this update was mindblowing!!!!! i needed to step back then re-read it again and again before the impact of the bomb you dropped made sense, lool!
but first things first - i'm a terrible person. even though you gave us shauna's background story - i simply don't. give. a. damn. sorry but i dont. i pity her but yeah. that's it, lool! i admit that i wanted shauna dead and gone but nah death is too simply (lord, that sounded super cruel.) i wouldnt mind seeing her locked up for a loooong time...!!
i was really surprised that carter confronted shauna. i wasnt expecting that but carter might have a plan. i mean an angry shauna might end up making rash and stupid mistakes and you know what? i wouldnt mind that, lool!
which leads to - what do i want to see:
i second what another reviewer said. it would be fun to see another gang planning on bringing shauna down. they dont need a lot of space. maybe gunner or one of her other goons alert her about the situation but since shauna is so wrapped up about killing tamryn and is pissed off that carter rejected her, she ignores him and shauna makes her first mistake - turning her back on her enemies, if you know what i mean?
another thing about shauna - i'm curious to hear more about shauna's missing friend. you mentioned her before so yeah - a little bit more about her and that situation. maybe told from shauna's pov :)
carrying on - i'm
to know what clancy told hooks....! i'm guessing it might be about the night tamryn went to carter and got hurt but i could be wrong. but if i'm right then DAMN that meeting is going to be something else...!
moving on (wow, this is going to be a long review) to the BOMB you dropped!
carter is mikhail - WOW!! a part of me is super happy that he's fbi because then he knows about tamryn's situation and can help her out (right? right...!) however when tam learns the truth - the whole truth. *takes a deep breath* can't wait for that to happen...!! LOOL!! XD XD so more about carter - are his feelings for tamryn real? why did he take this job? is it personal or simply a job that got complicated because of tamryn?
and lastly - i think - before tamryn learns the truth about carter (because that has to come up before the end...!) i want to see them as a couple
okay, that's it. god. i'm so sorry for this whale of a review! know that no matter where you take this story - i'm here to end! :D
thanks for the brilliant brilliant - brilliant update!!
Author's Response: Please don't ever apologize for writing a long review. I absolutely love reading readers' insight and can't get enough of your clipart! Okay, so on to your review.
I will happily fulfilll your wish list by revealing one of Shauna's enemies and giving you more info on Mia and her disappearance. You will get to see Tam and Carter as a couple before the whole truth comes out (and it will come out). And you'll also find out what Larry now knows, and it ain't gone be pretty.
To answer you questions, Carter has geniune feelings for Tamryn at this point. He took the job because it's a career-changer. It was simply a job that got complicated because of his feelings for Tam. More on that in the next chapter. I don't anticipate it being nearly as long as this one, so it'll probably take a couple chapters to integrate all your requests, but I'll get it done.
Thanks so much for your wonderful review, and for reading and reviewing, Cassius Noir!!! I love and truly appreciate it.