Title: Chapter 20

First, its good Dmitri is trying to makes things right with his brother. Take that out on his father and stepmother, the ones who actually deserve it!

Also, I'm glad Sasha is going to stay. Not for Dmitri, but for herself. He doesn't have to grovel, but she need not make it easy for him either. She won't. Before she gave everything she had, now he has to earn it. And Sasha doesn't hate Dmitri, really. It all just cuts too deep and too much, and she went further with him than anyone else before. That's why she reacted the way she did. But, now lets keep it moving and see how they both do.

Nice!


Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2014 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 20

Damn, Dmitri. That even convinced me

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2014 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 20

I'm beyond happy that Dim and Dom are on their way to developing a much needed reationship. Dimitri needs Dominic. He really does. Dom is about the only one who'll tell him what's what.

And Sasha should've stayed only if she's interested in finding "closure" (hate that word) with Dimitri. Whether it means them getting back to together or not. Because, it ain't over yet. I really don't want to see any games being played. I hope they both work on their own issues and also the issues they had as a couple. Either way, this promises to be a bumpy, hot and sexy ride.

Great update, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2014 02:07 am

Title: Chapter 20

I need more grovelling from Dmitri.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2014 12:25 am

Title: Chapter 20

Wow!  This chapter did not disappoint! I am happy to see Dmitri trying to replace all his negative actions w/ good ones. I absolutely can't wait to read more!! 

Reviewer: Alwayzindastarz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 10:47 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Yassssssssss!!!!!! This chapter has my heart fluttering 

Reviewer: maident Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 09:36 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Thanks for the update.  I have been straddled the fence on Sasha given D. a 2nd chance, but after this update, I think she should, but go real, real slow.   There should be no touching, no kissing,  no sex at all until he wins her back.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 09:33 pm

Title: Chapter 20

It would be good to hear him out, besides she is still in love with Dmitri. Good sruff!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 09:29 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Nice groveling. It's a little over the top, but so was that scene at the hospital. Please don't let her give in too soon. He has something to prove. Let him.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 09:22 pm

Title: Chapter 20

ok alright I cracked a bit so there happy lol

I've always been a Dom lover he's my fav and I'm glad he's the bigger one here. He's the one talking sense here esp. to Dmitri and I am happy that their relationship is on the path to being resolved. I hope Dom get's a good love in his life he's a good man

Right Sasha girl hahaha she's making his behind work look at that... in all though I'm happy for her and we'll see where this goes. Both Sasha and I are watching that Dmitri mmhmm we shall see 

Thanks for the update ever a rollercoaster this Dmitri haha he's a charater all right

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 09:09 pm

Title: Chapter 20

I like this story but I'm over him. Dmitri  is pathetic it took 3 years for him to decide she is what he wanted only after seeing her. So if she never conveniently was dropped in his lap he would never have pursued her. Wow I feel the undying love. He is a miserable man who is looking for someone to idolize him and she fits the bill right now. She should have sat down took out her phone and stalked a cab. He isn't groveling he has disrespected her and humiliated her a million times and after three years sends flowers. Team Carter all the way sometimes the girl should actually pick the guy who deserves her.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 08:44 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Thanks for the new chapter ! I like that Dmitri mooks to be on his way to work on his relationship with his brother. Screw that horrible dad : Dom and Nadia are his family, and now that Nadia seems do be better, having saught treatment and worked on her issue, those are the family relationship he can (re)build now.

I am also glad that Sasha stayed to have dinner. I am team Sasha and Dmitri. I still think they were both at fault for the demise of their relationship. Dmitri hurt and mistreated her but she did too when she disregarded what he wanted and hurt his sister, even though it was an accident. And I don't like wathcing people be humiliated or "groveling" to "make amend". When you admit your mistake, own your shit and ask for forgiveness and to move on with the other person, no need to lead them on or taunt them : you either give your relationship another chane or you move on. I am glad Sasha looks like she may be giving their relationship another chance.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 08:19 pm

Title: Chapter 20

I'm not feeling him at all. IDK. 3 years is a long time to think about how she was treated by Dmitri before and during their time together. EVEN after she gave him practically everything he treated her like trash and threw it away. In real life, I'd run as far as I could from him. I'd forgive him to find personal closure and peace...but yea...no. 

Great update!! Nothing warms my heart more that a man groveling. 

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 07:51 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Sorry but I'm still rooten for Carter. Dmitri can go to hell.

Reviewer: AD Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 07:10 pm

Title: Chapter 20

more groveling is needed.  its a good start but folks dont appreciate the well till the water runs dry, so his ass has got to be put to work.  folk never appreciate things they have not worked for....happy for Dom & D though.

Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 05:59 pm

Title: Chapter 20

I've always liked Dmitri flaws and all I'm just glad they're both dealing with their issues

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 05:54 pm

Title: Chapter 20

For Sasha yes it was good to hear him out not for him.  I am softening up just a bit for Dmitri but I still feel he has a whole lotta work to do to win our girl back.  He put her through some hoops this dinner is just a start.

I am so very happy to see Dmitri finally opening up to Dom it is long over due and I am happy to see it.  Though Dmitri has never tried to see it Dom has always been in his corner and his main supporter other then his mother.  It was never his fault what Nic and Nat did to come btwn Dmitri's mother and Nic.  Nic was and always will be an a$$hole.  I am surprised Nat has lasted this long, and Nic hasn't been cheating on her or vice verse but then again maybe those two deserve each other.

Thank you for the update.  I can't wait to hear more about Sas and Dmitri's date.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 05:52 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Yeah!!!  Dmitir is trying, even though he has lots to prove, but I'm glad she's willing to listen.  I'm sure he'll have to grovel a whole lot more!!  Dominic and Dmitri are getting along too.  I love this story.  Ok, on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 05:29 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Oh Sasha! Make him work overtime for your love this time.

Reviewer: Jojo65 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 05:20 pm

Title: Chapter 18

oooooh you so wrong for dat!!!

Reviewer: Aleta Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 04:39 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Great update! Loved that Sasha stood up to that horriable Faye!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 10 2014 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 19

update update , suspence is  unbearable lol

Reviewer: BABYBELL Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2014 09:37 am

Title: Chapter 19

I love it! Sasha is my hero, I know exactly how she feels and changing is not easy nor wanted sometimes. But she focused on herself and what she wants in life, her life.

Though, I will always want her and Dmitri to be together, he has to earn her love and trust. I hated how she gave him so much power but that is over now and changes have been made. So has their lives. I hope Dmitri is half the man he claims to be because this time, Sasha is not a girl, she is a GROWN ASS Woman!!!

 

LOVE IT!! Please make that next chapter. I will be waiting... Great JOB :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 07:20 pm

Title: Chapter 19

This chapter was so great.  I'm really looking forward to what happens next. 

Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 09:17 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Thank God Sasha put Faye in her place.

I do believe Sasha need to forgive Dmitri, she doesn't have to get back with him. She may not be as angry once she forgives him. Sasha still has a ways to go with overcoming her insecurities.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 10:41 am



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