So that is Thomas' plan, but would this mean that Alfred's body/looks will know longer be used. So in that case it is good that Selena is attracted to Thomas so that when Alfred takes over his body she will still be attracted to him. It's like the best parts of them both either way I hope that Alfred comes out on top, he is why I read the story, I mean it is named after him lol.
Best
Author's Response:
True, which is another reason Thomas wanted to be a part of their lives. However the transference would only be done if all parties would agree to it. Right now though, Thomas is focusing on the Androids.
Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2013 10:26 pm
Thank God it wasn't a threesome. See I knew that Selena wasn't going to fight her attraction for Thomas for Alfred's sake, I knew it, most women can when "committed" to someone else but some do not and cheat. Oh well, I skipped over anything about them 3 but I had to read to try and understand what Thomas' home wrecking behind has planned. So if I am understanding this. Thomas knows that he is dying so he wants to somehow fuse the good parts and the mind/consciousness of Alfred to his body, this way Alfred can use his body and be with Selena as a human? Is that right? Well that is interesting so Alfred will look like Thomas and not Alfred but I love Alfred :(?
Brenda!! What are you doing to me, my feelings are all over the place, definitely the signature of a good writer. Like a train wreck I can't turn away so I am on this ride to the end even if Selena and Thomas get together, just let me know so that I can go and comfort Alfred.
Update Soon!!!
Author's Response:
Now, now. If Alfred decides to go human, he will of course lose his physcial features and take on those of his host. That's the cost of going human. However, Thomas immediate concern is NOT extending his life, but to free the androids. More is coming!
Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed
[Report This]Date: October 14 2013 10:19 pm
Great update !!! I'm so Here for a Selena, Thomas and Alfred threesome.(my fingers are crossed) I loved the way Charles took up for Thomas. I really hope Anne gets what's coming to her. Can't wait for the next update. :)
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 14 2013 09:40 pm
Finally. I caught up.Well I am extremely excited to see what happens next. I am waiting for. Thomas to make his move already. This story is bloody good.
Reviewer: CestianiDauphin1 Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2013 09:30 pm
So I just want to say that this is every woman's wet dream, LOL! Two men! *wipes brow* Now, I will not lie that I am Team Alfred, BUT I will say this is YOUR story so do what you want and don't feel bad about it. We'll enjoy anything you give us because you're a great writer. Keep doing your thing ;)
Reviewer: writinglass Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2013 09:16 pm
AHHHHHH!!! Android-human hybrids. This is definitely sci-fi and right up my alley. So Charles has to physically be taken offline and Thomas wants to extend that ability to the other androids...interesting twist but probably not as interesting as being able to merge a human consciousness with that of a machine. I see this having serious repercussions down the line, but we can get into that later. Thanks for updating!
Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2013 09:08 pm
There should have been a threesome+ warning given to this story if this was your plan all along. I feel as if I have read 13 chapters for nothing, I never would have started if I had known.
I didn't read the chapter and don't see how I can read anymore, Alfred's character is completely shot, I guess he is also a beta with Selena being the real Alpha.
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Author's Response:
Sorry to disappoint, but I never said it would be a threesome and there will be no threesome sex scenes. This isn't really about sex between the three of them, it's about having a close relationship, a common goal and still respecting boundaries. Some people want Thomas gone and that's not going to happen because he cares for them both and he's willing to put his personal attraction to Selena on hold for a loftier goal.
Reviewer: Chocolate1Lover Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 14 2013 08:19 pm
Is he really dying? Poor Thomas, I love he way Alfred, just jumps in a takes over,and takes control! That Anne is one sick bit$$!!!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2013 07:41 am
Oh this chapter was hilarious. Alfred kept her blushing and truly uncomfortable the entire time.
Reviewer: CestianiDauphin1 Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2013 03:20 pm
Oh, Alfred, you little fool.
At first, I thought the Anne Fleming rape scene was over the top, but the aftermath was so jarring! Thomas' shame was visceral. My heart broke for him a little. That woman is crazy rapist trash and she needs to go down.
Author's Response:
Anne isn't done yet in causing trouble. MOre is coming. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2013 04:07 am
WHOA!!! more please!!!!!!! please dont let him be dying!
Author's Response:
More is coming. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2013 04:06 am
This is going to sound harsh but I am happy that Thomas is dying. I don't want anyone intentionally or unintentionally getting in between Selena and Alfred and this would guarantee that, so I am happy that he is going to die. I hope that whatever he does will not only benefit Selena but also Alfred. Selena wanted Alfred made for her so she knew that a regular human relationship would not have happened between them. If she wanted that she never should have had Alfred made for her. Love, love, love Alfred.
I think Anne needs some psychiatric help, jail wouldn't help her much. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Need more Selena - Alfred interaction.
Author's Response:
*mouth drops open and hits the floor* Wow.
Sometimes people go into things with good intentions, but as they grow, their mndset changes. Selena is committed to Alfred, but she's also attracted to Thomas. She never thought in a million years that a human man would want her. Thomas has/will affect both Selena and Alfred's lives and because of him, both of their lives and their relationship will change. Whether he lives or he dies, they will NEVER be able to go back to the way it was before they even knew him. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Chocolate1Lover Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 12 2013 01:46 am
I am enjoying the mystery. I sure hope that whatever Thomas' plan is that it works and allows Alfred some form of humanity without changing who he is of course. I love Alfred. Since you have put my mind at ease about Thomas/Selena sex, I know that Alfred is wrong about the baby thing, I am so curios about what it is. This is turning into a fun mystery. I hope that Thomas can get it done before his death. As far as Anne there are no words but I don't wish death on her.....anyway.
Update Soon!!
Author's Response:
Selena and Alfred are committed to each other and Thomas is going to play a big part in both of their lives. Let me just say that Alfred is not all wrong in his estimation of Thomas, but it's not like he thinks. More is coming!
Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2013 01:39 am
Cool story. I was worried that maybe Thomas wanted to get in between Selena and Alfred and that Selena was allowing that but I think I understand Thomas more now. Now that I know that he is dying, it is starting to come together. My theory is that he wants to somehow give his life force to a machine that will allow all the androids to become human this saving them all. Idk, it just seems like he is trying to find a way to give the androids and the people that care for them some real happiness.
I can't wait to see what is true plan is because a baby with Selena can't be it, I mean that would solve nothing, just cause problems for Alfred because he would not be ok with Selena having sex with someone else.
Best.
Author's Response:
Well I will say that you ARE on the right track with your estimation. Remember that Alfred is logical even though he is emotional. He always wants whats best for Selena, but he wants whats best for the androids too. One thing he does realize now though is that Thomas is genuine which is why he scanned his home and all his stuff. He wants to intimately know him. The only other person he intimately knows (im not talking about sex here) is Selena. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2013 01:34 am
I don't think I can take Anne much longer. Please just kill the psycho-bitch. Now, she has spies evading his home? Is there anything she won't do?
Author's Response:
Of course not. She's crazy, remember? LOL Now I want to play with her evil ass a little longer so hold on for a bit. I will be taking any ideas on how you want her to die or go to jail though. LOL YOu know we have to have an evil villian and she's it. More is coming!
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2013 12:00 am
Anne makes me sick to my stomach!! How can you rape somebody how is dying!! Really? That's some sick shit!! Anne needs to get hit by a bus and burn to death!! Ugh!!
Now PLEASE DON'T LET THOMAS DIE!!!!! I love him!!
Alfred was to funny about the tablets and the images. I love Alfred!
And What does the safe deposit box contains? What is so important about it?
Oooooooooo some many questions!! I love it!
Awesome updates Brenda!! You rock!! ♥
Author's Response:
LOL Anne is a nut case for sure, but I love playing with her evil ass. There's nothing she won't do in her obsession with the late Charles Breggins! LOL at Alfred. YOu know how he rolls. He'll go through all of your stuff and hold it up for the world to see. *snicker*
As for what's in the box, you'll have to wait and see. I hope to update by tomorrow. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2013 11:44 pm
Please don't let Thomas die!!! Selena needs him so that she can have some babies and have real love. That bitch Anne needs to go to jail or die, I prefer death myself. These were some great chapters Brenda!!
Author's Response:
Everyone wants Anne to die, but lets play with her a bit longer, please. As for Thomas, some want him to live and some want him to die. In either case, his life has already affected both Alfred and Selena. Alfred realizes now that Thomas is geninune so his scanning of his home and getting into her personal things helps him to understand Thomas more. More is coming!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2013 10:54 pm
I love Alfred and Thomas. Selena is feeling Thomas and we know that Thomas likes him some Selena. I wonder what is the significance of Charles' number? So love this story Brenda!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2013 10:38 pm
I've never wished death on anyone not even a fictional character but can Anne please die in a burning building or drown in a pool full of Chlorox? She is a rapist and needs to be arrested immediately! Ugh, I don't like that woman and her thirst.
Poor Thomas, being stricken with the same disease as his father, but at least we got some answers on the meaning of Charles' number. But still what plan does he have in mind? Is the cure for his disease somehow locked away in Charles? In that safe deposit box? Or does it have nothing to do with his illness and everything to do with the androids as a whole?
And Alfred was a trip bringing up the tablet filled with nude images, but now his summation has me giving Thomas the side-eye. Is what Alfred said true or way off base? Is Thomas just looking to impregnant Selena to carry on his legacy or does he just want to be with her though its hard for me to tell since the last few scenes Thomas has had they've been with Alfred, Charles, and that hoe Anne. Nevertheless, I'm so glad you updated. Here's to hoping for another this weekend.
Author's Response:
Since Selena is Alfred's main focus, of course he felt that the 'secret' had to do with Selena. I'm not giving it away yet, but Thomas has something else in mind and no it wasn't a baby. I'll just say that he is thinking about his father, the androids and the legacy. More is coming soon.
Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2013 07:31 pm
WOW, This story is GREAT, sex, androids, now intrigue? What else, kidnapping, murder etc... I can't wait?
Author's Response:
KittyOH, you so funny. I loved your reviews! I've had a lot going on and haven't been able to update, but maybe by the end of the week! Thanks again for the reviews!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2013 04:40 pm
Girl! That was M.Y.S. to the 2nd power!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2013 04:12 pm
10 stars!!!! 10 thumbs up!!!! 10x10 to the 12th power!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2013 03:29 pm
I don't know about anyone else, but ,DAYAM! I think I need a cigarette and a shot of Tequila. Brenda you just wrote what I call a M.Y.S. chapter! (Make You Sweat) I have to purchase me an ALFRED!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2013 03:14 pm
DAYAM! That is funny! I love this story, I can not stop laughing!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2013 02:57 pm
Oh Wow! Selena, has bitten off more than she can chew! I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2013 02:26 pm