ok...go ahead and give us Henry's pov--he better have a good reason for treating Val this way.  She could be deathly ill or pregnant---guess she would have to drop him a line on youtube then. 

I'm impatiently by patiently waiting for you to update I love this story I just hate that Henry ignores Val while he's away but acts like nothing happened when they're together but overall I love it I'm a little obsessed but hey good stories do that to a girl !

Where are you? Patiently waiting for an update......................

I would love to know what is going on in Henry's head.

I kind of think it would ruin the flow of the story. I think you can do a chapter where it's Henry explaining himself , but his POV in a chapter would throw it of a little. 

AHHHH Love this story so much!

I think it would be interesting to see what is going through Henry's mind because I'm sick of him leaving Valerie hanging.

Add soon.

SO I just started reading and OMG I am so Valerie...and then that last line in Chapt 1 by Henry...whoa sounds familiar.

Going back to reading now...loving it so far! 

I had to crack my fingers for this one. I don’t know where to begin, your story is life changing. As much as I love watching your story snowball into this epic yet “simple” love story you leave me floored at every turn. When I see that you have updated my heart literally flutters and drops all at the same time. I never know what tear drop size turn you have made that will ripple the ocean of characters you have. The people you have built are so real to me, so authentic to the point that I remember her tears in my life. I have cried those same tears and felt that same anguish. Valerie is my Heroine and she will win all the battles I lost. Battles I lost because I didn’t fight hard enough or was too scared of loosing to know when it was okay to let go. You are an amazing story teller and I am in awe of your efforts. I want to be the writer you are, how you take your readers on adventures out of their own lives even if its but for a short amount of time and I always strive to do that.

On to the story, I have been eager to review for the last three chapters first but I wanted to get the full picture first. Valerie is so brave but I wish she would share more of her struggles and be honest OUT LOUD about what really happened between her and George. I feel like we keep getting these bits and pieces of a horrible person but some of his “good” qualities that can be seen in Henry also. I don’t think that Valerie is a sad person, she has been beat down her entire life she doesn’t know how to win. It worries me how Henry can tell her anything can tell her anything but I love you and then leaves her high and dry when he KNOWS she has been hurt before. These two have to grow to be who they need to be for each other or they wont make it at all as a couple. That growth is going to come with pain and tears before we get to the rainbows and smiles. Valerie needs this so she can learn she is all she’s needs to make it.

Trust and believe your work is worth far more than publication and I would buy it. I know on your tumblr you post pictures of the characters, is there a way we can see that Ella, Peter or even that scumbag George looks like. When you update I am inspired to keep writing, thank you. BTW when do you think we will know the full story about Val and George, for some strange reason I feel like he may have died. I don’t know why I would think that, not that you eluded to that or anything lol. If not will he ever appear in the story? You probably had no intentions of doing this but can you tell Henry’s side of things at least for a brief moment in time. I just want to get inside his head to see what he’s thinking. One girl on fanfiction.net wrote a story in pov that was so HAUTE she had to write another in the other character’s pov. I don’t know if you want to do that but it’s just an idea. Happy Hunting!

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG henry why?!!!! goodness me, my heart literally hurts for val... I DO NOT WANT HENRY TO HAVE A POV ! Because i think it would change the flow of the story, and i would LOVEEEE to continue to read valerie's pov, considering the new change of scenary. I honestly could not believe Henry could build her self esteem so high and make her feel like a queen so quickly, to only knock it down even further than her bloody ex ! i hope she doesnt give in so easily to his charming personality. i hope somehow her ex comes back into the picture so he can give henry a nice view of how low and damaging his monthly dissapearances are towards valerie, that she would stoop so low, into going right back into what damaged her. I love who she is when she is around henry, there is always hope when love is in the picture. I HOPEEEEEE SHE MAKES HIM CRAWLLLL LMAO im so obsessed with this story ... you are freaken awesome and i hate that you've made me go this crazy over an amazingly great story. i hope you publish because i promise you i will purchase all your books !!! totally team val ! lol soooooo good !! excited for the new chapter! HUGEEE FAN ! 

I LOVE your prose! This story has an undeniable flow and the first person narrative gives so much more insight into the real romance and dynamic between the characters.  From what I've been reading lately, it's a testament to a well thought out understanding of who your characters are or are becoming. I greatly applaud you for that. It's not the stereotypical, "weeks later, we had fallen madly in love" with no reasoning or description of how that process came about. There's the stable argument for wanting Val and Henry to work through their apprehension and be together because you feel you really know them. Mommy and Daddy Jones are a great foil and an even more complex dynamic to bring into the story, especially Mama. I'm excited to read the big reveal of George's cruelty behind a charming on paper facade, especially when Val's mother learns of it. You're doing a fantastic job; keep up the great work! 

I would love to see Henry's pov it's actually quite hard reading complex characters in only one pov. I love val, but I do get tired of just her voice and I often leave the chapters wondering what Henry is thinking. It is yiur choice over all, but I think it's a great idea!

I would love to see a chapter in Henry's POV,they have other authors in the chamber that alternate the main characters POV and I really enjoy that. I also think for Henry it would be very interesting since he is so guarded.

I would love to read Henry's POV because I really want to know how exactly he feels about Val......He definitely likes Val but then in last chapter after he went back, he ignored her calls and texts and that is not fair to Val after everything they have gone through.So I don't think one chapter in Henry's POV will affect the story but it will definitely give an insight into his character and the reason for the way he behaves with Val.But at the end it's your choice and opinion and I will love reading whatever you choose to go with.