Penname: Chocolate Girl [Contact]

Real name: Renee

Member Since: March 03 2009

Membership status: Member

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 62]
Summary:

When Sandra Taliaferro is left dead from a street rivalry, she leaves behind her teenage daughter Aubrey, and a box of secrets leading her to figure out a missing part to her life story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 74337
Read Count: 109320
Published: June 14 2013
Updated: February 23 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You have to do something with Aubrey, she is working my damn nerves. Between her and Natalia I don't know whose getting on my nerves worse.

 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 353]
Summary:

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82571
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's it?? Awww come on you can't do this to me. I love your stories. We need more.



Author's Response:

Just following orders here.  I just wanted to try my hand at writing something short because I tend to be long winded.

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Date: July 17 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hahahaha. Billy is a mess. He knows what he wants and he's not stopping until he gets it.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2013

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

Min Kimbrough comes across the strangest man.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 2932
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: July 17 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting makes you want more. I want to know what happened, why he gave her the pin? How did he know her given name?



Author's Response:

Schuyler is Min's husband.  They both live in the future and work together in the past.  They get up everyday and go to the sixteen hundreds to work.  At this point, Min hasn't met Schuyler nor has she been recruited to work for this future company.  Both she and Schuyler, who were born in different time periods, were headhunted for this company because of their unique expertise.  

Due to trouble at work Shuyler gives Min a pin that will allow them to travel in time without the knowledge of their employers.  With it, they'll be able to escape in time and live happily ever after!  I think they decide to settle as beach bums in their own hidden corner of time and space. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Running from her past, Layla finds her future.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed
Challenges: Lonely Highways
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 3150
Published: July 18 2013
Updated: July 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awwww..



Author's Response:

Thanks Chocolate Girl!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A stranger stops you on a busy street and hands you a small red box. Inside lies something that gives its owner the power to go back in time. He warns you not to open the box. Do you?

 

Why yes, yes I do!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Challenges: Second Chances
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 813
Published: July 18 2013
Updated: July 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Nancy returns from burying the last of her family. She's now all alone and has no one.  If only she could see them one last time!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Second Chances
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 942
Published: July 18 2013
Updated: July 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wish I could see my father. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wish I could see my father. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 26]
Summary:

berry


 


 


God forbid you be an ugly girl, 'course too pretty is also your doom, 'cause everyone harbors a secret hatred for the prettiest girl in the room.


Ani Difranco



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles , General
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3076
Read Count: 3538
Published: July 22 2013
Updated: July 22 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Who's Listening...

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you soooooo much!!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

I am currently NOT working on this story and don't know when I will be again. Writing this takes a toll on me and I have kinda been posting other things here. Give them a looksie. :]

 

Kensington's battered body ached from abuse, each blow recieved slowly tearing her apart. She was drowning in the hell that once used to be her home until a mysterious stranger comes along. Will he be the one restrore Kensington's faith in the world?

Heads up: The beginning (meaning the first few chapters)  of this story is a bit DARK. If you are of a faint heart than I fear this story is not going to be appealing to you. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 10114
Read Count: 12992
Published: July 25 2013
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The chapter is so sad. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

An 19th century medical doctor comes to grip with the love for his nurse.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Historical, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2287
Read Count: 1946
Published: August 12 2013
Updated: August 12 2013


Title: Chapter 1: The Peach Doctor

Sweet.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 345]
Summary:

College student Rory Daniels has a problem, and it isn’t how she’s going to pass her final exams.

You see, she can do this thing where she can manipulate objects… and other things, and as far as she knows she’s the only one who can. So when she’s forced to use her powers at a crowded bookstore and attracts the attention of a fellow student, she’s anything but happy about it. When it turns out the student has no interest in turning her over to the government and actually wants, of all things, a double date, she’s pleasantly surprised. That is, until her date ditches her for her friend and she ends up stuck with his.

His friend turns out to be Victor Ryken. He’s tall. Built like a Greek god and has a set of the most memorizing hazel eyes Rory’s ever seen. And, oh yeah, he does nothing but infuriate her. After the date from hell, Vic has for some reason taken an increased interest in her and what’s worse… her powers light up every time he touches her. When Vic’s around her abilities go haywire and his presence marks the beginning of a string of unusual events. Suddenly, she’s become a person of interest to nearly everyone she meets and strange people pop up in her life that have her question her own weirdness. When Vic himself displays a whole new level of weird while saving her from an attacker, Rory ends up concluding one thing. 

Maybe she’s not as alone as she thinks.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126441
Read Count: 55757
Published: August 22 2013
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Cast of Characters

You know you can't leave us hanging like that. Sequel please.

Thank you

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 05 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

What's a girl to do when there are two after you? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Threesome+
Challenges: Give Me a Mountain Man Anyday!
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6583
Read Count: 43901
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I hope Hayes will be there when her mother shows up. I love the dress!! I want it.

Awesome chapter. Looking forward to seeing how the meeting with Hayes and his mother goes.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Interesting.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

The sequel to Metamorphosis!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7989
Read Count: 2981
Published: September 08 2013
Updated: April 14 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Cast of Characters

Rory needs to listen sometime. She could have gotten herself and Missy hurt or killed. 



Author's Response:

She's definitely going to get some reeling in coming soon, lol.  Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 04 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast of Characters

Continue.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 267]
Summary:

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Response to the Made to Order challenge!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54406
Read Count: 50803
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: December 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

That woman is crazy and deranged. Time for her to go.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

When there is chemistry between a male and a female it seems that no vow, no higher order can prevent what will happen. Chemistry will always have it's way.- unknown.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 712
Read Count: 1425
Published: October 11 2013
Updated: October 11 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2013

Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

Formally Ashes, Ashes

Red flashing lights…

Heavy footsteps echoed through the deserted hallway.

Fire alarms blared...

Breaths lodged in throats as the search for survival worsened.

Pungent smell of death overwhelmed as the Z’s closed in...

Survival was futile now, running was the only escape; in this new apocalyptic post war world, living was no longer guaranteed.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Horror
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 6
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 65447
Read Count: 77630
Published: October 12 2013
Updated: June 05 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Run!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 238]
Summary:

This is the sequel to Tess and Jay; they have been married for two years now, and are happy. However with Tess being very busy all of the time and Jay trying to make a name for himself in the company, sometimes they just don't have the time to be as close as they use to be. Combined with this and Jay's new beautifual assistant, Tess' old insecurities are beginning to creep in. Can this marriage survive the strain?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 52947
Read Count: 28573
Published: November 29 2013
Updated: January 18 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Brown Eyes of Green...

Tess has a right to be upset but she needs to learn to keep her hands to herself. What if Jay had slapped her back? The is bit the first time she slapped him, hopefully I tell he the last time.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 01 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Brown Eyes of Green...

Jay better listen to Jasmine.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 30 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 

Every wife wants her husbands undivided attention, most definitely on their anniversary. Kara couldn't be more furious when her plans go to hell while her husband is nose deep with directing a new blockbuster movie, and as such she does what any red blooded woman would in her situation; go out and have a hell of a good time without him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Challenges: Beyonce
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5795
Read Count: 5325
Published: February 22 2014
Updated: February 24 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Kara is not to smart. Devvon, has only added fuel to the fire. Lena, ass needs to go ASAP.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

 

I decided to write this one-shot because Todd & Evangeline were the first couple who inspired me to write fanfiction and I have never forgotten what could have been if OLTL would have had the guts to just freaking do it! 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4600
Read Count: 3902
Published: March 20 2014
Updated: March 20 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you!!! I love the stories with Todd and Evangline. I miss them. Can we get another one shoot??



Author's Response:

You're are welcome Chocolate Girl; hey another chocolate in the house YAY! I've been missing them lately - reading some fanfiction and watching those scenes filled with so much smoking chemistry. Believe me there were many times when I wanted to slap RC for not going there like it was this huge mountain to climb ugh! As far as another one shot let's just say it all depends on the mood I'm in :-D Thanks so much for taking the time out to read, enjoy and write such a wonderful review!

 

 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

A "one shot".

Happlily married couple can't seem to get anywhere on time but a wise woman always has a plan!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2367
Read Count: 2033
Published: March 22 2014
Updated: March 22 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!!! You did a good job with this one.ookong forward to reading more from you.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Quick Richonne one-shot, taking place soon after Michonne meets up with Rick and Carl in the second half of season four.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Other
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2199
Read Count: 1236
Published: April 02 2014
Updated: April 02 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Broken Pieces

Awesome!!!

we need more to tide us over until the show comes back in October.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.