Awesome chapter!! 💖😊😍💖😊. 100 stars!

This chapter was so touching. I want more!

Well, these last two chapters have been amazing. Your writing is all encompasing. I've never been so inside the head of a character as Valerie. It does take some getting used to, but at this point she feels so familiar to me. I recognize this person, and so it's easier for me to go on this journey with her.

Henry is, dare I say it: almost perfect. I fear you have some other part of him locked up, waiting to spring on us that won't be so swoon worthy. You write him perfectly, and I almost wish we could get a chapter from his POV, so that I could know fully what he's thinking.

Anyway, all that to say I am fully invested in these characters, and cannot wait to see what you will put them through next. Apart of me wants this to continue to be blissful for Valerie, because she obviously deserves it. You made me give a damn, and when a writer does that, they have done thier job well.

Henry once again put it down lol! I love the chemistry between him & Val. I didn't think she was annoying.  Actually, I think you perfectly captured the vulnerability of your character. Like all your other chapters I loved this one. I'm hoping we see a little more of Val's cocky side in other chapters too lol. I'm looking forward to your next update. 

I don't think Val was annoying at all. I think you're writing her insecurities very well and seeing them play out is making Henry all the more loveable. I just fear for when one of them eventually messes up and I kind of hope its Henry because it would be nice to have some insecurity in him or see his pov. I would love it if Val gets some self confidence and learns how awesome she is. I also would love it if she sees that Henry isn't perfect. I can't wait to see what roads you lead us down!

Loved it. 

I think Henry is perfect for her. He's so intune with her mind,body, and soul which is just what she needs. At first I was thinking give it a rest and enjoy. Then I thought about it and realized she's having normal doubts its sad but she' s really fucked up over George. I still think she's come along way and she's growing more confident without realizing it. Can't forget about the sex! That scene makes me want a Henry for myself lol. 

Hot update!!!  A bit surprised at Valerie's insecurities as much encouragement that Henry has been giving her, but I suppose the wounds from her past run deep. I sure hope she can find it within herself to get passed it.

I was so glad to see your update. I hope to see more soon! :0)

Happy holidays all!

Musicluva

I didn't find Val annoying at all. In acutuality I find her refreshing, I get tired of reading about women who have some sort of insecurity that they use a crutch or for conflict. Yet it all comes across as superficial. But with your writing it's actually fleshed out versus you just telling your reader Val hates her body, we get a peek inside of her mindset. I can see it, I understand it, and it resonates with me.

Hot Prologue and I loved the 1st time they met yes, her self-esteem is a bit low.  I hope she is able to work that out or henry is aboe to work it out for her. *smile*

Thank you for sharing.  I am glad i found this story.

Happy writing.

very good update

This is one of the best stories I ever read. Honey... That sex scene gave me chills. Seriously I have officially replaced Christiano Ronaldo in my fantasies with Henry Walker. He's a mother f-ing sex god. You have made me fall in love with him. Now ya girl Val makes me wanna smack he sometimes, she needs to realize that she deserves this...that she deserves him. I'm so happy for the both of them, finding someone that stimulates your mind and you sexually is rare. I hope it's all roses for them here on out. Awesome story and I will definitely be looking out for this completed chapter...amazing.

Yes you should publish this story it's really good. At first I really wasn't sure which way the story was going but after this chapter I can see it. All I can say is please don't rush the ending.