Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Cougars
I don't know if I have said this before but I REALLY love this story. And though the characters may jump on my last nerve, they are real and nuanced. That is so appreciated. The deeper the frustration I feel while reading, the more real the characters seem to me. So thank you!
This chapter really opened my eyes to how easily people will cling to what they want to happen instead of paying attention to what is actually happening. But something isn't right with how much Jamison is holding onto this one-sided relationship. There is fuckery afoot. Natalia clearly is settling and going through the motions. Yet he is adamant on letting the mediocre times roll. I don't get it.
And Rita gave me all kinds of life. Was it her business to snatch Natalia's edges? No. But damnit if it wasn't needed. I don't agree with everything she said but it was very refreshing.
Oh Natalia. She is really starting to do some well needed reflection. I just want her to be great and happy. Even if she is by herself. I want her to take control of her life and put herself first. I believe that she will get there. I am anticipating the moment it happens (though I want to see her punch Barbara in the throat more). A girl can dream...
I can't wait to see what happens next...as long as I have an alcoholic beverage readily available lol.
Author's Response: Jamison's behavior is the result of various issues and concerns you'll get a glimpse into next chapter. It still may not seem reasonable, but I hope it'll make sense.
Rita will snatch whosever edges she needs to for her Anthony. And that's probably why Nat respected her instead of snapping back.
Nat is slowly but surely arriving at a place where she's no longer driven by guilt and fear. Cracking Barb's cricoid might be just the boosts she needs. : )
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Iamwhatiam! Stop by the liquor store on you way home from work. I should have a semi-gut-wrencher posted by day's end.
Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed
Date: January 15 2015