Title: Chapter 17

Ugh, screw Carter.  He has no charisma.  I want Sasha back in Dmitri's arms after he begs and pleads to have her back.  Like, on his knees, grovelling, tears - the works.  Also, I want to know more about the waitress friend, Dominic, Dmitri's best friend, and their little love triangle.  What was with that arranged marriage thing?  

I'm glad to see them moving on in the future. Sasha seems to have grown in a lot of different ways which is great for the story.  I'd like to see Dmitri grow as well.  What can I say?  I'm a little bit of a traditionalist and I want a fluff, HEA ending. 

Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 09:00 am

Title: Cast

Boy am I glad to have this story back! first of all,i love that sasha is working on herself and that she had the courage to confront dmitri and breakup with him properly,the old sasha would have begged him to take her back. with that being said, i don't see Dom going after sasha,especially when he is aware that his brother still loves her. I picture him befriending sasha and play mind games with Dmitri just to force him to go after sasha. Dom and sasha can be attracted to each other,but hers comes from the fact that he reminds her of Dmitri. and as for carter,i don't know...i don't mind her being with him but she should not use him,because if her reaction at seeing Dom and thinking it was Dmitri is any indication, she is so not over him.and sasha need to make dmitri work for her forgiveness and bratty nadia has to apologize. it's not enough to apologize to Dmitri,nah uh,she also caused sasha serious emotional distress.

I totally love this story!can't wait for Dmitri's next move:)

Reviewer: marchbabe Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 11:45 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Yea! you're back!!!! Great new chapter.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 06:30 am

Title: Chapter 16

NOOOOO! You're killing me here.

Reviewer: M_Denise Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 05:12 am

Title: Chapter 17

Thanks for the update. Love the twist and turns in the story.

Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 12:05 am

Title: Chapter 17

Why is Sasha shaking like a leaf around Dominic?? If anything, I thought she would be more indifferent towards that whole family after the way she was treated.

And I don't know what to make of Dominic and exchanging numbers with Sasha. I'm going to choose to believe that ultimately its for Dmitri somehow. I din't think he'd ever betray his brother like that, no matter what has happened between them.

Nadia is still a little snot. She should apologize to Sasha for her overall behavior towards her. 

Dmitri..meh, whatever!

Excellent!!

Japan is exciting! Is it permanent?


Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 08:05 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Make Dimitri grovel and beg for Sasha to leave Carter. Dom is just the catalyst- he's befriended Sasha again to help them return to each other

Reviewer: Yummy!! Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 10:16 am

Title: Chapter 17

Carter sounds like a good guy. I hope Sasha doesn't hurt him to go running back to Dimitri. I also hope Carter is a good guy, too many black men are written as the villain in i/r romance.

I like Dominic. It would be interesting if Sasha and Dom started dating. A bit weird, but it's Dimitri's loss.

I hope Sasha stop being so gittery. 

 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 08:36 am

Title: Chapter 17

Great update,  enjoy your time in Japan. 

If you get a chance fly over to Korea for the day it is a short flight the shopping is fantastic :-)    Careful with the street vendors food though...Alison

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 05:19 am

Title: Chapter 17

Sasha has really grown but she  is still suffering from first love flashbacks.

 

I hope her and Dominic grow closer and Dimitri sees what he threw awsy.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 04:32 am

Title: Cast

Yes!! You updated.
I still love Sasha but she should have just told Lola that she doesn't like Carter and that is it.
I am so happy that Sasha is still innocent there is no reason to just go around sleeping with people just because, that is not cute. I love her innocence it's what makes her character so beautiful having been with only one person myself.... my husband, it is a special connection. The grass is not always greener and I don't need to test it out only to regret it later.

I am all for Dmitry and Sasha, they are good together and I think that their love deserves a second chance.

I am so happy for Nadia, she has learned from her mistakes so I am ready to meet the new Nadia. If we were all judged by the wrong things that we have done in our lives and we all have, it would be a sorry judgmental world.

You should consider publishing because your writing is excellent.
I don't like the messing with brothers thing so hopefully it will not amount to much. You just don't cross that line because as family you just don't.

As always it is your story and I will read it regardless :)

Can't wait to read the rest.

Reviewer: Chocolate1Lover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 03:35 am

Title: Chapter 17

I'm glad Sasha is getting her life together, but I'm kind of hoping she'll get with Dominic. Carter and Lola should hook up since she seems to be more into him than Sasha. Though you haven't properly introduced Carter, he sounds like a nice guy and I would hate to see him get hurt if Sasha decides to dump him when that douchebage Dmitri comes back into the picture. Still not feeling Dmitri but I hope he does better and finally stands up to his father.   And Nadia can still kick rocks for all I care. 

Still hoping for Sasha to run into those skanks Faye and the other chick to put them in their places. Thanks for the update. Looking forward to more!!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 02:58 am

Title: Chapter 17

Soooooooo happy to see this story back!! Thanks for sharing this update!!!

Reviewer: AnnieNathanson Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 02:32 am

Title: Cast

5***** make him work 24/7 to get her back

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 02:31 am

Title: Chapter 17

Yea!!! You're back. I love Sasha. I do think her and Dominic have an attraction. Will he try something or will they just be friends? Either way Dmitri is gonna lose it.  He deserves to hurt some though. Can't wait!!! :)

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 02:28 am

Title: Chapter 17

Congrats on your move to Japan!

I hope Sasha gives him a run for his money--three long yrs and no apology from him or his nutty sister (she couldn't even say Sasha's name).  Nat understands the part she played in the breakup, but I don't think she is sorry.

Has Sasha changed her looks at all?  I had hoped Sasha had had sex with someone else, if nothing else but to compare the guy with D.   At least she feels some attraction to the new guy.  Now that D. is making the effort to find her--i hope she runs his ass ragged.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 01:51 am

Title: Chapter 17

YAYYYYY! Can't wait for the new update!!

Reviewer: Daddyprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 12:38 am

Title: Chapter 17

Yeah a new update! Awesome. Glad that Sasha is handling herself. As far as her and Dominic I think they would be better off as casual acquaintances. Even being friends can lead to someone catching feelings whether it's intentional or not. Not saying it happens all the time between men and women but it's not completely uncommon either. I think at the end Dimitri might have been in the phone with Dominic. IDK, Dom running into Sasha at a club in Boston and asking for her number knowing how much she loved his brother seemed a bit suspect especially considering he was the one who pointed out that Dimitri had been in the wrong for the way he treated Sasha at the hospital. But I guess I will have to wait and see.

As far as Carter goes, I don't think Sasha is wrong for giving him another chance. Sometimes we don't go into things with an open mind because we're too caught up on what happened in the past. But if she's not feeling him on a romantic level then she shouldn't let things escalate and be honest with him.

Thank you and good luck learning Japanese!

Reviewer: Lapis Love Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 12:27 am

Title: Chapter 17

Give Carter a chance, That whole brothers thing is just a bit distasteful. She only wants Dominic because he reminds her of Dmitri.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 12:13 am

Title: Chapter 17

Sasha and Dominic would be wrong. Very wrong. Yes its been three years and Sasha is single, but she used to be his brothers woman. And I think that deep down he knows that Dimitri may still love her. Its not worth it. I also hope that Sasha won't end up leading Carter on and giving him false hoop. If she is not interested in continuing dating him, then she should be honest with him.

Reviewer: lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 11:02 pm

Title: Chapter 17

I seriously hope that this won't turn out in to one of those cliche triangle of two brothers liking the same woman. Its so overdone. Besides that its totally not worth it. If Dominic wants to have a friendship with Sasha that would be fine. But if its more that he wants then that speaks volume of him. Who would willingly go after a woman that your own brother was involved with or maybe even still loves? Even if he didn't like the choices that Dimitri had made, and also doesn't have a close relationship with him, he is still his brother. And I think that deep down he must know that Dimitri still loves Sasha. It would be wrong of him to get involve with her knowing all of this. There are just some lines that you shouldn't cross. Besides that it would also not be fair to him, because even though  Sasha may find him attractive, she doesn't really like him that way. She will always compare him with Dimitri. She would be leading him on and that is not okay. 

 

As for her and Carter, I don't know. I see that she still lets other people's opinion have affect on her. I mean like seriously, if she is not that interested in Carter, she shouldn't have let Lola talk her in to it. Its her life, and she is the one who would have to be in a relationship to which she is not interested in and be unhappy. Lola should respect her wishes. I get that she doesn't want Sasha to be alone. But if its obvious that she is not interested in someone she should just drop it and let Sasha handle her own business. 

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 10:55 pm

Title: Chapter 17

What about Justin ? 

Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 10:39 pm

Title: Chapter 17

I think Saqsha should make Dimitri work for it.  She is still technically single and she should have fun dating ether CArter or Dominic.  Hell what not both :P

Reviewer: urtrippin2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 17

I think Sashsa should stay away from Dominic. As sweet as he seems to be, she will be leading him on, maybe not on purpose, but she will nonetheless. She may even be attracted to him, but he is not Dmitri. So yes, please make her stary away from Dominic unless they are going to be strictly friends, but that may be too ackward for Sasha. As for Carter, no she should steer clear of him as well. Sasha seems in a good place right now. I'm glad Nadia has gotten help and stopped being a tyrant. Dmitri, well, I still do not care for him, but we will see. I just HOPE once Sasha and Dmitri finally meet up again that Sasha has better control of herself where he is concerned. Loved it!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 09:41 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Awesome your back :)

I think that Sasha and Carter is a no go. As her friend I wouldn't have talked her into going on another date with someone that she felt no interest in.
Also Lola came off a little to annoying to me, Sasha should have just told her to drop it because she is not interested in Carter and let that be the end of it, but she caved, I hope she continues to try and remain stronger instead of falling for peer pressure.
It's unfair to Carter because at best he will just be a rebound.
I'm sure that Dominic cares about Sasha because he knows that she is a good girl but hopefully they will never cross the line, he is Dmitri's brother after all and that is not a good look.

I'm not a fan of the try and make yourself like someone else but of course when the person that you still love "cough cough" Dmitri comes back you hurt the other person and be with the one you love. I have always found that to be childish. Sasha knows how she feels, she feels nothing for Carter but loves Dmitri so she should be true to herself and go from there. I say leave Carter out of it, no need for a love triangle they are becoming cliché.

Maybe Lola and Justin would make a good couple. He is nice and laidback to her dominant hear me roar attitude.

Also where is Dina?

I am very proud of Nadia. Anorexia is one of the worst conditions to have and often ends fatally. I like that she has accepted responsibility for her actions, I hope that she continues to heal. I will not judge her character because I understand the seriousness of that condition.

I can't wait for a Dmitri/Sasha reunion.

I can't wait to see Dmitri go after Sasha, it should be fun.

Update Soon!!

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 09:12 pm



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