Penname: lilsunseeker [Contact]

Real name: Alison

Member Since: January 18 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Single, Professional, Black woman, live in South Florida no children 34.



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On Hiatus: No

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Never Let Me Go by DramaQueenAmby
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

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Chance. I don't believe in it. Everything that happens in our life happens for a reason. I've always believed that. But, it's funny. Who would have thought a night of clubbing could result in my marriage to the tattooed quarterback for the San Francisco 49ers?    



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 88367
Read Count: 172782
Published: March 16 2013
Updated: March 14 2016

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Title: Chapter 7: Discussions

Well written, cute and very funny. I am glad I decided to read this story I am really enjoying it. Thank you great job.

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Date: March 26 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Discussions

Great chapter, cute and very funny.

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Date: April 04 2013
When it Hurts so Bad by LadySade
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

When it Hurts so Bad

 

 

When best childhood friends, Cassandra Bishops and Jae-Hoon Whitaker, share a night of passion, they find that making their new, intimate relationship prosper would prove to be more challenging than they realized. When heart breaking secrets come to light and obstacles arise, will they choose to fight for their love or will they go their separate ways?

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 30419
Read Count: 9388
Published: March 19 2013
Updated: August 11 2013

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Title: Chapter 14: Act 1: Ch 14

I know how she feels it's hard to break up with someone.

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Date: July 11 2013
Poison and Wine by shyangel
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 275]
Summary:

Laura MaCalister is an aspiring fashion designer. While on her way home from work her world collides with the dark life of Nicholi Gorbachev. Nicholi is the boss of the Mogilevich Family. He has plans for the young and inexperienced Laura. However she wants nothing to do with him. Her mind is telling her he is nothing but trouble but her body goes up in flames just from hearing his name. What will become of this couple? When all their secrets are exposed the only thing that can keep them together is love but love could also tear them apart.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 30777
Read Count: 41271
Published: March 31 2013
Updated: March 31 2014

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Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15-Vows

missed this story,  just love it. great couple.

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Date: July 13 2013
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Reunions

Too funny, love his neutral ground...

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Date: April 06 2014
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13-Believe This

great update



Author's Response:

Thanks, keep reading, reviewing amd enjoying the story.

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Date: April 30 2013
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16-Truth and Lies

I love it! I'm glad you are back on this story. I got so excited to see another chapter up. Thanks Nico is honest and really trying. I wonder if that was her mother....

 

 

 

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Date: July 13 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Prior to reading I happened to read the reviews, yes an editor could help however, it isn't so bad that you can't read it.

I enjoyed chapter one, great job.

The story is different then the normal way of a couple meeting generally on sites lol, cute :o

Great work!

Thanks

 

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Date: April 03 2013
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8-Second Meeting

Very good



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

keeping reading and reviewing!!!!

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Date: April 03 2013
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9-The past

I love this story, it is sweet and sad (this chapter) her memories. Great job. I love it..

 

Thanks

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Date: April 07 2013
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10-Resolution

hi·lar·i·ous!!!

I was laughing so hard when he screamed,.. made my day.

 

Thanks

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Date: April 08 2013
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11-Pleasurable retribution

My favorite part of this chapter.

 

He leaned up; looking down at her he enjoyed seeing the yearning in her eyes. Pressing his lower body more firmly into hers he gave a wicked smile and said “Beg for it”

 

lol

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Date: April 10 2013
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12-Morning

lol - love this story, it get's better every chapter..nice.

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Date: April 28 2013
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14-Promises

love the update.

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Date: June 06 2013
Chocolate by HeyokaHeart
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 209]
Summary:

Loki

What happens after Loki falls from the Rainbow Bridge? My first fic EVER. M rating for later chapters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 49769
Read Count: 40308
Published: April 13 2013
Updated: April 22 2014

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Title: Chapter 17: Seeing Red

Don't admit it!!! Deny deny deny

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Date: October 08 2013
Title: Chapter 16: Voices

 

This is my first time reading this story and I love it. I've seen the updates but didn't think it would be my type of story.  it is very well written and entertaining.  Parts either make you laugh or feel sad for the characters.  Wonderful job.

 

 I am sorry for your lost at this time I hope you feel better.  When my grandmother passed I too didn't know what to do, so I understand.  Years later I still wish I could reach out and hear her voice. The best to your family during this time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Date: October 08 2013
Title: Chapter 21: Medicine

I love Loki, he's funny and sweet. Great update glad to see you back.

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Date: April 14 2014
Title: Chapter 19: Rebound

wow, a few comments girl called Justin Beaver?! lol, I thought I was the only one that read Twilight and thought it was okay...not as great as everyone said. Anyway, love the story the characters AND the fact you are updating often. Thanks ;-)

Author's Response:

Lol, that was just some comic relief.

 

And yeah, Twilight sucked.

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Date: January 27 2014
Title: Chapter 18: Whiskey

comment about last chapter funny how we as women notice when someone has nice shoes or outfit on. btw, welcome back I was so excited to see the update. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Lol, I know! That's exactly why I did it. Gives life to the characters when they do stuff we all do. Thanks!

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Date: January 26 2014
Retired
Unguarded by notheruniverse
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 288893
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015

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Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18 pt 3

OMG, I feel for her it is so hard to care for someone like that. The worst part is because you care you let them in again after they ignore you. The best thing to do is to move on and don't accept his future calls and contact because he will contact her again.  I know this is just a story but parts like what he just did is so real and close to home. Maybe in the story there will be a happy ending however,  sadly in real life more times than not there is not. I can't wait to see what you will do. I personally hope she moves on with someone else. She already has a lot of emotional issues,  I think he might long term break her with the hot and cold treatment.  excellent update.

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Date: January 25 2014
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I hope it works out for her..she has to become stronger if she wants him.

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Date: December 12 2013
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

 

 

Don't know why she doesn't just tell her mother what happened with that guy. she is becoming irritating now, she was doing so good at the event with him even when he was talking to Rhea. I would have been kind of jealous proud she wasn't then the nerve of that lady Pat to try to push Rhea on him after she heard what his sister said. bitch....please help her, give her a backbone PLEASE

 

 

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Date: January 15 2014
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 FULL

Yes,  she is becoming irritating with the things she does all she will do is push him away them probably complain no one wants her.       btw can I have a Henry delivered,  I don't know if I like him yet but that scene was excellent.  Thanks

 

 

 

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Date: January 03 2014
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I feel sorry for her... that's hard to break away from someone you really care about but they have issues and are not emotionally available. That sucks..:(

Best thing for her to do is stay away from him until he gets his act together.

Easier said then done..

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Date: October 01 2013
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Good for her I think but if and when he doesn't call again it's going to hurt. What was sad to me is she didn't know he had a place there. Shows you a little disconnect.  I do understand why she is enjoying the moment. ...

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Date: October 06 2013

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