Penname: lilsunseeker [Contact]

Real name: Alison

Member Since: January 18 2013

Membership status: Member

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Single, Professional, Black woman, live in South Florida no children 34.



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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 288876
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I like his personality he is a charmer however she has heartache ahead :-(  On a positive note maybe not seeing him will allow her to feel better about losing weight etc. great update thanks!

 

 

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Date: September 23 2013

Title: Chapter 23: QUESTION

 

 

I personally like to read the other persons point of view,  I think it shows how differently people see the same situation.

on another note, you are an excellent writer. to be honest at first I wasn't to sure if I liked this story maybe because I didn't like how she always put herself down or maybe how he acted was too real and close to someone I know, maybe it made me feel uncomfortable.  Now I'm addicted to find out what happens between the two of them. urghhhhhh

 

It is like watching Being Mary Jane, hate how she is letting herself be treated but I'm addicted to watching it happen and understand why she's doing it.Okay next chapter please :-)

 

 

 

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Date: January 26 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I don't know if I feel sorry for her or not..

Did he really say he isn't interested in a relationship?

um.. overseas relationship are VERY hard time zone and an ocean apart :o

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Date: July 08 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

This is not going to end well she is going to embarrass herself please make her stop drinking.  I like her but in almost every chapter she comes off pitiful.  I really hope Henry isn't a playrr...even if it is a nice player.

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Date: July 09 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I hope they got dropped off at a hotel...



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lol!!!!

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Date: July 16 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Can I be 27 next :-)

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Date: August 06 2013

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 20

Great story truly really hits home. I started reading it when you started it long time ago because it felt so close to me I kept not wanting to read it but I couldn't help it. I feel for her I truly do it only gets better with time you don't totally forget just don't think about it so much everyday.

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Date: July 07 2014

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 21

I used to feel for her but now she's depressing me! I think I'm going to pass on her for a while. She never seems to remotely get better, do better be better. Sure she claims to want a better life but I dont really feel she's trying. Even though you show how her past was it's no excuse for how old she is and not making any small improvements nothing has changed with her in over 20 chapters. Everyone deserves better even Valerie.

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Date: December 06 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53958
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Facts

wow great first chapter

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Date: June 08 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

For Jamie Watson, raising Alex was supposed to be a short time gig, a means to an end before starting her new life. But with it brings a type of love she never could have imagined with Alex's father Mitch. While caring for him brings them together, will doing what's best for him tear them apart? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 20139
Read Count: 54911
Published: May 20 2013
Updated: October 25 2013


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Did they forget the condom? Great update

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Date: October 25 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Cute couple

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Date: October 10 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Did you change the story seems different. I like....

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Date: June 09 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Poor Mitch

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Date: September 29 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Sorry I can't personally forgive the mother.

She didn't even leave her with someone who just walks away like that. Tears don't make up for something like that.

Anything could have happened to her.

If she found a way to Brazil she could have found the same way for her child or made arrangements to come back for her, not leave her by herself she's lucky her child is still alive. 

She can never return to the story and it would be fine better for me.

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Date: October 02 2013

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A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I was so proud of him, even in the end.

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Date: August 15 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Sasha needs to worry about her relationship with him and mind her own business about his with his nasty father.

Also, stay away from that witch of a sister that he has.

Fight battles you have a remote chance of winning.

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Date: October 02 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

that's what she deserves sorry I can't feel sorry for her why couldn't she just stay out of it, she needs to stop stalking him and get therapy for herself. when she opened her big mouth in the tub she should have left it alone. when he didn't call her WHY WHY WHY!!!! Did she call the bitch sister.  on a totally different rant he doesn't care about her as she does for him. the best thing for her to do is get therapy find another job and move on. maybe one day he will contact her but this entire situation is her own fault.  I was irritated with her. what was she thinking????

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Date: November 18 2013

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

I always liked him, I think and thought that she should forgive him and take some of the blame for the breakup. I'm glad she can finally stop hanging on the wish for her mother. Move on with people that care about you. Sometimes it's friends that love and care more about you then blood family.

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Date: June 03 2014

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

I wouldn't have went to him and said that, it's great she has moved on though good for her.  Let him seek and find her if he wants a relationship with her.  Welcome back.

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Date: December 21 2013

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Great update,  enjoy your time in Japan. 

If you get a chance fly over to Korea for the day it is a short flight the shopping is fantastic :-)    Careful with the street vendors food though...Alison

 

 

 

 

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Date: January 18 2014

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

She should really give him another chance she has to take some of the blame.. move on it's been 3 years!

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Date: May 27 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

damn...

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Date: May 27 2014

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I think she did the right thing by eating with him, she has half of the fault for their breakup.

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Date: May 27 2014

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I don't know why she was so harsh to him, SHE caused a lot of their relationship problems. Sure, he didn't end it well but she didn't respect him enough to stay out of a situation he asked her to. so how is she so high and mighty now...odd to me.

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Date: January 31 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Way to go Dimitri

I hope Dina does knock her out.. or better yet see's her out with Slade that would make her mad!

Sasha is getting better at not allowing everyone to control her. I think she did the right thing going to his place after that happened and not telling Dina what she was doing. A+++++

 



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter! Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 15 2013

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