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Member Since: October 10 2012

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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

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Thalia knows why she abandoned her hometown of Darming for the Big Apple. Her infamous Shannen blood could never let her forget it. But when news of her cousin's murder brings her rushing back home she finds herself caught up in a whirlwind of familial dilemmas and betrayals, all while going head-to-head with the notorious MC, the Saxon Horde.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Family, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Femslash, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Tough and The Gritty
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 31051
Read Count: 19192
Published: February 28 2013
Updated: November 04 2017


Title: Chapter 6: Nearly There

I can't wait to see how the reunion goes.



Author's Response:

Me, either! Thanks for staying tuned as always, shug :]

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: March 11 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Welcome Home

This is getting to good. I can't wait for the next update. I love her Dad. I can't wait to see how things go b/t her and her mother.



Author's Response:

Thanks doll! Yeah I think it's safe to say Hank is likely one of my favorites, but he may be too lackadaisical for his own good >:D Next chapter will be up soon, thanks for tuning in :]

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: March 24 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 72]
Summary:

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Lana and Lucas have an arrangement. Something that works for the both of them. At least Lana thought it did.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8868
Read Count: 11848
Published: March 12 2013
Updated: April 13 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Rituals

I wish that you would just post all of them b/c I'm really into this story, and I can't wait to see if Lana feels the same way. Really like your writing. It will be pure torture to wait for you to post the next chapter.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: March 12 2013

Title: Chapter 3: What are feelings even good for?

I agree with Lucas. Yes, in the beginning they might have agreed to be fuck buddies, but she's aware that he has feelings for her now. She is sending mixed signals by some of the things she does. But then to say that he's not good enough for her is a slap in the face. She's not being honest with herself that she likes him as well. Really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: March 22 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Putting on a show

LOL...laughing at your commentary about us hating on your female leads. I admit I'm not a fan of Lana's, but I think they were both dumb to enter into the agreement they did of being fuck buddies with no strings attached. It was stupid because at some point at least one of them develops feelings and wants more from the arrangement. Lana should have seen this coming. I get that she's worried about whether she can have a successful career & a healthy relationship, but if she has feelings for him as well why not give it a shot and communicate her concerns to Lucas. They can figure it out together. Just my two cents. Enjoying the story. Can't wait for next update.



Author's Response:

Being fuck buddies is never a good idea. That's been proven time and time again. 

Lets be real,  if these two communicated properly the story would be over

 

 promise to make more likeable women in the future.  

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: March 27 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

the maroon

 

Runaway Black-Seminole Tehya barely escapes the noose of Blackhart Plantation, dragging her reluctant sister right behind. But when their old master takes away everything that she holds dear Tehya must learn put her faith in her newfound savior, her master's own brother. Yet even his lifestyle makes her question if freedom is truly better than enslavement.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8233
Read Count: 7478
Published: March 26 2013
Updated: February 14 2014


Title: Chapter 2: O N E : Into The Night

Ok, it definitely delivered intrigue and curiosity. I'm a little confused the way both Abigail and Paloma were referred to as "Blackheart Wives" as to whether they're both married to Thane. I love how you've set the story up, and I'm interested to see where you're going. Also, to know who's following them.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I wanted there to be some question as to why they're both considered one of the same, and the next chapter addresses that in more ways than one. It also sets the stage for why Thane does what he does-- or in part, anyway. Hope you enjoyed :]

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: March 27 2013

Title: Chapter 3: T W O : The Advent

Ok, so Thane takes in the slaves that escape his brother's plantation. Is it just the women? So is he married to all of them? I'm still unclear on that. Which sister did Nero grab? I think it was Asi because I think Thane has Tehya in his arms. I'm really intrigued by this story. It's even more fascinating b/c one would think they would run and escape to the north where they have the potential to be free, but Thane's plantation is in the south, in Savannah, Georgia. How can he protect them? How are they safe there? I can't wait to see how this plays out.



Author's Response:

This one got so carried away it didn't make any real time to explain what I initially believed I would be able to. So I think you may still have the same questions as you did last chapter >.< But in short Thane's plantation [Thanwood Holdings] takes in any of those who are running for freedom: it's a pit-stop for some who want to go North and an enduring stay for others who want to give back what they've been taught. He's not married to all of the women, no, but you will see shortly that the understanding he has with several of them is regarded as a husband-to-wife mentality. And yes, Thane has Tehya and Nero has Asi. What do you think I could do to elucidate on who has who more, any ideas? Again, thanks so much for taking the time to read & review, shug!

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: March 28 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Set during Vengeance. Crixus and Naevia have been reunited. But her wounds yet linger. Chadara has set her eyes on Crixus to secure her place in the rebel camp.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Other
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3250
Read Count: 985
Published: April 19 2013
Updated: April 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: A Desired Man

So excited to see a story on here about Naevia and Crixus. I am a huge Spartacus fan, and I was sad to see it end. Love that the dialogue is actually written the way it would have been spoken during that time period. Enjoying the story so far, and I can't wait to see where you take it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and the comment. Gonna really miss that show but mostly gonna miss Crixus and Naevia. Now that was a man who loved a woman. I searched and searched for stories about this oupe and ddnt see mch. i think it might be the tone of the show that keeps people from writing...orr maybe evause you cant improve on erfection which  i would cassiify their story on spartacus. Anyways, I am not sure I am planning on taking this further although I kinda want to see Naevia confront Chadara. Hhhmm..maybe I will. Thanks again. 

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: April 19 2013

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 288960
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 23: QUESTION

I say no POV from Henry. I'm really enjoying this story. Think you are an amazing writer, and I love the way you are telling the story now. I like being in her head and getting her thoughts.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: February 02 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53961
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Learning and Coping

Okay, I'm really enjoying this story, and I can't wait for the next update to see how things play out. Did not see it coming that his father is his adoptive mother's brother. Nice twist.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: May 17 2013

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Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196756
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

OMG, Dimitri is a jerk. He's completely allowing his stupid family to manipulate him. He could have had that conversation with her in private. I feel really bad for Sasha. Although I think she should have left it alone, what she was doing came from a good place. He should know she wasn't trying to hurt Nadia. If he comes crawling back to her, she better not take him back so easily, if she takes him back at all. Please update soon because I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: November 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

I am currently NOT working on this story and don't know when I will be again. Writing this takes a toll on me and I have kinda been posting other things here. Give them a looksie. :]

 

Kensington's battered body ached from abuse, each blow recieved slowly tearing her apart. She was drowning in the hell that once used to be her home until a mysterious stranger comes along. Will he be the one restrore Kensington's faith in the world?

Heads up: The beginning (meaning the first few chapters)  of this story is a bit DARK. If you are of a faint heart than I fear this story is not going to be appealing to you. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 10114
Read Count: 12993
Published: July 25 2013
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I had been waiting for you to update this story because I really enjoy it, and I wondered where you were taking it. My preference would be that it stay realistic, but I wouldn't stop reading it if you made it supernatural. It just seems like someone would see that something is going on in her life, another student who likes her from afar, or maybe even a male teacher that has an interest. I don't know just throwing ideas out there. I like seeing how people triumph over adversity, and those that wrong them get their comeuppance. Hopefully, your muse will return. This story really did pull me in from the beginning, and I'd love to see you continue it.

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Date: April 17 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This story is very intriguing, and I'm interested to see where you're taking it & what will happen to Kensington. I hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

It wasn't super soon but I did update :]

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: October 14 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm happy to have an update on this story and that it seems like you are keeping the story realistic, I think. I can't wait to see who it is that grabbed Kensington's shoulder. I hope it is someone that is going to help her. Also, I wish your chapters were longer. I wanted more.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20 2014

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[Reviews - 542]
Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143289
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I'm enjoying your story and Jodi's journey. I don't think that you should compromise. I think a story like this takes time. I also like that you update frequently. I'm interested in what happens next in Jodi's journey as you've written it, not how others are trying to dictate that you write it.



Author's Response:

Thanks, dgreen1980! I appreciate your review regarding Jodi's journey and my writing style.

Stay tuned....

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: June 28 2014

Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I am interested to see where things go with her and Steve. I know you had said in the beginning that this is not a love story, but I think if she gets help to deal with what happened to her that she could begin to have normal, healthy relationships. I think that her and Steve could be cute together. I like that he's thinking about what a future could be like with her. I think they'd be good for each other.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your input. I appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: August 10 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

In 69 B.C  Gaius Julius Caesar, a loyal general of Rome and protector of his people, fell in love. It was not the love of his beautiful wife, Cornelia, nor was it the love of his promise to Rome, but of a simple slave girl who possessed his heart at the age of thirty-one, while she was seventeen. Her name was Nona, and this is their tale before her heart was captured by another and before the ides of March.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Historical
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29023
Read Count: 14138
Published: March 23 2014
Updated: March 25 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved Spartacus when it was on. I'm definitely enjoying your story so far, and I can't wait to see where it goes. Do we ever learn the "slave girl's" name?

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: March 23 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I liked the way that we found out her name. I hope Cornelia doesn't find out about Gaius and Nona too soon. How long has Gaius known Kora?

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: March 23 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter. I'm torn between who I want Nona to be with more.

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Date: March 24 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Damn! I know he's a Roman and married, but I do feel bad for him. I think he does love her. I feel like Nona's feelings toward him vanished so quickly, or am I jumping to conclusions? Did they have an agreement that he would never sleep with his wife? He does need an heir, especially in this time period. 



Author's Response:

dgreen1980 she loves him...like LOVESSS HIM.....but he does belong to someone else and she just cant take it anymore...sometimes the side chick gets tired too, and now that they have a little space in between them Gallius creeping his way to her more and more.....Love went realllly quickly in this time lol I'm trying tosee how it will play out

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed
Date: March 24 2014

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[Reviews - 165]
Summary:

Banner by: Sienna Gray

 

All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.

Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68991
Read Count: 57821
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: May 24 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

So glad the muse is back. Loved this chapter. I'm in love with Richard. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13 2014

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Summary:

Chase James is Chris' older brother from Making It Hard For Me. Chase recently filed for divorce freeing himself from a woman he never loved. Although he would like to pursue a meaningful relationship with someone, now is not the time. With Chris starting his internship program, Chase is down a mechanic and in serious need of help. Maya has lived a sheltered life helping her father run his Auto Repair Shop until he passed away 6 months ago. Without enough customers to support the shop, Maya was forced to close it. After several months without work, she is in desperate need of a job.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19395
Read Count: 40437
Published: August 11 2014
Updated: December 22 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- December Part 4

Please, please, please update soon. I've read "Making it Hard for Me", and I fell in love with Chase then. I'm loving his story, and him and Maya together. I can't wait to see how their story progresses. I think they're so cute together.



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much dgreen1980!!  I haven't forgotten about them. I'm working on one of my other stories for this week and then back to Chase's story. I apologize that it's taking so long. I'm trying to get back into my writing routine but life keeps giving other stuff to do first. I appreciate your review, thank you and will crossing my fingers get an update for you in 2 weeks.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Anika Williams is use to people she love being ripped from her life. Whether by death or choice. When she was sixteen years old she and her mother were kicked out the only family they ever known. Now twenty-one years old, pregnant, and alone, she doesn't have time for the same family trying to make amends.

Anika would love nothing more than to give them her back like they did her all those years ago. Well that was the plan until the man who's responsible  for the life growing inside of her thinks she was the reason he was sent to jail and tries to get revenge. Now she must put her faith in this family to not only save her life but the life of her unborn child.

Take a ride with Anika as she finds a family,  love, and a chance at true happiness.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 4902
Read Count: 6221
Published: November 17 2014
Updated: December 02 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm really enjoying your first story. I'm intrigued, and I can't wait to see where it's going. I definitely can't wait to know who the father is and why she's afraid of him. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.