goes out to Valerie! To think that her parents put George on such a high pedastle after the pain that she's endured from him. Not only that, but to have her mom suggest that they get back together. I can't imagine not being able to confide in my parents about something like that (I'm assuming she never told them anything about George's true intentions).
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 08:53 pm
Poor Val. I'm glad she's telling Henry. I want them to be happy.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 02:20 pm
This was an awesome and much needed chapter. Your writing is just terrific. Val confiding in Henry is what she really needed. I hope Henry finds George and ...
10!10!10!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 06:03 am
Very intense! It explains a lot about why Valerie is in the stated she's in right now. Great update. Keep 'em coming!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 05:46 am
I'm glad to see Henry is back. It was good to see he wanted to be there for her. Hopefully she can get over her eating disorder and find another way to control her weight and feel good about herself. It 's sad Gregory had to be so mean. What happened to ol Greg?
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 04:26 am
I think I just died a lil. That rat bastard George deserves to but cut w a small knife and alcohol poured on it for a week. My heart hurts for Val, I know what she feels like, that is the worst feeling in the world.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 02:06 am
Love this chapter, Val spoke her mind to human incubator and opened up to Henry. Val has put on her big girl thongs!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 02:05 am
This was such a good chapter 👍😊
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 01:43 am
I thought the background on Valerie and George's relationship was necessary. In other chapters, you only hinted at it. So it's good to get the full scope. I'm more concerned in seeing where Val and Henry go from here. And I'm glad to see she's controlling her eating disorder urges (which is a HUGE step). Great update and I'll be waiting patiently for the next one.
Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 12:35 am
Jeez, this is heart breaking! I can't believe she's internalized all that and hasn't had someone to share this with and work through it. That was very hard to read, I hope Valerie's able to work through her issues.
Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 12:30 am
Stringing out this George thing is getting kind of old. I understand you peeling away the layers to show how she was damaged so, but enough is enough of the the build up.
Author's Response:
I understand but the only reason I didnt post the next part is because the chapter isnt done and this part was already too long. I will have to complete it and post it when I get some stuff done.
Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2014 11:46 pm
Update. I really like this story and the complex characters. Val isn't completely over Henry. I cannot wait to see what happens when he realizes he ran into her and that she looks completely different.
Reviewer: Jonesy Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 14 2014 02:47 pm
Psersonally, I like the length of your chapters. Please, don't change a thing in that respect.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2014 12:40 am
Honestly, I found myself skipping some if Henry's talk on his past. It seemed to go on to long and I really felt I wanted him to worry mire about Val. I mean...I love Val and Henry fucked up. While his background story with his father, drinking etc was important it just was too long for me. Sorry. I thought Val would get more from him. Anyway, I hope he comes to her correct. Begging, living apologizing and proposing. She feels so bad about her weight he better love it and tell her she's perfect. And please please don't let him have brought a date to this damn wedding. I think I'll pass out. Glad you're updating again...I was wondering about this story. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for this response. I do need to truncate Henry's revelation about his past, as well as most of the story in general. I have a problem with length when it comes to writing and will hopefully be able to make things more readable/shorter in the editing process.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: December 09 2014 06:38 am
Omg..I dont know where to begin... My heart breaks for her. She needs alot of help and really needs to stay away from Henry. I really want to root for them but she is still having a hard time loving herself. Both she and Henry are notorious for runnning away from their problems.
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: December 08 2014 05:31 am