Okay, I know the town is small but how did Richard find out that FAST?  Who saw them and ran their mouths?  Surely. Trevor didn't call Richard up himself.  Sucks what happened to Trevor in high school...wish Richard had the balls to stand up to his racist friends and help his old childhood friend.  I suppose this story is wrapping up soon but I would love to know more about their life in Nashville.

I wasn't feeling the first chapter...and I truly hope that she drops her *friends* but I have to admit I'm beginning to like this story...a lot...love the fact that he's Brazilian. He's such a caring guy.  I wonder what drew him to Keyshia...and why he cares so much already.

Keyshia wants him to trust her already...then again he wanted exclusivity after one night of passion. It seems that they are comfortable with each other but I can understand why he is holding back a bit. I mean they still don't *know* each other...and Keyshia's friends (hopefully ex-friends) are shady.  I liked this chapter; don't think it was dull at all.

Not sure how I feel about this chapter. It was a good read but Jason really needs to calm down. If he's in love and is finding it hard to work with her, then he should have never agreed to the "no dating." Oh...Keyshia *shakes head*...she should have never played with fire. She practically laughs in dude's face, tell him he's not her type but then kisses him? I knew he was going to try to go in for the kill. Maybe they should date other people...the maybe they would realize that they should be together and forget that stupid rule but she shouldn't try to start something with his cousin. James was ready to go crazy on that dude-Carter will back off now for sure. Keyshia quits and takes it back...lol. Maybe quitting wasn't such a bad idea...the way he talks to her because he can't be with her due to some rule? Nah, son. Still like these two though...

So NOW Eric is worried about her after he left in the freezing rain....UGH.  Aw @ Jason and Keisha...I see what you did there.  I hope Keisha drops the loser soon...she is afraid of her feelings for Jason but she is not happy when she's not with him.  And yeah Jason needs to go ahead and break up with his girlfriend but something tells me that she is going to drop him....she didn't seem too happy to show up naked at his condo only for him to turn her down because he was a having a "meeting" with his assistant.  She figured it out....I'm sure.  I am kind of on the fence about Jason leaving everything and starting over with Keisha.  True love should prevail right?  But leaving the family fortune.  If he opens a new hotel (not associated with his father's hotels) in Brazil and reunites with his mother then that would be fantastic.  It is not going to be easy.

Good update-you could feel the emotions through the writing.  I cannot believe she is pregnant; I did not see the story going in that direction but nonetheless, I suppose it should be interesting to see the rest of the story unfold.

Lovely ending. I love stories that have happy endings.  Not sure how I feel about Jack's redemption but I do believe that he realizes his mistakes.  Shame that it too over 20 years to come to terms with it and actually attempt to do something about it. 

I'm curious. Can you tell me who the model is that you used for Jason's picture? He's gorgeous.

Well, well well what do we have here? I figured it was only a matter of time before someone wrote an IR fanfic about him. You captured his arrogance (not sure if he's really arrogant in real life) and *playa* ways in this first chapter but bam...Friday.  So Friday is Michael's assistant AND girlfriend?  This is going to get interesting....very interesting.

This is getting really good.  Poor Miguel.  Shame on Matt's mother.

I´m curious to know what happened....I´m wondering if she was attacked or something.  The fact that she went away to stay with family for a while...well the wheels are turning in my head. I suppose I will find out soon enough just what the hell happened to this chick and why she left poor Ethan hurting so badly.

This dude is sprung...he´s just too stubborn to admit it.

This was quite an interesting chapter.  I have to admit I like this story-there's just something about it...particularly the two main characters.   So passionate.  For Alec, I really hope he can control his "passionate" feelings.  Just saying.  His mantra, "I'm going to hurt you" doesn't sit right with me.   Regarding the date, I would have played my hand differently (I wouldn't have told him but let him find out that I would not be too available because I'm doing my own thing) but I see it worked in her favor by blurting it out in anger.  She got what he wanted.  

Poor Chloe...jealous because a  guy pays her friend more attention even after she gave up the goods.  But if given the chance again she would give it up in a hearbeat. And why is Gabriel smiling in her face like that? Hmm...things are going to get more interesting for all in this story I see...