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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Shenai always wanted to be with Jeremy but with so many obstacles in her way it was impossible. Now that Jeremy’s father has passed away he’s rushed the next girl that best fit his father description to the altar. Shenai sees her window of opportunity with Jeremy quickly boarding up and wants to take the nails off the boards that are going keep her away from Jeremy forever but she doesn’t have the will to do it. Shenai truly believes after Jeremy is married; her life will be over but little does she know it’s only the beginning of chaotic a life and just maybe she might get what she’s always wanted in the beginning.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 38343
Read Count: 37563
Published: April 21 2011
Updated: February 02 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Hmm.  I don't know if your plan is to eventually get Jeremy and Shenai together or what.  As it stands, nothing will change the fact that Jeremy was too weak, too unaware and too lilylivered to be with the right one.  As currently drawn, Jeremiah has been much more straightforward and clear about his feelings. 

Alternately and please forgive me but Shenai has been stupid and loose to sleep with both. 

It will be something to see where you take this.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. We will see what next for Shenai 

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed
Date: October 07 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 108]
Summary:

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Here is the deepest secret nobody knows
Here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life
Which grows higher than soul can hope or mind can hide
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

A story about what it is to love that which you cannot keep.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 32843
Read Count: 66460
Published: November 17 2011
Updated: June 13 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Flock of Birds

I obviously don't know you from Cain.  However,  I'm glad that you shared what was going on.  Not out of salacious curiosity but so I can send you blessings, hopes for speedy recovery and healing.  Take care of yourself....



Author's Response:

Aww thanks pinklemonade! I appreciate that!

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed
Date: June 13 2012

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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

  Rosco Witherspoon is an intelligent young lady. In the 1950s South, there are virtually no opprotunities for her considering that she is an African American. By the grace of God, a family will risk everything they have to give her everything she deserves so that she can get a fitting High School education. Following the death of her mother, her three older sisters clench  their teeth as they decide to send their youngest off to be cared for by people they've never had a reason to trust because of their skin.

 

     She'll cause the small town to go into an uproar upon her arrival. How long can she get by with passing before she is outed?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Friendship, Historical, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 60746
Read Count: 24192
Published: November 23 2011
Updated: December 15 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I say with all encouragement to go for it and work your story out.  Its a delicately held intraracial subject that rarely gets an airing these days and should be explored. 

I also love the fact that you used the late great River Phoenix for your visual love interest cue. He was hot!

 

I look forward to seeing how you weave this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I've been dying to use him in a story for sometime now, I just couldn't figure out what his image would fit with. I love his work, and I think he works best in periods before the 2000s. I'm taking it way back here, and I am dotting all my I's and crossing my Ts with this one.

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed
Date: November 24 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 216]
Summary:

31 year old self-made millionaire Dean DuPont has only one weakness--his wife Charlotte.  There is nothing he wouldn't do for her.

Nothing.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 21048
Read Count: 20106
Published: December 16 2012
Updated: January 02 2013


Title: Chapter 1: One

Well, I'm not sure what's going to happen next but I wouldn't be surprised if Kayleesi loses the jitters around Dean, gets totally hardcore on doing her work excellently, puts him in a professional cold freeze and THEN he'll be attracted to her.  That's if she doesn't sue which I don't think she will. 

I'm not a fan of threesomes in life and not too much in fiction but this is really interesting.  Can't wait for the next turn.

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed
Date: December 19 2012

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

What's a girl to do, when she doesn't listen to her head but instead throws caution to the wind for one night?

We've all had an encounter with that guy, right? The one who knows that he is sex on two legs. That guy who you know should be avoided, but still manages to reel you in easily. That guy who is still in your bed, even though he is long gone.

No? You don't know him. Well, Ambi does. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 30393
Read Count: 47506
Published: December 29 2012
Updated: February 06 2014


Title: Chapter 4: What a man, what a man...

Umm, you hunted that down, went stealth ninja on it, stabbed it, brought it down, yowled and claimed victory on that one.  Well done.



Author's Response:

:-) I try.....thank you for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary:

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In the world there are two types of people. One’s who need a label to understand who they are. Then there are the people who know who they are. Kaia was a part of the group who knew who she was. But when the schools most prestige student Seth begins to show interest in her will she stick to her values or fall for his charm. Is Seth as put together as he thinks or is he just as confused as the rest of the population labeled the beautiful ones.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 16576
Read Count: 11061
Published: January 15 2013
Updated: August 10 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Beyond the Labels

I adore James Spader and when I saw "Steff's" face on the banner, my figurative head whipped around. 

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed
Date: January 15 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Beyond the Labels

I cannot express to you just how much I adore James Spader or the character Steff. 

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Date: June 30 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Bonnie and Dereks

Damaged souls are the same everywhere, be it in Mystic Falls or Beacon Hills. Bonnie and Derek are about to realize that witches and werewolves are not that different after all. Bonnie/Derek. Crossover AU.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Bonnie Bennett
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 11730
Read Count: 4028
Published: January 28 2013
Updated: August 06 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this story and the intertwining of the story streams, so to speak.  I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. 

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Date: January 28 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Just wanted to let you know that I really like your story. I like the Derek Hale character on Teen Wolf and I like the Bonnie character outside of regular TVD world. 

 

Don't be discouraged about the lack of the reviews.  Keep writing your story.  You have some powerful imagery going on and good descriptive approach.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this review; to be honest I was getting quite disheartened by the lack of reviews, especially because it's already hard writing crossover ships. Thank you for taking the time to write me a few words ^_^

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 29 2013

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Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108475
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Regret

Well, perhaps meted tortue of the muse works for you because I loved this chapter.  It may have been hard to come by but now that's its here, it is awesome.  Splee and thank you for the update.

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Date: August 26 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Kwon Jae Hwa had been prepared to succeed. He had worked hard for everything he had earned all of his life, and that resulted in getting him to great places in life.

One day, his life is interrupted by a vibrant, young, aspiring dancer. She's carefree, and the complete opposite of what he is used to, but something tells him that she is exactly what he wants.

He has no reason to doubt that she feels the same about him, until she is offered the opportunity of a lifetime that puts a halt on everything they have, and Jae Hwa is left with a great responsibility to handle on his own.

Jae Hwa must face the one hardship he never thought he would have to go through with his first love.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 28452
Read Count: 69774
Published: February 14 2013
Updated: June 12 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love Def Leppard.  The story is interesting. 

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed
Date: February 19 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 121]
Summary:

A sequel to Good Grief, Duplicity is full of mystery and intrigue. Will love conquer all things or are some things broken by nature?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 114
Read Count: 19934
Published: March 18 2013
Updated: May 14 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Note to readers

Best of luck to you and I hope you get some relief and clarity.

 

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed
Date: May 15 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

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Merri Tallon is a fifty year old widow that wants to have some fun.  Her single adult children think that she should sit in the corner and knit, but Merri has something else in mind!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14750
Read Count: 7548
Published: April 05 2013
Updated: April 09 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Oh.  (said in low reverential tones)  I love this.  Thank you for writing this.  I haven't even finished reading yet.

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

All righty!  I've finished reading and I still say frickin' AWESOME!  I love the age dynamic.  I love Armie Hammer. 

For some reason, a lot of children have extraordinary trouble seeing their parents as sexual beings.  As evidenced by one sadly misguided review below referencing the rape of children (at age 35.  What!?), its seems difficult for them change their view of a parent.

I am sooooooo waiting for Merri to stomp that train of thought into the ground with her children once her confidence comes up to snuff about her life changes.

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed
Date: April 08 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary:

The story of Laila Boswell and Mark Crayton.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 3875
Read Count: 10793
Published: May 06 2013
Updated: June 29 2013


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Okay, so I read it when I got home.  What I really like about this story is the surreal passage of time and there is significant time that has gone by.  His decision to leave doesn't seem in any way to be over night.  Her grief seems real and, honestly, I love the surprise she experienced when she realized he was truly leaving.  I've found that when you are in that disoriented space of grief, depression, anger, hopelessness, etc. time is almost overwhelming and nonexistent. 

 

I look forward to seeing what happens next. 

 

Now re Forrest Griffin, that is one smart Georgia boy and while not conventionally handsome as you stated, he is so appealing to me too.  He was on UFC Tonight or something talking to one of his fellow fighters whose name I can't remember and they were talking abot movies.  The other guy was saying Forrest was always telling him to read the book, read the book!



Author's Response:

:) thank you, I appreciate you reading the story and I hope not to disappoint with the next update.

I LOVE A MAN THAT REEAAADDSS!!!! :D

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23 2013

Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Oh my goodness!  I think that's Forrest Griffin from mma in your cast pic.  I ADORE mma. I just stumbled across this and look forward to actually reading it when I get home from work. 



Author's Response:

YES IT IS!!! Im glad someone recognized him. He isnt conventionally handsome, but his ruggedness works for me!

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed
Date: May 16 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Elise is back. A little wiser. A little more confident. And ready to do great things with her life. If she can get through this summer, on this big boat with the one man she didnt think she'd meet again.

2 months in a confined space won't kill her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4058
Read Count: 6304
Published: October 12 2013
Updated: November 07 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, I just wanted to tell you how much I am enjoying your story.  I love your male lead choice.  Your approach seems enlivened and I really look forward to see how you spin this out. 

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed
Date: October 13 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

I experienced him on paper long before I witnessed him on film. In my mind, he was so much more than a villain to be conquered and killed. He deserved his own story, love and maybe a family. I decided to give it to him. My friend said, "He would make a great character for a story" I couldn't agree more. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10330
Read Count: 9403
Published: November 13 2013
Updated: September 23 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You have done a fantastic job.  The writing is very tight with well-formed character strokes.  Excellent!

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed
Date: November 14 2013

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[Reviews - 702]
Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Victim of Deja Vu

Natalia's regression is stupefying.  This is ground that has been tread thoroughly with her and Anthony has been much more forthcoming than she has been.

This relational dynamic is NOT normal.  I think it is right to keep it quiet and under wraps.  Look at who Anthony's father is and what his mother would do.  If Anthony had just straight out told everyone, people would have been swooping in left and right on top of Natalia's horrible sister.  She's had a physiological loss as well as a soul loss; a child that apparently never was.

Mistakes  have been made on the parts of both Anthony and Natalia but that's humanity.  Natalia needs to shake it off and buck up.

Thank you for the update.  It is much appreciated.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Pinklemonade!

Nat's regression is what it is.  And Anthony has been more forthcoming with his feelings, but that sort of lost its luster when he lied about being with another woman.  I agree he should have just kept quiet.  But he didn't--he lied.  For a woman who's gone through something similar (and with his father, no less) that said a lot to Nat about how he felt for her and what he saw for their future.  As you said, both made mistakes.  And both need to find a way to heal, especially Natalia.  We'll see how well that works out for them.  Stay tuned...

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Date: January 06 2015

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[Reviews - 173]
Summary:

As Joss and Eshan prepare to wed, will the relationship survive long enough to see "for better" when their families become their "for worse"?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 45613
Read Count: 29760
Published: December 20 2013
Updated: July 09 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this story and am glad to see its continuation.  I have one question though; why is Joss' default position always to second guess Eshan and his love for her?  He is standing there explaining in no uncertain terms to Farideh that they will not be going to Iran and that there will be no conversion.  He's handling their business quite clearly and she immediately thinks that he doesn't love her or has slighted her or something. 

I'm mystified as to why this seems to be the case with her.

Thank you for the updates and I look forward to seeing how the rest of the story spools out.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Pinklemonade.  I guess the short answer to your question would be I'm not sure.  In B&B, Joss questions whether her and Eshan should pursue a relationship in light of the sacrifices he'll have to make in order to be with her.  In this story, she constantly questions the likelihood of their families ruining the relationship, and of his family acceptiing her.  But I can't readily remember a time when she second-guesses his love for her. 

When he's explaining their situation to Faridah, she does wonder how he truly feels about her not converting--a reasonable concern considering how dedicated he is to his faith and his sudden shift in mood and abrupt exit when the subject was brought up.  But she doesn't question whether or not he loves her.

Beyond feeling abandoned (which, however valid or invalid his reasons for leaving her, she was), she doesn't seem to feel slighted by anyone except her future mother-in-law and the people at her party who would have nothing to do with her.  As for the funny business in the garden, at this point, it's not really clear what she feels, other than unsure of how well she knows Eshan.  And she'll express why she feels that way in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 17 2014

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[Reviews - 542]
Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143284
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've liked this story since the first chapter.  I like your female character in terms of her insecurities, her self-placating practices and her inner dialogue.  Steve sounds aesthetically pleasing and his character is definitely aggressive. 

I though your sex scenes were sexy.  Some days you want tender and some days you want high aggression. 

I'm looking forward to what happens next as Steve's character unspools a bit more perhaps.

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Illyana is a young wolf during an age of lone wolves and fewer females...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 15180
Read Count: 10905
Published: March 19 2014
Updated: January 20 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I would be absolutely undone and livid if my supposed mate killed my father.  This could be a very interesting tale (no pun intended) unfolding. 

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed
Date: March 19 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.