What in the hell, why leave something off like that? Are you mad at the world or something? Come back here and update, and maybe make the chapters longer. Thanks ^__^
Author's Response: lol =)! Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 06:22 pm
Well everything was perfect till last call...way to put a damper on an perfect day!! Kevin and Gracie seemed to be growing closer and closer now this bombshell. I don't know what to think but hope it is not his baby!! I want them to make it...
Good updt sweetie..don't make us wait so long for the next one please..:)!! Good job!
Author's Response:
lol As always I try to keep everyone on their toes, Im glad you enjoyed this chapter and hope you will enjoy the ones to come. Thank you so much for the review~
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2009 05:53 pm
Oh, the family setting was very good. I love that they treated Kevin like family already, but who is this person saying that she's pregnant? Damn, stuff just have to come in Grace's and Kevin's bliss. I just hope everything be okay for them.
Author's Response: So do I, I thnk the chips will all fall into place, Our Grace is a Smart girl hopefully they will be able to get through this test together. Thank you for the review~
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 05:50 pm
This is a really great story.I love the flow. It's refreshing to read about characters who find themselves in an unexpected relationship and deal with it honestly. I like these two together and hope that they can weather the coming storm just as honestly together. They don't really know each other so it should be interesting to see where they go from here. Hope you'll update soon.
Author's Response:
Im really happy you enjoy my characters and story, Thank you so much for the review. I will try my best to keep you interested.
Reviewer: Ketaj1316 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2009 04:19 pm
So someone is conveniently pregnant now that they find out that he is married and obviously happy ! Loved the interaction with the family. Loved the update!!
Author's Response: Glad you like it and as always, thank you for the review~
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 04:03 pm
Uh, oh. Who is this chick and I can't wait to see how Grace reacts... still enjoying this immensely.
Author's Response:
Im very glad you like it, We shall have to wait and see who she is.
Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 03:37 pm
Very good. She's handling this well.
Author's Response:
Glad youre enjoying it~
Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2009 03:34 pm
Still liking it. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 03:28 pm
I love sports stories... This should be a fun ride... Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 03:25 pm
Uh oh!!! trouble in paradise already!! Love the family interaction!! So look forward to what happens next.
Author's Response: Glad you like it, hope to keep you interested. Thanks for the review~
Author's Response: Glad you like it, hope to keep you interested. Thanks for the review~
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 03:10 pm
Oh shit! Just when things were starting to look up for him...I bet he is going to be scared shitless that Grace will start to doubt him and look at him differently...
Author's Response: Hopefully everything works itself out. Thanks for the review~
Date: September 02 2009 02:39 pm
OH BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Drama... Table for 3 anyone???
I like Kevin and Grace together... I have a feeling this chick is going to cause major drama (or try to) but I have a feeling Grace is going to surprise Kevin... I hope they can weather this storm...
Author's Response: I hope youre right, Thanks for the review. Im glad you like them together. Reviewer: spanishfly69 Signed
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 02:15 pm
Thanks for a great update. OH man, now some woman is saying that she is pregnant. So what does she expect him to do drop his current wife and marry her. Life doesn't work that way anymore ask Tom Brady's ex. Thanks
Author's Response:
lol no problem, Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2009 01:52 pm
All hell has just broken loose.
Author's Response: lol yep, things get a little more messy.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 12:23 pm
Have missed this story,Glad you back.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 12:11 pm
I love the way that Grace's family welcome him to the crew. Mom and Dad seem to be cool people Dad more the laid back type where as Mom is the take no nonesense type.
Damn now what is going on who is talking about they are pregnant I hope it is a cousin, sister something that is not saying he is the father that is all he would need right about now. Didn't he use a condom with Graces if so why the hell didn't he use one for the skank on the phone (that is if it is not a sister or cousin calling). This heffa just happens to come out of the wood work after she finds out that he is married to someone else and I hope his butt does not keep this news from Grace cause he just got back in her good graces from the news insident.
Great update more please Thanks.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter, thanks for the review as always, I write to keep you all entertained! Thank you Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 11:33 am
Hi!!!
I'm enjoying your story.
Oh, hell! Just when a drunken mistake was turning into a "good thing." I hope Grace takes it in stride. And who is the woman? Another gold djgger who thought she lost her chance at snagging Kevin?
The plot thickens.
Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Glad you like it, hope to keep you interested, More to come. Thanks for the Review Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 10:22 am
He's screwed.
Author's Response: lol maybe, we shall have to wait and see
Date: September 02 2009 08:26 am
Whoa whoa whoa! everything's moving so fast! he was readily accepted? and who's preggers?!
Author's Response:
We shall have to stay tuned to find that out :)
Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2009 07:14 am
What the hell??? Who is calling Kevin's phone??? Is that a prank caller/ ex-girlfriend ??? Please say it aint so, what's going on?? How will he break this to Grace???? The sh*t is about to hit the fan now. Loved the update.
Author's Response: Glad you like it, maybe it will all be revealed in the next update. Hopefully! Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 02 2009 07:10 am
Wow i was surfing cool stories and ths 1 was a major hit pls cntinue. Email me n leila7@live.co.za if u hav updatd.
Author's Response:
Thanks glad you enjoyed it, a new chapter should be up this week maybe tonight if I have time after updating another of my stories. Thanks for the review~
Reviewer: Leila7 says awsome read Anonymous
[Report This]Date: August 29 2009 01:40 am
This is a great story. The only think I would say is take a little more time "showing" the story than "telling" the story. Use description so that the reader feels what the characters feel. But is a a solid and entertaining story, I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thank for the review. I will try.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2009 04:56 pm
OMG I think I'm in love! Why haven't you updated?
Author's Response: lol thanks for the review, Im glad you like it...life had me in a very very tight bind. Back now, expect more chapters and maybe a few more stories.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2009 06:13 am
So glad you updated this story. Keep it coming. :P
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, sorry for the long wait, back now...new chapters should be up soon.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2009 07:15 am
glad things are better for you. still love this story...update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it, hope to keep you interested.....Updates should be coming as soon as tonight if I can type fast enough.
Reviewer: vmck Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 18 2009 05:05 am