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Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

This is a fabulous story. If you want to publish this, you definitely have a customer in me. Please do. These characters deserve an ending.

 Reviewer: bella200183 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2013 01:01 am
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

I got so excited you updated...This is beautiful and if you published it I'd pay to own it for good. You're a very talented writer and you've developed each and every character (and side character) so wonderfully. I'm looking forward to what you decide to do.

 Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2013 09:20 am
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

I would buy this wonderful story.  I just know his friend on the phone is going to be rude to is girl bc she is not his usal type.  Hopefully, she will stand up and eavedropping on the phone call gave her the ammunition to do a more than decent comeback.  Henry is in love and sprung. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2013 09:00 am
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

I am truly loving this story. Beautifully written with such depth of characters in Henry and Valerie. I'll definitely buy this if you publish!

 Reviewer: ammalicious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2013 07:00 am
Title: Chapter 15

I hope it works out for her..she has to become stronger if she wants him.

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2013 03:00 am
Title: Prologue

I love how you've written these characters. I love how they interact with each other.  I love how detailed this story is.   I think that you should  definitely publish  it.  It's  a really interesting , well written story.  I would definitely buy it.   So once its published send your fans a shout out and let us know where we can purchase it.  I'm so proud like I had something to do with  this.  And If I see it at a bookstore I'm gonnna be excited and hollering out, " Yeah this my girl.  I read this story "  I wish you so much success.

 Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 12 2013 12:31 am
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

I love how your previews are longer than two of my chapters combined. I say publish away. Hell, I'd buy it. 

 Reviewer: WrittenC Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 11:17 pm
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

This has got to be one of my favorite stories on this site. Please update quickly!

 Reviewer: xbelivex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 09:39 pm
Title: Chapter 15

This sex scene is everything. Soul searing. Rauncy yet romantic. love

 Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 09:12 pm
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

Girl, publish it! Seriously. This story is amazing. 

 Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 09:03 pm
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

I would totally buy your book! It's super good! Don't sell your self short either! I think this is honestly one of the most well written work on the website. Well thought out, characters are relatable, just the right mix of fluff and drama, in no way over the top. I can't wait for the next part!

 Reviewer: Justkillingtime21691 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 07:13 pm
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

You should definitely publish this story.This is one of my favorite story on the Chamber. You are truly blessed with the gift to write....This preview has left me wanting to read more of this chapter.Plzzz update soon.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 06:45 pm
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

I love this story and definitely think you should publish it.  The Chamber has so many talented writers.  I envy everybody's talent.  This story is really good.  Trust me I've been watching for an update!!  I hope he treats her right.  She deserves love and so does he.  He's made poor choices in the past with models and married women.  Valerie is a real woman...someone who would love him regardless and have his back.  he needs to realize this and help her understand how special she is.  oh and her daddy is an ass!

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 06:28 pm
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

Definitely publish! This story is amazing and way better than some of the ones I buy from Barnes and Noble. I can't wait to read the rest of this add! I love that Henry is so taken with her. They're so cute I love it! Valerie is even  being reasonable and trusting her heart. George is something that she needs to overcome. I think she needs closure but I don't know about her standing up to him and telling him how she feels. It might make her feel worse.

 Reviewer: aDreamaFantasy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 05:16 pm
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

Without question. There is no doubt in my mind that you need to publish this. 

 Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 03:52 pm
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

Yes!  Most definitely publishable material! 👍a86;a039;

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 02:51 pm
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

How dare you not deliver a full chapter! Do you know how in love I am with this story to the point that I reread this to no end. I have so much I want to say but I have to go back to work. The overall complexities of the characters and their humanity is just amazing I love your work.

 Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 02:36 pm
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

This story is very publishable xso please do it.  I would buy this book! Val needs to get out of her head and away from her so called family. Enuff said...,

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 02:07 pm
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

Don't publish until this is finished pleeeeeeease! I've waited so long for this story to be completed and it's only right that you finish it for those who've stuck by you the entire time.

 Reviewer: MiAmourrr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 12:45 pm
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

I love this story.  It's different and real.  Of course you should publish!  I am praying that I'll be able to help a lot of talent here on the Chamber get published.  There are some awesome stories being written here!  Keep up the good work!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 10:13 am
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

I just want to say YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!! 

 

Been waiting on the next update and now I'm like a kid waiting for Santa....

 

WHOOHOO!!

 Reviewer: babygirl2cute4u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 07:50 am
Title: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

I THOUGHT YOU WOULD NEVER UPDATE THIS AMAZING STORY AGAIN! its awesome that you are thinking of pubishing it, but does that mean you wont finish it here?

 Reviewer: whatisloveee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 07:35 am
Title: Prologue

one of my favorite stories on here!! when will we get an update!? :) 

 Reviewer: britt Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2013 03:02 am
Title: Prologue

I just love this story, so I've been checking for an update here daily. I can't wait! 😊

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2013 11:48 pm
Title: Prologue

When can we expect the next update? I literally cant wait lol xx

 Reviewer: Lucy_william Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2013 05:01 am


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