Poor little thing, you did more than well. Connor better not let the traitors unpunished ! After this traumatising event, she deserves to be cuddled and I hope the little boy did well without her. I really love their sweet bond. Great update !

Girl, I so looove your style !! This chapter was intense, loved it ! I hope Darrel will be careful, Connor is conniving, he'll see him as a threat to his reign. An accident can always happen... At the same time, I hope he won't cower. It's ironical, Nava wanted to give Ciara the same fate, and Connor wanted to expel her for this. Now, Tyler did the unthinkable, and he just covers his ass! Something is fishy here... Needless to say I can't wait to read the next instalment !!!! Great job girl.

I forgive you and hope everything is all right now for you. Despite what is happening in your life, I really appreciate your respect for us, readers, with your determination to finish this excellent story.
You manage suspense like no one ! What did he do to Nava ?! Casey is THIS child, you know. the one whose stupid actions always bring bad luck to the characters...yes, this one...
I love that you take the time to develop Nava's personality. I think there's a difference between being automatically attached to a character because she's the main character and the love interest, and being attached to a character because we came to understand her. Your pace allowed me to meet her, pity her, give her the super side-eye, despise her cowardice, root for her and finally love her. It gives us the chance to really appreciate her as a person and get attached to her because we know where she comes from.
I tend to focus on the romance, look for the love interest like a mad woman and demand to only read about their interactions. To the point of being more interested about their relationship development, than the characters themselves and more importantly, be frustrated when the author take one tiny chapter to develop the story in which they evolve. Nowadays, being able to keep the readers' curiosity in a story devoid of romance, is really tough. That's why your pace is perfect and your talent rare.
Anyway, excellent update. I'm more than eager to read the next chap AND the second part!!

Really interesting to meet a charachter who doesn't have to deal with imaginary problems. Her condition looks interesting because reading about her daily struggles will be informative regarding this illness. Thanx for sharing and I can't wait to see where it goes !!

Wow, the character's emotions and life were well conveyed in one chapter. I can't wait to see how he will deal with his former drug and his mimi me !!

I wouldn't have imagined a more powerful reunion. The fact that he was worried about her as well as hated her all this time, shows how deep he loves her. I especially love that it wasn't blatantly lust at first sight without having a real discussion. Yep, definitely love your characters. However, how can she have her wedding ring when the wedding never unfolded ?

Her mom seems to be the sweetest person and deserves to be more considerated. Tell me otherwise if I'm seeing too much into what she told Justin, but she said she didn't wanted to end up like her mother. What happened to her for her daughter to loathe her situation so much ? I completely understand the wanting more reason, but not the not ending up like my mom.

Anyway, excellent update, till next time...(soon, right ?...).

I'm more than interested, I can't wait to know what's next !

Cameron better stop playing the victim here, in the past, he let his girlfriend bully Aries and was relieved when she left college. She has to remind him that she had to leave without disclosing her pregnancy to protect her baby because the hoe's actions were endangering their unborn child !!! He should think about it and blame himself for his cowardice. Even if she wasn't pregnant, a good man can't look else where when his girl is showing her true colors and still accept her. With this past, I can't forgive Cameron and really hope that Aries end up with Christian, we just met him but he seems to be a more caring man. Cameron doesn't deserve Aries ! In a twisted way, karma punished him with all these miscarriages and cheating...nah!!

Thanx for the quick answer girl !! Regarding the use of name, you're right, she is a bait. I asked because the villains having mastered the underground life for so long, could have sensed that something was fishy with the target's widow using her real name and being protected and out of reach for 2,5 years now. Regarding the insights, I'm with whatever you choose, I'm just eager to discover more. So far I'm thrilled with the way you disclosed the background piece by piece, which made me eager to know more. Hey girl, don't mistake my eagerness for demands (well... let's replace this by critics, hihihi!) Oh, by the way, I loved this jealous caveman scene, I wonder what will be his explanation..hehehe!

Your story is really interesting. I'm eager to discover Enzo's past and see Reagan's reaction when Chris will reveal their true nature. I love stories with native american characters, there's still so much to discover about their traditions ! Thanks for sharing ! On another note, I absolutely love Reagan free spirited personality.

Hey girl, I've been following your story for a while. Saint and Naomi really need to decide what to do with their marriage now (even if they decide to stay married but have separate lives).

I'm French and I've noticed that many of your french translations are not accurate, if not opposite at all to what you wanted to say in english.
For example, "you" can either be translated as "vous" or "tu" in french. It depends : if you're talking to a group of people, someone you have to show respect to or don't know, "vous" must be used. Whereas when you're addressing someone you know, "you" is translated as "tu".
Another example :
"Il est d'accord..." replied Amirah though Saint could sense there was more she wanted to say.
(TRANSLATION: It was okay, y'know...)
Your french sentence means "he agreed" in english. But your translation means "Ça allait, tu sais..." in french. The meanings are not accurate.
I can help you edit the errors if you want.

Your story is just beautiful, thank you for posting frequently. Stay safe.