I don't like Lila. I really don't. Her relationship or sick attachment that she has with Chase is sickening and unhealthy. She needs to leave both Chase and Jack alone. To be honest I think that Jack is better of without her. He needs to be a man and stop begging that ungrateful B!tch. Yeah I said it. Lila is always so quick to think the worst of Jack. And really, with the way she was getting to close to Chase, what did she expect? She crossed the line and deep down she knows it. So of course people are going to get suspicious. We are talking about a grown ass woman who should know better. Chase is a still a child who is desperate to be man. He may think he is mature, but his actions are far from it. Rather than loving Lila, I think he is obsessed with her. He has this stupid fantasy of being with her because she was the person he could lean on when he needed it. Lila had spoiled him to much with her "special" treatment that she gave him. Chase a needy little boy who is looking for attention.

I don't like how all of a sudden everyone is doing as if Tam is the bad person. Yes, Tam may have overreacted a little bit. And also she shouldn't have acted like that in front of the children. But we also needs to understand that maybe is not ready to forgive Nancy or Jason yet. I mean we get to read what Jason and Nancy are thinking. Tam does not. For her these are still the people who had discriminated her and ruined Jayden's life. So she has no reason's to trust them.

Yes we should be able to forgive and move on, but its easy said then done. We are not made of brick and stones. We are human and we have feelings. Anger, sadness and pain don't just go away with an apology. It takes time. She should be civil towards them and respectfull, especially in front of the children. But to expect her to forgive and act like a loving family with them is a little too much.

Also we need to understand where Tam is coming from. She is
 a mother and a mother protects her children. And based on Nancy's history with Jayden and how she treated him, I wouldn't allow that woman near my children either. Especially without my supervision. Just because she is acting nice, all of a sudden and seems to have accept Tam and Jayden's relationship, doesn't mean that Tam should trust her. She is still a racist woman who doesn't like black people. Both her and Jason! That won't just change so easily.

I feel no sorry for Nancy. For me she being fake and seeking for pity. Her past is not an excuse for her behavior or her choice for being and selfish manipulator. And its also not an excuse for her being such a racist.

I have a question, The prologue chapter, did that already happened? I don't remember reading anything close to it in their previous "love making" scene's.

I guess in the end, its always the ones who does not deserve it, are the ones who gets a happy ending. I'm sorry, but this is just disgusting. Raymond gets to have a happy ending with the girl he raped when he was 11 years old? Margie in the end got punished for selling her daughter and grandchild. She gets 25 years in jailed. But what about Raymond? He slept with a 11 year old girl, what does he get? He gets a happy ending? To be with her with a new baby on the way, like nothing had happened? The the most sick about this is that he doesn't even regret it and admits that he would do it all over again. Both Raymond and Ophelia are so nonchalant about this issue. I know that what had happened happened and that there is really nothing you can do to change it. But it still makes my stomach turn when I hear both Raymond and Ohpelia talk about there affair as if it was the most normal thing in the world. They are going to therapy just to make Benny happy, but not because they really want to or see the importance of it. It makes me sick.

I'm sorry but this is getting ridiculous. Roxie is such a drama queen and too stubborn and stupid for her own good. Seriously she is pathetic. Her being upset because of what had gotten out in the media is totally understandable. But her not wanting her fiance's support is ridiculous. He knew about her past and he still made the choice to be with her and to marry her. So her acting like this is ridiculous. Why can't she just stay and talk to the man who is going to be her husband. Why are they getting married if they can't have a serious conversation like mature people does. Roxy has absolutely no faith in Griffin, otherwise she wouldn't be acting like this. If she had more faith and trusted Griffin like its supposed too, she would know that she could tell him anything and that her weight and what not really doesn't matter. I try but I seriously can't feel sorry or any sympathy for Roxy. She has a man who even though is a little wuss, is being there for her and wants to support her. But she is too busy with her pity party,

As for Griffin, what a wuss. The guy is too passive. He needs to be a real man and stand up for once. He is too concerned of hurting Roxie's feelings, and does everything that she wants because he is afraid of her getting upset or getting her feelings hurt. He is treating Roxie like a fragile child, which is not helping the situation at all. Its good that he is a nice man who cares about his woman, but he also needs to be more firm instead of being so passive all the time. Sometimes people needs some though loving and hear things without you sugar coating it. Roxie needs this type of loving in my opinion. Griffin babying her all the damn time is not going to do the trick.

These two really shouldn't get married. They don't have a strong relationship. There is no trust or communication between them. And to top it off, the one who is supposed to be the man in the relationship is weak and a pansy.

This story seemed interesting in the beginning. But I'm slightly disappointed in the turns of events right now. She was a nobody with no friends or man and all of a sudden she has three man who is interested in her? She is messing around with Steve. Don't tell me that she will also give it up to also Mitch and Steve's own brother Matt? I mean she already kissed Matt without even caring that she had almost slept with his brother. I'm so disappointed. I knew she was lonely. Just did not expect her to be this desperate too. I really hope she won't turn in too a slut and sleep with all three man. 

Could you please try to make the chapters longer? The story is great, but the chapters are just too short. You could also try to put more than just one scene in the story. That is the only complaint that I have. The pace of the story is okay. But the length of the chapters are just too short. Its leaves you unsatisfied. Sorry if you feel offended or that I'm trying to push you. That is not my intention.

Dean needs to leave Elle alone and maybe even focus on someone else. Because honestly, she is not worth it. Elle doesn't know what she wants. And besides that she also doesn't know how to communicate. Her answers to everything that she doesn't know how to handle is to avoid, ignore and walk away. She keeps dismissing him, treating him poorly and has absolutely no regard for his feelings. Dean needs to date and get to know other woman. Elle needs some serious competition. She needs to realize that Dean can get other woman, and that she is not all that. Maybe that will open her eyes and she will realize what she is missing. And if she decide that she does want something with Dean, then she will have to work for it. That is if its not to late. If Dean were a friend of my, my advice to him would be to leave Elle alone and move on. She has some issues that she needs to work on and figure out what it is what she really wants in a romantic life. She is confuse and doesn't know what she wants. Well that is her problem then. Dean doesn't have to suffer because of this. He has done nothing wrong. Dean deserves better. Someone more mature. I know that know one is perfect and that sometime people doesn't know what they want and all. But the ones who has, doesn't have to suffer and put op with it. I do want Elle and Dean to be together, but she will have to earn it and work for it a little bit. 

I'm so done with Elle. She makes things more difficult than it has to be. First of all she needs to have a real talk with my mother. No wonder her brother doesn't want to be around her. Her mother will continue to butt in to her life because she lets her. She needs to tell her in a respectful way to back of her personal life and make it clear to not pull another stunt like she did with Justin again. I know that I would be PISSED if my mom went behind my back like that. And I would let her know it. 

Second of all, Elle should have told Justin to shove it. Who cares if he is up for a promotion and that he wants to show his boss an other part of him to impress him. That is not her problem. She should have left him then and there. 

And as for Dean, its good that he is ignoring her text messages. Its only been three week since they have talked and seen each other, so its understandable that he is still feeling some type of way. But as the months go by, he will and can move on. Elle is playing a game. Let her play it alone. She wants to friends, she wants to do this, she wants to do that. Its always only about what she wants. She is right. Dean indeed deserves someone better than her. Preferably someone more mature and who knows what she wants, or who at least is willing to try and risk things. I still think that Elle should take the first step and work for it. Dean going to her would make it too easy giving the way she had been treating him.

Also I hope that when Dean decide to stop things with Kate, she won't turn out to be some cliche obsessed psycho girl who doesn't know how or when to give up. Although little jealousy is ok and understandable, because there has to be some drama after all. 

Even though she was a little drunk, I'm glad that things are going the right direction. I honestly think that Elle should consider starting to look for an other job with better opportunities and a boss who truly cares about his employees and their well being. This one seems to only think about money and clearly doesn't care at all about Elle at all. Its obvious that Randalls intention is not about business. Her boss most have noticed too. And the way he just did not gave Elle a choice in the matter speaks volumes. She will have to have a serious conversation with Randall, because its obvious that being indifferent and professional is not doing the trick. She needs to flat out tell him that she is not interested and to respect her.

I get that her job is on the line and that she is one of the only black people there. But that doesn't mean that she has to put up with being harassed. She should really take her situation with Randall seriously. Randall is a disgusting spoiled brat and used to getting what he wants. Its clear that he wants Elle and that he will do what ever he can to have her. Elle will have to stand up for herself.  Tell him off, and maybe even record it without him knowing, make copies and use it against him and threaten to file for sexual harassment. She is going to have to start protecting herself, because its clear that her boss won't stand behind her.

Its sad how sometimes woman needs to put up with perverts like Randall. There is just no respect whatsoever. And the fact that these type of situations are not being taken seriously and that most the of the times, the woman/victims are being blamed or not believed is sad. 

I like the story, but at the same time, I don't know what to think of it as right now. So after 10 years her ex boyfriend decides to stalk  her? After 10 years??? They were 17 years old 10 years ago. So they are 27/28 years now, and now Derris decides to stalk her? So he is that obsessed with her?

Also is  she really an assistant District Attorney? I mean its okay to be scared, but surely with her experience, she should now what procedures needs to be done and that she should save every evidence and contact police to report her stalker. Derris did not do anything drastic yet, but those messages were alarming, so she should start now before its too late.

Also like really, why is she with this Joley guy? I have absolutely no sympathy for woman who chooses to stay with a guy who treats them like crap. Like seriously why would you stay with a guy who doesn't trust you at all and is constantly accusing you of cheating. Now that she needs a man by her side to support her and protect her because she may have a sick stalker stalking her, she can't tell him yet because he will think that she cheated? Like what the hell is that. So she knows that even if she explains the situation to him, he still won't believe her. This is the guy she loves? She needs to start loving herself more.

Elle seems to like man who has no respects for her and treat her poorly. First Derris and now she is even engage to one who doesn't trust her and always think she is cheating. What does this say about her?

As for Takahiro, I see that even as a grown man, he is still just as coward as he was ten years ago. Even though I can understand him being a coward and do what his parents wanted back then because he was very young. But now as a grown man, with his own life and a successful career, there really is no excuse for him to still continue doing what his parents want.

I do like the story though. I'm very curios at what is going to happen from now on with them. I hope that as the story goes on and progresses that both Takahiro and Elle will learn to stand up for themselves and what they want. 

I didn't know that saying "but its really the same cliche story as always." is classified as being rude. It was just a critique/review. When I said no offence I meant it because I was not trying to offend you as a writer or to disrespect your story. I totally understand that some people are very touchy when it comes to their art and work. But when you also give a honest opinion about it, they get really defensive and say that you are offending them or being rude. Being rude is saying, "I think your story is shit. or you are a horrible writer" which is definitely not the case, because the story is fine and I don't think that you are a bad writer at all. I always respect people who put affords in to their work. I just wanted to pointed out that In my opinion the that the story is turning a little in to a cliche story and give my honest review about it. If that is not the case then my bad and I apologize. But its not like I was going on about it to offend anyone or to hurt anyone's feelings. You clearly had interpret it in a negative way which was not the intention.

"He's dying." Olivia reminds him.

"I don't know. Part of me wants to give him whatever he wants because he won't be here much longer. He's family and this is something I could actually give him. So I should, right?"

All my respects for Olivia flew out of the window by reading those lines. How ridiculous is that.

Olivia doesn't know how to feel????????? Seriously??? How about disgust, and humiliated. A true friend no mater the circumstances would never ask something like that of you. Yes they should be there for Nick. Yes they should support him, help him and do what ever. But him wanting to sleep with is own brothers wife is going way too far. Just because someone has cancer and is dying doesn't mean that you have to give them everything. There are boundaries and it seems that both Olivia and Nicolas doesn't know that. 

So just because Nicolas is dying, she has to sleep with him? Olivia doesn't love Emery. No way would a woman who truly loves her husband consider something like this. 

This was the cherry on the cake: "Part of her appreciates that while the other wishes he would just tell her what to do so the guilt or blame would be on him. "

Olivia is a joke. Emery should find a woman who truly loves him and will be loyal to him and their marriage.