Penname: iamwhatiam6904 [Contact]

Real name: Bretagne Ballard

Member Since: January 19 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio: I love interraciall and multicultural stories. I'm more of a reader...not much of a writer but we will see! Someone may inspire me.


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Summary:

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Taylor Mooreland has more than her share of problems. Her mother's an irresponsible dreamer who's more interested in floating from audition to audition than she is in paying her bills. So, Taylor's got to keep the ship afloat, taking care of her little brother and working to help pay the bills while she's going to school. And if life wasn't difficult enough, now she's gotten herself into quite the mess with a guy who thinks she's a man.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 48727
Read Count: 130161
Published: January 15 2009
Updated: June 09 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Two

I love this story!! I can't wait to see what happens next. So be on top of your game with the updates, I'll be checking:-)

Author's Response: I'll do my best. *g*

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed
Date: January 19 2009

Title: Chapter 3: Three

Going great...keep up the good work. Make sure you update soon:-)

Author's Response: I'll do my best. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed
Date: January 28 2009

Title: Chapter 5: Five

I really love this story and I look for updates all the time. Nice to see one!! Can't wait to see the next one...soon;-)

Author's Response: I'll try to get the next one out sooner than this one.

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Date: February 24 2009

Title: Chapter 6: Six

I was so excited to see that you updated this story! Great update. Thank you!! Now I'm going to need another fix soon. You need to blame my obsession on this addicting story and your superior writing skills. Lol. Thanks again!



Author's Response: I've been a bad updater. Someone's I get in these funks where I don't even want to look at Word so I'm sorry for my lack of updates. Thanks for your review! :)

Author's Response: I've been a bad updater. Sometime's I get in these funks where I don't even want to look at Word so I'm sorry for my lack of updates. Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13 2009

Title: Chapter 1: One

SOOOO glad to see you return to the story!! It's just as amazing as when I first read it. I can't wait for Taylor to be revealed...even though I know that it will harm the trust they have built. 

I love this build up that you are doing. Great job! Please don't leave me hanging for too long...you brought my craving for this story back. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I appreciate your continued support and I'm doing my best not to leave you guys hanging again.

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Date: November 28 2011

Title: Chapter 11: Eleven

Damn Taye....got Christian all up in his feelings and questioning his sexuality. I am glad that his feelings for Taye is crossing gender boundaries but the trust issues are going to be the deal breaker.  Poor Christian....and poor Taye. They are both victims of circumstance. Taye with her family and this deal. And Christian with his feelings and confusion. I hope they are able to get over this. She needs to tell him the truth. 

This story is so good. I am thinking too much about the intracacies of the characters. So happy that you are back....and that you updated!! On to the next one...soon I hope =)

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06 2011

Title: Chapter 1: One

First of all....WELCOME BACK!! I feel like I have been waiting for this update forever. Glad you decided to continue. 

Second of all...I figured that Carson knew. I really like his character. There is definitely more to him than meets the eye. If I wasn't so invested in Taylor with Christian, he would definitely be boyfriend material.

Lastly...I love the suspense and the build up. And the character development...but Taylor needs to come clean. There is no way that luring Christian back into a false sense of security is going to help either of them. Both of them are confused and hurt, she might as well drop the truth bomb soon. There really isn't a good time for her to tell him at this point. And I have this feeling that if she doesn't tell him, he will find out another way. Enough of my two cents! Glad you are back! Update soon please!

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Date: July 28 2012

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Summary:

After a rough Summer Alisha Easterly believes that it can only get better with the beginning of her Junior Year of high school... unfortunately sometimes what you want and what you get don't always coincide...

 

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 36862
Read Count: 38700
Published: February 03 2010
Updated: January 14 2014


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Nine: Just A Friend

This was a great update.I love the build up between Jeremy and Alicia. They are so darn cute. He needs her as much as she needs him.

Please update again soon....thank you though for this one. Not trying to be ungrateful =)

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Date: March 19 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Eleven Part One- Tailspin

I think that this story is freaking great and thank you for the update! This chapter was surprising and sexy. Ben put it on Gina! And I love the developments between Alicia and Jeremy. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

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Date: January 31 2013

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Summary:

Farewell

 

She didn't choose this Life. He chose It for her. And for that, he must pay the Ultimate Price.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:No
Word count: 92749
Read Count: 99692
Published: January 24 2011
Updated: March 20 2014


Title: Chapter 15: Confrontation Part 1

My, my. my.....I am really loving this. I like Ludmila too. And I adore Reid. Keep the updates coming. I am so grateful to see one up tonight. Thank you. 

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Date: March 01 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Shifting Currents

I am loving this story....I can't tell whether or not I should dislike Vlad yet. I love how protective he is of her but apparently the pairing is apparently not a good one. I can't wait to see where this goes. I love Bowie's character and her relationship with Reid. Great story....update soon!!

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Date: February 28 2011

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Summary:

make it nasty

 

Emery Johnson has been crushing on her older brothers best friend for years, too bad in his eyes, she will only ever be recognized as 'Darrell's sister'. Ready to change that, Emery enlists the help of a single book to snare her dream man, but along the way someone else steps into the picture, shaking up the feelings that Emery thought were tightly secured and forever stable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 116446
Read Count: 148802
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: September 08 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I don't know why it took so long for me to read this story but I am so glad that I did!! I love this story!! I also think that Logan is Jimmy but I can't tell if he knows that Em is Alisha. I guess he would be pretty slow not to know. But I love that twist. That is definitely going to cause some drama later on. Update soon please! This is my new addiction. 

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I am so disgusted with her mother that I don't even know what to say. And had the nerve to talk about disrespect. Emery should have punched her in the face. I was NOT expecting that. Her mother is worse than I thought and her father is worthless. All Emery has is her brother. Because until Logan gets his shit together and tells her what is going on (and her willing to listen), they might as well just let it go. I have a feeling that Logan is going through something that is just as bad and that saddens me. They both deserve a little peace and a little happiness. I hope that they get it in the next chapter. I hope she goes to England finds herself and comes back FABULOUS! 

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Date: September 30 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I am going to say option A. Not because I don't want to hear Logan's POV but I think that nothing will get resolved until she comes back. Maybe one chapter from his POV will suffice but you don't need a bunch of them.

I am glad to see you back and I hope that everything is going okay IRL. Wherever you decide to take the story, I will be here to read it so do you. 

-Divine

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Date: December 05 2012

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A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I must say that this fallout didn't come as a surprise. And I am glad it happened because some drastic changes need to happen in their lives.

Oh Dmitry....I was routing for you homie. I really was. I understood that you are a product of your family and environment so I thought that made you redeemable. Well you shot that optimism in the face. I understand your anger, guilt, and concern for your sister but you just CRUSHED and DESTROYED that woman you claimed to care about. So I'm not here for you or righteous indignation. 

Poor Sasha....I was routing for you too boo, But these dumbass decisions must cease. I don't know what the hell convinced you that interfering in his life after only two months of knowing him was a good idea. Get some help boo. Live life for you! Believe in yourself and deal with your abandonement issues. Because you are better off alone until you deal with all those insecurities. You have to stop letting people stomp all over you. Lawdamercy....

And Nadia, Nikolai, Faye, and Jaelynn can ALL choke on a dick. I'm through with all of them. 

GREAT STORY!! See how invested you have us?

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Date: December 02 2013

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Summary:

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After a scathing indiscretion, NBA all-star James “JD” Denson is shipped back to his hometown in Tennessee to lay low, and to let his legal team handle the fall out of a night of drunken debauchery. With a lot of time on his hands, James accidentally concocts his own hair-brained scheme to get back into the NBA’s good graces.

When Tayla Maxwell, fresh out of culinary school, returns home to take a much needed break before real life begins, she has the misfortune of running into an ego-maniac with a laundry list of issues no one in their right mind would try to fix. Convinced that helping him trick an entire nation is a good idea, Tayla suddenly finds herself stuck between a rock and hard-headed fool who’ll either drive her to drink or make all of her dreams come true

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 13762
Read Count: 6272
Published: October 24 2013
Updated: December 30 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Homecoming

I am SO happy to see that you are back! I'm also happy that you are doing so well in your personal life. Congratulations on getting married and everything else. 

I have read this story...MANY times. It was amazing each time and I can't wait to read it again with the edits. And then I hope to catch up on Jonathan's life! Welcome back. I am so excited!

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Date: October 24 2013

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In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Victim of Deja Vu

Can't say that I didn't see this coming. They both need to step back from this immature relationship. How hard is it to communicate? They could fill up a room in the house with all the things that are not said. I just can't. I don't know who I am more salty with, Natalie or Anthony. Anthony doesn't want to upset his family and Natalie is stuck in the past. She pretty much just told him she could be happier with somebody better and I'm sure that played with his insecurities. Just as his lies played with hers. Obviously neither of them are ready for an adult relationship because this is a mess. 

Thanks for the wonderful update! Hope to see another one soon (you are spoiling us).



Author's Response:

To answer your question "how hard is it to communicate?":  For these two and anyone who has gone through as much as they have and who don't have the benefit of seeing both sides, pretty hard.  Natalia is still stuck in the past, but her past isn't even a year old.  Both feed into the other's insecurities and neither is anywhere near blameless.  But I can't really be mad at either of them, all things considered.  Then again, their my babies.  I'll love 'em when no one else does.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Iamwhatiam!

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Date: January 05 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Cougars

I don't know if I have said this before but I REALLY love this story. And though the characters may jump on my last nerve, they are real and nuanced. That is so appreciated. The deeper the frustration I feel while reading, the more real the characters seem to me. So thank you!

This chapter really opened my eyes to how easily people will cling to what they want to happen instead of paying attention to what is actually happening. But something isn't right with how much Jamison is holding onto this one-sided relationship. There is fuckery afoot. Natalia clearly is settling and going through the motions. Yet he is adamant on letting the mediocre times roll. I don't get it. 

And Rita gave me all kinds of life. Was it her business to snatch Natalia's edges? No. But damnit if it wasn't needed. I don't agree with everything she said but it was very refreshing. 

Oh Natalia. She is really starting to do some well needed reflection. I just want her to be great and happy. Even if she is by herself. I want her to take control of her life and put herself first. I believe that she will get there. I am anticipating the moment it happens (though I want to see her punch Barbara in the throat more). A girl can dream...

I can't wait to see what happens next...as long as I have an alcoholic beverage readily available lol. 

 



Author's Response:

Jamison's behavior is the result of various issues and concerns you'll get a glimpse into next chapter.  It still may not seem reasonable, but I hope it'll make sense. 

Rita will snatch whosever edges she needs to for her Anthony.  And that's probably why Nat respected her instead of snapping back. 

Nat is slowly but surely arriving at a place where she's no longer driven by guilt and fear.  Cracking Barb's cricoid might be just the boosts she needs.  : )

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Iamwhatiam!  Stop by the liquor store on you way home from work.  I should have a semi-gut-wrencher posted by day's end.

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15 2015

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - In His Shoes

Well....you warned me that I may need an alcoholic beverage but I didn't think I would need a mood stabilizer too. These last two chapters have hit me with a "one, two" combo punch. I don't even know what to say. I am emotional and hurt for both of them. I don't know what I expected when we got a look into Anthony's life but I didn't think it would be like this. He seems like a shell of what he used to be. Just going through the motions. Angry and indifferent. Whew...

I'm on an emotional rollercoaster. Natalia will be reeling from her perceived heartbreak and Anthony is just living a cold life. I want them to heal separately and then maybe find their way back together. Maybe that is my ever present optimism because that seems so impossible right now. But first and foremost, they need to heal.

Thank you for the quick albeit gut-wrenching updates!



Author's Response:

Anthony is having a rough go of it.  Now that Rich has forced him to confront his feelings (at least to some extent), maybe he'll deal with his sense of loss.  Maybe...

I agree that both Natalia and Anthony need to heal.  But so often life doesn't give us that opportunity.  We'll see if things play out that way with these two.

I know I have taken y'all through these last few chapters, and I can't say things are going to get drastically better.  But they will level out a bit...at least for a little while. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Iamwhatiam!

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Date: January 20 2015

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In a world built on blood and violence, where the merciless thrive, falling in love carries with it its own special set of risks.  Never was that truer than for Carter Gerring, an electronics expert with a unique skill-set.  Carter is hired by Larry Hooks, a ruthless underworld kingpin with a number of potential legal problems he wants to disappear.  While eliminating the various forms of incrimination Hooks and his men create, Carter finds himself falling for the boss’s daughter.

 Tamryn Hooks is the much-loved daughter Larry Hooks would gladly kill to protect.  For most of her life, she’s been shielded from many of the harsh realities of her father’s business.  Then, a seemingly innocent favor for her doting father places her in the middle of an impossible situation she sees no way out of.  As Tamryn searches for a solution and an escape, her dilemma is further complicated by an ongoing feud with her sister and her deepening feelings for Carter, the unassuming intellectual with a dark reputation.   

 When Carter and Tamryn find themselves entrenched in the mire of her father’s criminal enterprise, the secrets they and others keep, and their need for one another, will their forbidden love be their saving grace?  Or will it be the Achilles’ heel that ultimately leads to their demise? 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 70686
Read Count: 14883
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: February 01 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I knew that Carter had a secret but I definitely didn't see this coming. He is working with Aaron and is the "Mikhael" he was talking about. Lawdamercy!! I am so excited with how this story is going. I most definitely want to hear more about Carter's story. He speaks several languages and is obviously a chameleon. I am so impressed. When he threatened Shauna's crazy, vindictive ass...I was screaming. He cut her to the quick and I have no doubt that he would kill her. Hell someone needs to. She is crazy. 

I love me some Tamryn. She is compassionate and smart. She may not be as ruthless as Shauna but she definitely has learned some things from being a mob daughter. She is by no means stupid. 

I am rooting for Carter and Tamryn. I know that the relationship may not be the best idea but they really should be together. They are so cute. And the more layers are revealed of Carter (Mikhael), the more attractive he is. 

AWESOME STORY!! I'm glad I tuned in. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you tuned in too!  Thanks for reading and sharing your insight, Iamwhatiam!!!

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Date: October 08 2014

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SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40809
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Hell yeah she should move on! Stay stuck on him for what? He isn't remotely interested nor does he seem to respect her friendship let alone her as a person. She needs to build her confidence and work on her insecurities first. In fact, I am not a fan of Dominic right now. Adaline deserves better. 

Thanks for the update! Love this story. Update soon please!

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Date: July 04 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Adaline, go and find yourself girl. Gain some confidence and experience. Love yourself so you can demand to be treated the way you deserve. 

Dominic, get your life. 

I do appreciate the honesty of their conversation and the revelations that came about. It is time for everyone to move on and go their separate ways. At least for now. There is a lot of growth to be done and time is the only way for that to happen. This is a good start for that. 

Thank you SO much for the update! Loved it. 

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Date: July 20 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I really love the idea of them getting there friendship back on track! One in which they were support for each other without any of the drama. I want her to find someone else to date though. Sometimes you have to find out how to be in a relationship with an unknown person to learn about yourself. I just want Adaline to be happy. Away from that crazy ass cousin of hers. What is her deal anyway? UGH.

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Date: November 21 2015

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Summary:

Dig

 

Avery "Hades" Jones is the number one producer in the metal and hardcore music game. She's more talented with any instrument she lays her hands on than most of the popular bands and every record she touches turns to gold.

Then why doesn't she have the respect she so rightfully deserves?

When her good friend Adam Nuro invites her to tour with his number one band to play with his band while featuring some of her songs, she hops at the chance.

But the opportunity presents more challenges than she was ready for, obstacles that threaten to break her.

Will Avery make her dreams come true? Will her adoptive band support her?

And what has been following them since day one?

 

Shout Out to Elizablu for the Banner



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 23829
Read Count: 18135
Published: November 30 2014
Updated: February 14 2016


Title: Chapter 7: Ms. Self Destruct

I LOVE THIS!! I love the characters, the music, and the storyline. I gotta respect a girl that goes after an orgasm like that. I just wish we knew why Adam is so adamant about them being apart. And I like CJ but he is a little thirsty for me. I would much rather Avery get it together with Adam. I know he imagined her bloody in a vision but is that his fear of the future? Or something that happened in the past?

Either way, I am so happy that I started reading. It would have been a shame to miss out on this great story. I hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH FOR THE LOVE!!!

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Date: February 24 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Descent

Oh I can't wait!! And I can't wait to see what is going on and why those things are after her. But most of all I want Adam to put it on Avery. We have all been waiting on bated breath. Thank you for these quick updates!!

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Date: March 02 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.