Great update. So much for Charlie wanting to find a virgin. When he saw Jermain attack Inga, she all of sudden became "his Inga". I love his take charge personality. I just sorry he wasn't able to deal Jermaine man to man before the sheriff showed up.
As for Val, I am glad she is finally seeing Charlie for the man he is. I wish she could see how self destructive Jared is. Jared does'nt love anyone but himself.
P.S.,
Are you going to update any of your other stories soon?
I know, I know I'm so behind in updating it's pathetic. I've got a half written chapter for both Acceptible lies and Good things in a small package. *smh* This challenge has my muse on fire and I hope things stay that way so that I can continue to update. So, please be patient with me. I had promised myself no new stories until I update, but after reading Scribe's answer to my challenge, I couldn't contain myself.
Now as for Charlie, he still thinks that he needs to find a virgin. LOL You're the first one to pick up on him saying "his Inga." LOL Good catch! Yes, he's going to fight it a little longer, but we all know what's going to happen, so stay tuned.....
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Inga and Charlie are on fire. Nothing is going to seperate those two. Val better get ready for their wedding. Shoot, it will be the talk of the town.
Reviewer: juno Signed Thanks for the update. I'm glad Val finally stood up to Jared.
Author's Response:
It was painful for Valerie because she feels that not only did she lose her son, butt she lost her belioved father all over again because Jared is the spitting image of her father. There's more to the Jared saga and you're going to be surprised. So hold on....more is coming soon!
Reviewer: juno SignedInga is something else. Charlie sure has his hands full. These two will never be boring.
Reviewer: juno Signed Great update. I'm just glad the twins didn't allow Lindsey to manipulate them.
Reviewer: juno Signed Yay, Val going to get some.
As for Charlie and Jared they've put their stamp on their women. Its only amount time before we hear wedding bells.
This update made me smile. Jared reminds me of my little brother. At times he's sweet but fiercely protected. So I can somewhat understqand where he's coming from. For so long he's been the center of his mother's attention. Then there was the pig, Charles Sr. So to see his mother in a new light has got to be difficult. I like the boundries they have established in their relationshuip. The household seems more laid back.
As for Charlie needs to worker on his jealousy issue. His stong arm tatics may push Inga away. She is already starting to questions his possessiveness.
And Brenda, that's for the update. Even though you are fighting wih you muse; the wait was well worth it. I love me some Charlie and Jared.
Great update!!!
Reviewer: juno Signed Please update soon. I don't feel like Charles Sr. suffered. Let Carlo get his hands on the greedy bastard.
Reviewer: juno Signed I was umpress with Val. She finally made her stand and made that pervert ex of hers see reason. Charlie and Inga got the happy ending they deserved. Jared and Lu looking like their getting married. And the twins are growing up to be respectable men. Even Val has a chance to have happy life.
Thanfs you shaing such a greatr story. You really out did yourself.
Pretty rich boy Nikki Vera is bored of having everything he wants. When his friends dare him to sleep with Sam Rutherford, suddenly his life starts to become interesting.
Sam Rutherford is mannish, rude, and violent. It's said that she's a gang member who's spent some time in juvie. Rumors true or not, she's not the type of girl to be messed with. Sam is more likely to break Nikki's jaw than give him the time of day.
It's going to take all of Nikki's charm and even some help from fate for this to have a happy ending.
Very intriging. However I do take offensive to the charaterization of Whoopie Golgberg. I am a huge fan of hers. Although I don't dig her dressing style, I find her style more casual then anyhting.
With that said, I must say I like the story. I can't wait to see what journey Sam takes NIkki on.
Nadia of West Mississippi found out she was a princess but her kingdom was in Japan,the crown jewels were stolen,her knights were thugs and the family was only treated like royalty.
More please. Great start.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
Reviewer: juno Signed Nadia is quite the the fighter. I wonder how her first meeting with dad will go? Also will Aiko give into to temptation with Nadia? And who is Aiko trying to poison?
Author's Response:
Oh! It's weird how excited your questions make me! I have so many ideas! So,so many! Thank you! Thank you so much for the review! :)
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When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline. Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?
**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3
You've already sold me on this story. The dialogue are sharp and crisp. I love Adam's interaction with his sister. And the title of this chapter says it all. Nice touch.
Reviewer: juno Signed Love it. Adam's world is about to be rock.
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William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.
Fred most die. He is evil an sick.
Reviewer: juno Signed Glenna better stay in her lane. There is a reason Will did'nt intoduce her as his girlfriend. He's tired of her tricks. One, her days are number. Two, he's finally met his match. Namely, Ana. Three, go diggers need no apply for wife status.
Reviewer: juno Signed That was so powerful. I wonder what happen to Fredrick?
Reviewer: juno Signed I'm smiling right now an imaging all the terrible things Willl is going to do with Fredie.
Edward must have a death wish. Will is determine to fight for his love, Ana.
Henry McDermont had been determined to win the affection of his long lost daughter and his college sweetheart, Vanessa. For the last four months he had done everything he knew how to show them that he cared, but will Henrietta be so easily won over?
Great update.y
Reviewer: juno Signed What an interesting developement.Henny done found herself a yummy older man. I wonder what pops with think?
Oh, it's going to get interesting. More is coming soon!
Reviewer: juno Signed I know you got a lot on your table but don't forget this story. I want to see Henry and Vanessa get their happy ending. They've had so much drama.
Reviewer: juno SignedI am so excited. Whoo hoo a baby's coming.
Reviewer: juno Signed I started re-reading this series and fell in love with this story all over again.
Lamont is a hoot and grams is just strait up old school. When you get the chance update.
Carey Collins is Nashville's most eligible bachelor. His love em and leave em style have made him notorious on the Nashville dating scene. Can the beautiful and kind Bianca Releford make the self proclaimed "King of bachelordom" finally eat his words and commit to being a husband like his older brothers? Will the Challenges of Love prove to be too much for this couple to handle?
I am really into this story. Plese update.
Wednesday
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