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Title: Chapter 14

great update 

 Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2013 02:14 am
Title: Chapter 14

Yah you updated!! Totally understand about school, make that your number one.
WOW Dimitri's dad is a total jerk. I understand that Sasha wants everyone to get along but Dimitri's dad had no respect for her or his son so while Dimitri should forgive his father so that the power that his father still has on him will go away, I don't think that Dimitri needs him in his life. The bath idea was great though, I hope that Dimitri will understand that Sasha was just trying to help and is undeserving of his anger.

Update Soon!!

 Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2013 01:20 am
Title: Chapter 14

Great update.
I hope that Dimitri will not be to angry at Sasha for just telling him her opinion. She should be able to say what she likes without having to worry about his anger. He can disagree but taking his anger out on her is not necessary. Can't wait for the next chapter.

 Reviewer: Chocolate1lover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 02 2013 01:13 am
Title: Chapter 14

Well, that nice steamy relaxing bath just turned ice cold.

Poor Sahsa, I think the ball is about to drop on their relationship.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2013 01:12 am
Title: Chapter 14

So happy you're back!!! Thanks for the new chapter.

Now Sasha, sweety, the bath idea was a very good one, your mother story was very heartbreaking, but your piece of advice was just crap. Stop projecting your family issues on your boo. Some people are just assholes you are better to get out of your life and move on, not matter if they are "family" or not. Sur, it sucks and hurts, but just because some one was part-responsible for giving you life does not mean you owe them life long daddy or mommy issues. Dmitri's father sounded and behaved like a total big giant asshole and Dmitri is way better to not have him in his life. he may be able to help Nadia, and he definetely should try and build a better relationship with his brother, who looked and behaved like the only decent and nive person in this family, except for our dear Dmitri, but he needs to kick this father from hell out of his life before he destroy it.

Nice to have some explanation from Slade.

What about Dominic and Teagan? That could be a nice pairing...

 Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2013 12:26 am
Title: Chapter 14

OMG you dont know how happy i am about this update.

 Reviewer: val Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 02 2013 12:14 am
Title: Chapter 14

I liked the update I hope that they don't have to go through to much angst. I do hope that Dmitri tries to understand his father and get a good relationship with him. 

 Reviewer: kiki729 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 01 2013 11:48 pm
Title: Chapter 14

Dmitri's father is a bastard, and perhaps I'm wrong but I wanted him to knock his dad out, but I'm glad (grudgingly) he didn't since he was at a function where he was being honored and his colleagues were around. But Nik whatever his name is was dead wrong on ALL levels. Don't like him one bit and his second wife isn't much better, imo.

I feel bad for Sasha in what happened to her in her past with her mom. That's really heartbreaking to be abandoned like that, but it was good development to show why Sasha was so insecure in the beginning of the story and she's slowly coming into her own. So I totally understand her need to push Dmitri to be there for his sister and to make amends with his dad though, I'm sure Dmitri will fight it tooth and nail.

Loved the update!

 Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2013 11:34 pm
Title: Chapter 14

i think it's  messed up that the chapter ended there. LOL

 Reviewer: Bryleigh Lisette Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 01 2013 11:28 pm
Title: Chapter 14

Sasha is so wrong her mother not wanting her is not the same as his father wanting to control him and she is wrong to suggest that he do it and it is not her place to try and get nadia and Dmitri talking again did she bump her head somewhere and you forgot to mention it.

 Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2013 11:25 pm
Title: Chapter 14

Sasha you have no idea what history s father does d to him and you are wrong for suggesting that Dimitri make amends.  The anger that you are about to feel from Dimitri will be deserve because you should have tried t get him to talk hos father and he hates instead of sprouting out the bull sugady!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2013 11:09 pm
Title: Chapter 13

wow you don't know how many times I read and reread this story! I love it and I can't wait for you to come out with a new chap! and I would love to c more of Dominic:)

 Reviewer: marchbabe Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 05 2013 02:14 pm
Title: Cast

I just think she was caught up in the moment and how good it felt to be with Dimitri at the event! And he finally claimed her in front of slade! She just wanted to express it! It would have been nice if they werent interrupted cause he feels the same way about sasha!! New update sooon!!! :) 

 Reviewer: britt Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2013 09:53 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Oh.......

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 23 2013 03:40 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Does anyone else feel like Sasha's confession was out of place. I feel that they were not in the proper venue for that confession. She should have saved it. How awkward. 

 Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 05:26 am
Title: Chapter 13

it was a great come back chapter!

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 05:11 am
Title: Cast

And also, "What the hell, Slade!"  Ugh, I hope you have to pine for Dina and then crawl back to her!

 Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 04:02 am
Title: Chapter 13

Be strong, Dmitri!  Take her aside and tell her you love her!  

 Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 04:01 am
Title: Chapter 13

Damn! Did Dmitri just become a deaf mute? How could he not say anything? I understand his father just walked up, but DAMN! He couldn't even grunt an affirmative? At least then Sasha would know she hasn't made a complete fool out of herself for this Ass!   Dmitri could at least whisper something in her ear so she will know if he feels the same or something!  But at least he told that worrisome ass sister of his off! Sasha was too nice, I would have put my foot in her anorexic ass! While asking her who the Hell is she calling a BITCH?

Dmitri would know not to cross Sasha then! 

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 02:20 am
Title: Chapter 13

well it seems that things are going into a different direction.  It seems that Dimitri still has a long way to go.  Little by little, Sasha is becoming more confidant.  As for Dina and Slade, I really do not know how to feel.  They started off well I suppose that things change or maybe it was not meant to be.  As for the party, Dimitri took a huge step about making their relationship public.  Of course all good pros come with a bad con.  The appearencr of his father really pushed him off the edge.  The drama will soon begin and I wonder if he will stand up to his father or return to his old ways?

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 01:13 am
Title: Chapter 13

Amazing. I love this story. Can't wait for another update. 

 Reviewer: Tashluvsyou Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 12:12 am
Title: Chapter 13

thanks for the update sasha!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 11:23 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Please don't tell me Slade got with Faye?! She's such a bitch!

 Reviewer: bert8813 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 08:11 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Where is a pic of Dina?

 Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 07:36 pm
Title: Chapter 13

ok ok first I'm glad Dmitri told his sister like it is because she needs a hard slap maybe two. She's absolutely ridiculous and I hope she figures herself out before it's too late. sad child she is.

second- I was happy that Dmitri was able to introduce Sasha as his girlfriend...It's about damn time

third- What's up with Slade? 

Four- not surprised that he couldn't say I love you back... Dmitri still has his problems to work out, in fact, it's bad but I've been waiting to see if, what his brother said about him breaking her heart, if that's going to come true, because I still have my doubts about Dmitri and to make matters worse, I'm comes the bull of a father. 

Five- what's going to happen now that dad is here? Is Sasha and Dmitri's relationship going to the shits because if Dimtri does not stand up to his dad and take his life back, since he still has not fully done that yet, then who knows what's going to happen... ugh TELL ME

thanks for the update

 Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 07:36 pm


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