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Title: Prologue

Why do i have this feeling that Peter and Henry are running game on Val? Henry can get her out the way so Peter can have more time with his girl.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2013 07:43 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter

 Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2013 05:30 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I love Henry, Peter is an ahold!  Ella is cool peoples!  I think that Henry will be good for Val. More please!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2013 03:58 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I feel for Valerie...her self-esteem is pretty low and she has no confidence in herself.  Looks like she's been living in the shadow of her beautiful sister for a while and is just content with the status quo. 

Hope Henry is the one to bring her out of her shell and help her start living again...he seems quite persistant so I guess there's hope...

 Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2013 02:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter. I like Henry's charm and Val's (valerie) acknowledgement of her issues. 

How does Val look? We got everyone's else's description, but not hers..is it coming up?

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2013 11:07 am
Title: Chapter 1

Henry wants her

 Reviewer: Bigsix Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2013 09:32 am
Title: Prologue

sounds interesting

 Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 04:45 pm
Title: Prologue

There's a struggle within her from the start. Looks interesting.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 04:12 pm
Title: Prologue

Very nice! 

 Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 02:58 pm
Title: Prologue

Very interesting start...can't wait to read more...so many questions...

 Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 02:32 pm
Title: Prologue

That was freaking hot!  I need me a Henry.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 02:18 pm
Title: Prologue

I'm hooked already! What a strong start.

 Reviewer: Raven Frost Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 09:20 am
Title: Prologue

Great start...Please give us more

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Date: May 08 2013 08:21 am
Title: Prologue

Get out where?

Nyeesha

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 07:43 am
Title: Prologue

I like it! :)

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Date: May 08 2013 06:39 am
Title: Prologue

Interesting start!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 06:38 am


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