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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 345]
Summary:

College student Rory Daniels has a problem, and it isn’t how she’s going to pass her final exams.

You see, she can do this thing where she can manipulate objects… and other things, and as far as she knows she’s the only one who can. So when she’s forced to use her powers at a crowded bookstore and attracts the attention of a fellow student, she’s anything but happy about it. When it turns out the student has no interest in turning her over to the government and actually wants, of all things, a double date, she’s pleasantly surprised. That is, until her date ditches her for her friend and she ends up stuck with his.

His friend turns out to be Victor Ryken. He’s tall. Built like a Greek god and has a set of the most memorizing hazel eyes Rory’s ever seen. And, oh yeah, he does nothing but infuriate her. After the date from hell, Vic has for some reason taken an increased interest in her and what’s worse… her powers light up every time he touches her. When Vic’s around her abilities go haywire and his presence marks the beginning of a string of unusual events. Suddenly, she’s become a person of interest to nearly everyone she meets and strange people pop up in her life that have her question her own weirdness. When Vic himself displays a whole new level of weird while saving her from an attacker, Rory ends up concluding one thing. 

Maybe she’s not as alone as she thinks.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126441
Read Count: 55760
Published: August 22 2013
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

Update. Update. Update.

I'm loving this story! Oh and let Vic and Rory just get it on already. ;)

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: August 29 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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Road trip to Mexico with your best friend's little sister... Should be simple right?


One shot



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3886
Read Count: 2149
Published: August 26 2013
Updated: August 26 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Mexico

Very sweet. Gosh, I love well written one-shots. 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: August 26 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

What's a girl to do when there are two after you? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Threesome+
Challenges: Give Me a Mountain Man Anyday!
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6583
Read Count: 43905
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Nice start! I'm invested. Pls can the chapters be longer though?

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: September 03 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

For Elyshia Jenkins, one night will change her life forever.
If it is for the better or worse, only time will tell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 16634
Read Count: 38217
Published: September 03 2013
Updated: January 03 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Proposition

It would be disappointing if this were a one shot because it was a very good start! Plus There would be so many question left unanswered. 

Why is Elyshia in this predicament? I understand that the talk, dark & handsome stranger is paying her brother's medical bills, but why? Why can she pay for her brother's medical bills herself? What was the proposition? One night together or longer? How does she know him?

You say she's young but how young is she? (She can't be that young as he offered her a drink.) 

What's does she look like? Where is she from? Is she a country girl or a city chick? 

More please!



Author's Response: Thanks you the review and the interest...it means a lot since this is my first stroy in valent chamber. I will try and answer all your question as I move along, chapter by chapter :)

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: September 03 2013

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 267]
Summary:

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Response to the Made to Order challenge!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54406
Read Count: 50809
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: December 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Nicely done, Miss B!

A most interesting premise. :D

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: September 11 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

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Other Half has come out with their latest model. Jae finds himself owner of the most lifelike robotic companion yet.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 6404
Read Count: 5147
Published: September 12 2013
Updated: November 07 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really enjoying it so far. It's not the speed that you put the chapters out but the length - longer chapters pls!

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: September 16 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

 

 

Short story about the strange love between two very different people.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6963
Read Count: 8546
Published: September 15 2013
Updated: May 15 2014


Title: Beneath Your Beautiful

Let's get writing, Shyangel!

I'm caught up in this tale. Looking forward to the next installation. 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: September 16 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Love is kind, yet brutal. Warm, but so cold. Joyful, yet sad



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 18403
Read Count: 4306
Published: September 24 2013
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Loved It!

More. More. More.

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: September 24 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Tess is a sucessful accountant on the fast track to being a firm partner. Unfortunately she is lacking in the love department, Jay is a co-worker and good friend who is ready and willing to help her with this deficiency. But is Tess really over her ex-boyfriend Eric? Unfortunately for Tess, realtionships can not fit neatly on a spreadsheet.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 49338
Read Count: 24780
Published: October 24 2013
Updated: November 27 2013


Title: Chapter 9: No More Mr. Nice Jay….

Like watching a car crash in slow motion you could see that no good could come from Tess sleeping with Eric. Jay's crushed and Tess seems to just be thinking about how she feels not how her actions would hurt Jay and their relationship if he found out from someone other than her. 

For such a smart girl, she sure does act stupid! 

 

 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: November 04 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 238]
Summary:

This is the sequel to Tess and Jay; they have been married for two years now, and are happy. However with Tess being very busy all of the time and Jay trying to make a name for himself in the company, sometimes they just don't have the time to be as close as they use to be. Combined with this and Jay's new beautifual assistant, Tess' old insecurities are beginning to creep in. Can this marriage survive the strain?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 52947
Read Count: 28603
Published: November 29 2013
Updated: January 18 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Bitter Cold...

For a supposedly smart man, Jay sure is acting dumb! Yeah, lole Toni's going to tell you the truth about the rumour. Why oh why would you tell Toni about what's happening with your marriage. Wow!

It's time for Tess to take out the trash.

 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: December 02 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Brown Eyes of Green...

I don't like the fact that Jay thinks and has stated that Tess' concern/jealousy means she's reverting back to her old insecure self. It looks like she might have reason to be concerned. But it's early days yet. And if this pans out the way I think it might please don't let Toni find out what kind of woman she's messing with until it's too late.

Hold on. It's gonna be a bumpy ride! 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: November 30 2013

Title: Chapter 4: The Sting of Reality...

Well that was fun. I actually had a belly laugh over these two. [For thr record, children we don't condone violence but for the purposes of fiction. ;D ]

Tess was harsh but and it's a big but Jay wouldn't listen. Think about it - Tress, Jasmine and his friend warned him. He wouldn't even let Tess finish. If I'm not mistaken he hung up in her and then tried to deflect Tess from what was happening by talking about having a baby. Wow Jay's been dumb de dumb dumb.

Hope they work this out but Tess is now going to have to handle her business 'cause Jay wasn't upto the job. 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: December 02 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.