Penname: 1nadali [Contact]

Real name: nadali w

Member Since: October 22 2012

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Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 239]
Summary:

Ethan West has never been one to control his wolf, he let his instincts rule and they never failed him. Until his wolf insisted on marking Mia Kane as his mate. Maybe it wouldn't have been so bad if Mia wasn't a human. Ethan despised humans and taking one as a mate was the last thing he wanted to do.

Mia Kane should be living her best life, her music career took off, she won a Grammy for best new artist and she was selling out arenas all over the world. Life was perfect except for the fact that she tragically lost her family in an accident the night of the awards show. When the whirlwind was over her best friend and manager Elizabeth Jones forces her to take some down time at her parent's bed and breakfast. When Ethan shifts and bites her, her life takes an unexpected turn for the worst.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 28478
Read Count: 67145
Published: January 22 2018
Updated: July 08 2019


Title: Chapter 5: The Next Day

So Ethan has some past emotional baggage. I wonder who traumatized him.

Author's Response:

Yeah he is holding on to some things! thanks for reading.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 27 2018

Title: Chapter 11: Betrayal?

Great chapter for incorporating paybacks and karma. I hope he suffers for a few chapters.

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Date: October 14 2018

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 124]
Summary:

For 29 yr old Mia Johnson finding out that aliens existed and were actually on earth was a bit of a shock. Finding out her super hot boss was one and wanted to date her... well….beam her on up!

When the Selkrians ‘came out the closet’ and announced they had been living among us for hundreds of years, it took me some time to wrap my head around it. But when war didn't break out I breathed a sigh of relief and got on with my life. When Kale Kapena, CEO of Totality, Mr. Why are you so sexy, aka my boss announced he was one, I kept on with my job then too. Hey they haven't taken over the planet after all this time so I would give them the benefit of doubt.

But when he started to flirt and invite me out for dinner I needed to take a moment. It was hard enough getting a earth guy to commit let alone a alien! With my luck it would turn out like a bald guy winning a comb. But I couldn't resist, at least it would be a hell of a ride *wink*



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: Loving Kale
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26704
Read Count: 41901
Published: February 09 2018
Updated: March 18 2018


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good beginning and I hope to read some plot surprises soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the feedback! 

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 16 2018

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 120]
Summary:

A werebear/werewolf story



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 18877
Read Count: 8415
Published: April 08 2018
Updated: July 28 2020


Title: Chapter 2: PROMISE

Nice chapter detailing the friendship and acceptance of youths.

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Date: June 09 2018

Title: Chapter 3: POLITICS OF THE PACK

This chapter could be called "Genuineness and Jealousy"

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Date: June 09 2018

Title: Chapter 4: EXILE

Sad and beautiful.

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Date: June 09 2018

Title: Chapter 5: ELEVEN YEARS LATER

So now the roles will be reversed.

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Date: June 09 2018

Title: Chapter 6: AN OLD FRIEND

It's not going to be easy getting her to leave her safety zone. Channing has a lot of work to do but he may have 3 little helpers.

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Date: June 11 2018

Title: Chapter 7: CLAIMING HIS MATE

Finally!
How soon will he reunite with the pack? Will there be peace in the forest?

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Date: December 13 2018

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

 

“Good things come to those that wait.” Taylor wasn’t good at waiting, Thomas didn’t believe in good things. Together they travel on a journey only their souls could navigate, together, finding each other…in due time.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9697
Read Count: 2776
Published: July 25 2018
Updated: February 27 2019


Title: Chapter 4: Somebody Else

Oh...so not a good gift.
I hope she takes a flame to it.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 07 2018

Title: Chapter 4: Somebody Else

Oh...so not a good gift.
I hope she takes a flame to it.

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Date: December 07 2018

Title: Chapter 1: Every Breath You Take

This is a great one shot or a potential stalker forbidden love story.

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Date: August 03 2018

Title: Chapter 2: You Make Me Feel Good

So this is the man who will change her life. For better or for worse.

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Date: October 10 2018

Title: Chapter 3: Trip

She seens strong and determined but it looks like a subtle sway can cause turmoil.

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Date: October 20 2018

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

She thought that when she married it would last forever but it ended with a broken heart, hers. Now she journeys alone making the best of things until an encounter in a museum changes everything.

 

This story has been removed for self-publication.  You can find it in both eBook and paperback form on both amazon.com and barnesandnoble.com.  Thnx to all of the readers and reviewers on this story and the great encouragement received from my chambermates.  Although this story is no longer available on this site I remain an active participant here.  You guys are my 'crew' and don't you forget it.  ;>) Thnx.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3130
Read Count: 6221
Published: August 07 2018
Updated: August 21 2018


Title: Chapter 1: The Museum

I am intrigued. Good beginning.

Author's Response:

1andall thnx for the review.  Stay tuned there's much more to come.  Let me know if you remain 'intrigued'.  Thnx for reading.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 11 2018

Title: From Broken Heart to True Love

Love, the second time around.

Author's Response:

1nadali thnx for the review.  Love blossoms for both Alessandra and Alistair.  

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11 2018

Title: From Broken Heart to True Love

I know of a few people who's children just use them as babysitters but once they have a life that doesn't include them the children and ex's become nosey. I wish more people would get a second chance romance.

Author's Response:

1nadali thnx for the review.  It's great to have a first chance at love and if that doesn't work out hurray for a second chance at love.  Alessandra deserves all the love that she can get.  I agree with you about children using grandparents as babysitters.  Why not invite grandparents to visit and not just to babysit?

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2018

Title: From Broken Heart to True Love

They're acting like giddy young people. That's how love should feel

Author's Response:

1nadali they are just giddy in love and remember love is love at any age. Thnx for the review.

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Date: August 18 2018

Title: From Broken Heart to True Love

It looks like everything is falling into place.

Author's Response:

1nadali, yes it looks like things are falling into place for Alessandra.  Thnx for the review.

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Date: August 23 2018

Title: From Broken Heart to True Love

I'm shocked and suprised about her son. My thought is when he found out his father was cheating why didn't he tell his sister. I'm wondering if she didn't call them about the wedding, would her son shared his info.

Author's Response:

1nadali, unfortunately Robert didn't come forth when he found out about his father.  He may have been able to explain it more to his sister but now we won't know.  Alessandra continously tries to maintain contact with her children but she arrived at the point of not wanting to always make the effort.  She didn't want to marry Alistair without at least letting her children know about it.  Thnx for the review and thnx again for reading my story.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 23 2018

Title: From Broken Heart to True Love

Lovel story.

Author's Response:

1nadali, I'm so glad that you liked the story and took time out of your busy day to read it and offer reviews.  I really appreciate the overwhelming response to the story.  I'm taking a break now for a week or two before I return with more stories.  Hope that you will continue to support me when I return.  If not, thnx you again for your encouragement that you gave with your reviews and reads.

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Date: August 23 2018

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

 

Chenoa James found her fresh start in the small Pennsylvania town of Laurel Valley. With a high powered career working for the most prestigious resident of Laurel Valley and blooming romance under way, Chenoa is on top of the world, until her past comes calling in the form of none other than Ian Kelly. Now the deep dark secrets she buried underneath her new persona are forced to the surface and she must not only face them but she must also face her feelings for him. No man ever captured her heart the way Ian had and no one could because in truth it would always be his.

 

Second Changes….that was what life was all about for Ian Kelly. There was nothing like a brush with death to make a man, even one as stubborn as he, re-evaluate his choices. A changed man, Ian embarks on a new business venture which leads him to Laurel Valley, unaware of what awaits him. Chenoa, he couldn’t believe it when he lays eyes on her again for the first time in six years. All this time, he never stopped thinking about her; never stopped loving her. Here was his opportunity to win her back but when trouble comes calling, will it destroy he change to reclaim her heart.

To Read The Full Story...Please visit.. Amazon.com/author/ddmarie

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 5473
Read Count: 1390
Published: October 31 2018
Updated: June 04 2020


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why are the women always running.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 04 2018

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

An inexperienced young woman asks her male friend to teach her



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6654
Read Count: 3077
Published: April 17 2019
Updated: April 17 2019


Title: Chapter 1: ADVICE

Nice story about friendship and growing into love.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22 2019

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

She would always be his Queen. In this life and in the next. 

 

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Historical, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 199825
Read Count: 104987
Published: January 10 2020
Updated: December 03 2022


Title: Chapter 1: introduction

Nice intense start, I predict a lot of twists in this forbidden love story.

Author's Response:

Thank you love! <3 Hope you like the new updates!

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 04 2020

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 242]
Summary:

 

West Virginia Hills

 

Wallflower Abby Kensington is ready to start living her best life!  This road trip is the first of many exciting steps she is taking.  However, on her journey she meets a man who has a different plan in store for her...

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 153219
Read Count: 50471
Published: March 24 2020
Updated: March 18 2024


Title: Chapter 2: Abby heads out...

Road trip!
I think this is something that everyone should do to see their world and explore before life gets too complicated.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 22 2020

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.