At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.
This is a fabulous story. If you want to publish this, you definitely have a customer in me. Please do. These characters deserve an ending.
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I think a chapter in Henry's voice would be nice. It would be interesting to see where he is coming from when it comes to his life and his feelings about Val. If you chose to do this it is your decision but it would be welcome from this reader. And also this is a great story. Every time I see an update it just gets better and better.
Reviewer: bella200183 Signed I never said I was the good guy. I'm nobody's hero.
You have got to keep going with this story. It is just to good!!! Get writing.
Reviewer: bella200183 Signed 
College student Rory Daniels has a problem, and it isn’t how she’s going to pass her final exams.
You see, she can do this thing where she can manipulate objects… and other things, and as far as she knows she’s the only one who can. So when she’s forced to use her powers at a crowded bookstore and attracts the attention of a fellow student, she’s anything but happy about it. When it turns out the student has no interest in turning her over to the government and actually wants, of all things, a double date, she’s pleasantly surprised. That is, until her date ditches her for her friend and she ends up stuck with his.
His friend turns out to be Victor Ryken. He’s tall. Built like a Greek god and has a set of the most memorizing hazel eyes Rory’s ever seen. And, oh yeah, he does nothing but infuriate her. After the date from hell, Vic has for some reason taken an increased interest in her and what’s worse… her powers light up every time he touches her. When Vic’s around her abilities go haywire and his presence marks the beginning of a string of unusual events. Suddenly, she’s become a person of interest to nearly everyone she meets and strange people pop up in her life that have her question her own weirdness. When Vic himself displays a whole new level of weird while saving her from an attacker, Rory ends up concluding one thing.
Maybe she’s not as alone as she thinks.
I don't normally leave comments but I just had to after reading this so far. I am not that big into comic book like supernatural stories but this is just so good!!! I started reading this last night and have finally caught up today. I wanted to tell this is just the best. You are very talented and your characters are just so real. This would also make such a lovely movie. Vic is so swoon worthy!!! Listen to me, all fangirl. Lol. Anyway just wanted to tell you that. Have a great day and thanks for the fantastic story you have graced us with.
Okay, this seriously made my day!!!!! Thank you so much for stopping by. Writing can be so stressful and comments like this can really keep a girl going. I really appreicate it. You have a nice weekend too :D
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