Penname: jetzero [Contact]

Real name: Bre

Member Since: June 24 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:


[Report This]
Reviews by jetzero


Retired
Rated: Mature Content
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 593]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 219902
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 21

Okay I'm so excited you updated! yay! love this story.

val val val....gurl what are we going to do with you? I feel like this might be it for her. she might just have made it to the bottom. I feel for her but at the same time i'm starting to not anymore. I know its a hard process getting yourself self together especially when your not ready all around(mentally physically and emotionally) but its time for her to do what she has to do. She's going to have to truely seek help. I think val needs to take a step back and start talking to her therapist, tell her dad she doesn't want the promotion, hell maybe even quit her job I know she has to have money saved. Take that money focus on getting herself where she needs to be maybe even go back to school refresher course for gaming build her skills up again. She needs to start from the ground up.

okay enough of my ranting. great update

I really don't know how I feel about Peter I think he's just an ass just because and him and val will always clash so...

But Its good to hear Henry was doing well or atleast thats what he is telling peter only time will tell with these characters but I'm definitely here for the ride!

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 07 2014

Title: Chapter 31: A/N

No problem do what ya gotta do...can't wait to see how this journey your characters have been on comes full circle. Thanks for sharing this story can't wait to read the revamped chapter.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04 2015

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Sonya Philips has just gone through the worse day of her life.  Her wedding day.  What's worse than that is that she actually survived.  Now one year later she has come to realize that maybe she should have died a year ago.

 

Trenton Sinclaire is a young bachelor who is too busy for love.  But when he meets a woman down on her luck he can't help but need to help her.  Because without her he doesn't know what he would do.

 

Follow the two of them on a journey of self discovery.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 43219
Read Count: 12772
Published: September 23 2013
Updated: January 06 2019


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Glad to see this update! Can't wait to see how this will go.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21 2019

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarhalf-star
[Reviews - 367]
Summary:

After living in the cold, dinky town of Fenway, Michigan for nearly two decades, seventeen year old Claudia Strauss is more than ready for something new. But when she finds herself living in a small Montana town that borders an Indian reservation, she will struggle to to find acceptance in an unfamiliar world. As the only black teenager on the Blackfoot reservation, Claudia must not only come to terms with cultural conflicts, but also deal with the unpleasant realities of transitioning to adulthood.


Along the way, she finds herself drawn to Tristan Whitefeather, the loner artist who is "different" in a way that both scares and intrigues her. She also feels the pull towards Lucas Good Blanket, who is a bad boy with a soft heart that has just as much as skill with the opposite sex as he does with his hand drum.

Through the trials of her teenage years to the problems of young adulthood, Claudia will find her life forever changed by the people on the rez. And in the process, learn more about herself than she ever could have imagined.


Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 164750
Read Count: 71966
Published: March 21 2014
Updated: April 17 2017


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

wow... can I say this chapter was amazing. I 'm happy that Tristan finally made a move and that he and claudia finally had a chance to talk even if all wasn't said between them.

jump to the end- wow gosh you are a wonderful writer. you made me realize just how strongly I feel for Lucas. At first I wasn't a big fan of his but the kid grew on me. I can't have him end like this. I want him to be able to find himself, grow into a great man, and learn and push through it all.(I'm still all about tristan tho) But I felt this pain run through me as I was reading that last paragraph. ugh just amazing writing that I never knew pulled me in until I realized how close I am to these fictional characters.

any way great chapter can't wait to see how this all falls in to place!



Author's Response:

Well THANKS, jetzero!! Yes, this only the beginning of Tristan cming out of his shell. I do have more planned in the future, but at the same time, I will definitely be staying to the special qualities he has. He will still be Tristan, but since he is maturing and nearly going to college, I felt he was due to go through some changes.

Oh thanks, you are so sweet to that!! :) Good!! That's part of what I was hoping for - to make people realize that perhaps they do care for Lucas, and was curious to see if they would feel any sort of attachment to him. Up until this point, I have slowly been revealing more of him, fleshing him out and making him layered. So I am glad to hear that you do indeed care for him, and was affected by what happened tohim in this chapter.

Oh yes, I have some plans for Lucas, that's for certain! Lots in store for him, but then again, there will be lots in store for pretty much all of the characters. Lately, though, I have been jotting down quite a few notes for Lucas, so it seems that he is ready for those changes as well. :)

Oh thank you, sweetie. Your kinds words are so very appreciated. I do work hard and put my heart and soul into my writing, so it's always wonderful to hear that people are pulled in and enjoying the stories that I write.

Thank you for taking the time to leave feedback!!

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 19 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Amazing as always.I liked how you left the story with them heading out for the roadtrip and off to new adventures.And you showing the growth of these characters especially lucas and tristan. They both had come a long way since the first chapter. This story was very well written and I can't wait for the sequel to see what these friends can get into from the roadtrip through college through life.

any who thank you for sharing your work and talent with us!

can't wait to read more from you.



Author's Response:

Thanks, jetzero! :D

Yeah, I thought that would be a good place to end it, with Claudia and the gang going off on their own adventure, while Lucas prepared to go off on his, as well. I had a couple of different ideas of how to end it, but am glad I settled on this one because I think it really gave the story a feeling of true transition.

Yes, the kids are all growing up. :) It was always my plan to show some advancement by teh end of the story, and I really felt that that Lucas and Tristan should at least make some kind of peace, because I didn't want to carry that over into the sequel. Now that's not to say they won't ever be friends or have any disagreements...lol...but to at least have them talk and be honest with one another.

THANKS!! so glad to hear that you enjoyed it. And I look forward to sharing more with you in The sequel. And a big Thanks to YOU for reading, reviewing, and being a faithful reader. :)

 

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29 2014

Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 55]
Summary:

stories/617/images/SkinDeep2.jpg

How do you make it in a world that tells you you're too ugly to have wants and hopes and dreams? Iris Gifford knows what the world sees. And she knows what her unexpected encounter sees. But all that matters is what Iris sees when she looks in the mirror. 

(This is the story of Skin Deep from Iris' point of view)

"If they hadn't told me I was ugly, I never would have searched for my beauty. And if they hadn't tried to break me down, I wouldn't know that I'm unbreakable" - Gabourey Sidibe

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: A Sandwich, A Soda, A Snippet
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12260
Read Count: 10396
Published: May 12 2014
Updated: October 17 2016


Title: Chapter 10: Skin Deep, Iris - 10

Let me just say that I love this story there's drama and comedy and I can't get enough. Can't wait to see what you write next for these characters.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09 2016

Retired
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 158]
Summary:

In a world built on blood and violence, where the merciless thrive, falling in love carries with it its own special set of risks.  Never was that truer than for Carter Gerring, an electronics expert with a unique skill-set.  Carter is hired by Larry Hooks, a ruthless underworld kingpin with a number of potential legal problems he wants to disappear.  While eliminating the various forms of incrimination Hooks and his men create, Carter finds himself falling for the boss’s daughter.

 Tamryn Hooks is the much-loved daughter Larry Hooks would gladly kill to protect.  For most of her life, she’s been shielded from many of the harsh realities of her father’s business.  Then, a seemingly innocent favor for her doting father places her in the middle of an impossible situation she sees no way out of.  As Tamryn searches for a solution and an escape, her dilemma is further complicated by an ongoing feud with her sister and her deepening feelings for Carter, the unassuming intellectual with a dark reputation.   

 When Carter and Tamryn find themselves entrenched in the mire of her father’s criminal enterprise, the secrets they and others keep, and their need for one another, will their forbidden love be their saving grace?  Or will it be the Achilles’ heel that ultimately leads to their demise? 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 70686
Read Count: 14487
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: February 01 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I choose D! I want to see what you have up your sleeve. Love your writing so I'm ready for it... Do your thing girlie!

Loved this chapter can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks Jetzero!  So glad you're enjoying my little twisted tale.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed
Date: February 01 2015

Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 62]
Summary:

stories/4923/images/banner_resized.png

 

The trials we survive, the endurance, the scars that we bare both mentally and physically is what makes us survivors. Enduring one tragedy after the other, moving past the pain to reach a higher existence. To go beyond our statutory limitation, to go beyond our self and reveal the being beyond the flesh. This is what survival is all about. 

However this is easier said than done. Nonetheless she will endure, she will feel agony, pain, loss, devastation. She will be wronged, abused, and hated. She will be loved, cherished, and abandoned. She will fight. She will maim. She will kill. Then and only then can she call herself a Survivor.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Horror, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 74621
Read Count: 9565
Published: September 23 2014
Updated: May 23 2016


Title: Chapter 10: The Road to Hell...

Uh oh! Why do I feel like Nava  is about to make a deal with the devil. Love this story can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2015

Retired
Rated: Members ONLY: Teen or Above
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 103]
Summary:

 

'Once upon a moonlit night, a girl, who was not just any ordinary girl, met a boy, who was not just any ordinary boy. . .'

 

(BOOK 1)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: Magic By Moonlight
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 88270
Read Count: 27337
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 20: Nineteen — 'If there's a shadow in me, the dark is a tidal wave inside of you.'

Love this story! Can't wait to see it all come together. I think it would be cool to see the ending of this story through both of their point of view especially the 'reunion' between these two. I'm kind of curious to what exactly Michael's mother was doing in the west wing... Hmm any who I'm ready for the next chapter I'm on the edge of my seat!



Author's Response:

Wow! That really, REALLY means a lot to know that you're enjoying Moonrise, jetzero! Thank you!

And thank you so much for your input in regards to how I should finish telling this story! I LOVE that idea! I was so conflicted because there are certain things that can only be revealed through Ellette's POV & certain things that can only be revealed through Michael's. But, you're right, why not just finish it through both of their eyes. As for Reina, is what a bit suspicious that she was in the west wing, wasn't it? And she was definitely there for a specific reason.

I'm going to try super hard to get the next chapter posted soon! Thank you for reading & for taking the time to review! And HUGE THANK YOU for favouriting Moonrise! My gosh, I'm so honoured! Hope you won't mid if I shout you out in next update? :)

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2015

Title: Chapter 22: Twenty-One - 'And so they say, Lord, for everything a reason. . .'

Love this story! I can't wait to see what happens next. I just love your writing style. Any who I'm glad that we got some true interactions between the chief and ellette I was happy to see his feelings for her and their family and that he's not always business. Can't wait to see a reunion between Michael and ellette. I'm wishing for a happy ending but most of my favorite stories don't end with the "happy" ending I thought they would which is all the more better because that  is what actually makes them my favorites. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting patiently for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much for still sticking with this story, jetzero! I LOVE that you're still loving it! :)

I really, REALLY wanted to have a scene between Ellette & her father before Moonrise ended, so I'm so happy that you enjoyed it A lot of what we knew about him had only been shown/told through Ellette's eyes, so we only had her opinions to go off of. He's probably still not anybody's favourite character, but we were finally able to understand him & his motivation/reasons for treating Ellette the way he did.

I feel the exact same way about some of my favourite stories NOT having 'happy endings'! Moonrise will most likely have a'bittersweet' ending, which, I hope, doesn't disappoint too many readers. I will try my very best to get the next chapter posted soon; I promise you won't have to wait another two months! Lol.

Thanks so, so, SO much for reading & for your lovely review!! It truly means a lot! :)

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01 2015

Title: Chapter 23: Twenty-Two - 'We are brighter, the flame will never die. . .you & I, we're soldiers of light.'

Lovely as always! Ahh Michael is back let the reunion commence. I feel like it will be bitter sweet but definitely needed. Can't wait to see what's headed ellette and Michaels way next. The suspense is killing me but then to I love this story so much I hate to see it come to an end. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much & I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, jetzero!

YAY! Michael is finally back & I'm super excited about that! I know you guys have been waiting for this reunion, so I hope you're ready for what's about to go down. I'm actually so sad that Moonrise is so close to the end because I had so much fun writing Ellette & Michael's story & sharing it with you all. And I so appreciate & am so grateful for all of the love & support I received from all of the wonderful readers, such as yourself. You may not believe it, but it truly, TRULY does motivate us authours to keep going, so thank you!

As always, thank you times a gazillion for reading & for taking the time to review, jetzero! Next chapter should be up pretty soon! :)

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05 2015

Title: Chapter 24: Twenty-Three - 'Take these tired wings. . .winter wind will fly you back to me.'

Loved it! Super intense chapter... Can't wait for the next one. There's so many ways this can go so I will be waiting anxiously to see where you take the story in the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm super, SUPER happy that you enjoyed this chapter! It was pretty intense to write, so I'm glad that came through. You're right; there are sooooo many ways this can go & I still have some things in store for our little fairy & her wolf.

As always, thanks so much for reading & for taking the time to leave a review, jetzero! Next chapter is on the way, I promise! :)

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08 2015

Title: Chapter 25: Twenty-Four - 'And my soul is a dark place, but I know your love, I know your love. . .'

Wow beautifully written... Such a sad but amazing chapter. I'm in my feels right now. I really don't know how to feel I loved this chapter but I'm feeling emotional over ellette. You definitely pulled me in with this chapter.I could feel the emotions of both characters rolling through each paragraph especially michaels while he was desperately trying to find the cabin. Ugh... My heart hurt a little bit when i read that part . but basically I loved it! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! And I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter, despite how sad it was & how emotional it made you feel. It was definitely one of the hardest chapters of Moonrise to write. I just love Ellette & Michael so much & although they are only characters that live inside of my head, they're very real to me. :(

As always, thanks so much for reading & for taking the time to review! I truly appreciate all of your support & value your feedback, jetzero! :)

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14 2015

Title: Chapter 26: Twenty-Five - 'When my time comes around, lay me gently in the cold, dark Earth.'

So good! Can't wait for the next chapter even if it is the last.I'm ready for it no matter how it ends. Seriously a favorite story of mine. Now I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for what comes next!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, jetzero!

I can't thank you enough for taking a chance on this story, & it means a lot to know that you enjoyed it enough to actually add it to your list of favourites! You can't even imagine how great of an impact that had on me, so, again, thank you! I'll try to get the final chapter posted pretty soon so hopefully you won't have to wait too long!

As always, thanks so much for reading & for your lovely review, jetzero! :)

 

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22 2015

Title: Chapter 27: Twenty-Six - 'Haunted by a memory that I just can't set free. . .'

As you already know I love this story. Wow well at least we know Gabriel is gone but theres so many unanswered questions like was Gabe dead before ellette? How is michael going to handle all of this possible future alpha stuff?...Does Michael's mom know about ellette all types of questions but I actually like this ending especially if there is going to be a sequel. If and when you decide to start the sequel I will be here even if you don't post it here on vc I'll go where this story goes just let a sister know...lol 

Any who just want to thank you for sharing your work with us. Can't wait to read more from you I'm definitely looking for new chapters of Alpha from you as well. Keep at it because I'm loving your work!



Author's Response:

I'm super happy that you liked the ending. Yes, there are A LOT of unanswered questions & you've asked some awesome ones, jetzero!

Was Michael the one that killed Gabriel? Why can't he remember what happened? What is his Father going to find in the Woodlands? How did that grey moonstone (Ellette's, if anyone remembers) end up in his bedside table? Where the heck did Ellette's light(magic) go when her staff broke? Just how much does Reina know? Lots & lots of questions that will be answered in the sequel. And when I do decide to write & post it, you will definitely be one of the FIRST to know when & where, lol. I promise!

Seriously, thank you times a gazillion for supporting not only my stories but for supporting me, as well, jetzero! I don't even know how many readers stuck it out to the end, but I appreciate that you held on until the end. And, again, I'm honoured that you enjoyed Moonrise enough to favourite it, so thank you! :)

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04 2015

Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

SCRUBALICIOUS: one day her prince will come (The Scrub Series Book 2) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15061
Read Count: 2772
Published: November 27 2014
Updated: January 26 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

love this so far! can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support.  I hope you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed
Date: November 28 2014

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

He was a bad boy who was used to getting whatever he wanted.

She was the good girl who refused to bow down to his ways.

Together they clashed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9292
Read Count: 10610
Published: December 01 2014
Updated: March 16 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i like this so far. can't wait to see where this story goes!

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 01 2014

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 242]
Summary:

You can pick your friends. You can pick your nose. But you can't pick your family.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 87982
Read Count: 44430
Published: April 06 2015
Updated: February 14 2019


Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great update! Good teaser! Loved being in Matt's brain when he became aware of his feeling for Shyla. Can't wait to see what happens next between these two.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21 2017

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Loved the update.I was happy that Matt had a chance to speak with Shyla's mother...it shed some light on her and her personality more.

Abby is hilarious and Shyla better listen to Abby and go and get that D! Lol!

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30 2018

Retired
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 549]
Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 190425
Read Count: 66727
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: October 05 2019


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Rite of Possession

Beautiful, intense, and real. Wow just an amazing chapter what a wonderful way to truely bring together these two characters.

Very well written I don't even 

Know what to really say except thank you for this update and sharing for your talent.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 07 2016

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the End (The Last Supper Part II)

I don't know how to feel right now because I'm feeling so much. Superb chapter. I feel for these two. Diya needs a break from her family like her sisters be doing way too much just to get on their dad's good side like they aren't grown women. Goodness don't get me started on her parents. Its crazy to me that in a family that big not one of her family members stood up for her or were willing to talk things through.They all basically let the dad through a tantrum and try to bully his way to get what he wants.Brandon and Diya have a lot to work on and through with and without the other.Communication being the biggest thing here.They both need to lay it on the line.Hopefully this road for them will lead them to happiness.

Once again amazing work I love these intense scenes in the story because you r writing makes me feel like I'm right there with these characters in those moments.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30 2018

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

Gurl! I could not be Diya right now! I would be actin like a straight fool like "who?what?when?where?and why?" wow she needs to be like you gots to go Brandon. Bye!

He shouldn't have played Diya like this.Questioning her feelings for him and where he stands in her heart its like bruh that day with her family in the end she came home to you like she essentially chose him and she went with her heart.

Marisol she knows that she has Brandon and she keeps manipulating every situation with Brandon because she likes that attention. To a degree I believe what Oscar was saying about her and I think Brandon's mom was hinting to Diya about Brandon taking on other peoples worries even if they don't diserve it.

Brandon needs to look at himself and check his feeling because I don't think this situation will no longer allow him to have his cake and it eat it too.He' sbeing dragged along by Marisol but to be honest maybe he likes that kind of drama.

Diya needs a diyacation and to peace out on these folks and take care of herself because she has been through it with Brandon and her whole family.

Great chapter as always.I love the detail you put into your work and the characters. You got me in my feelings! Can't wait for the next chapter because the cliffy is killing me.



Author's Response:

Why Brandon questions Diya's feelings for him and is still involved with Marisol should become clearer in the next couple chapters--not that it'll make things better for him and Diya.  Katherine knows all the tea and is willing to spill it under the right circumstances.  You'll see.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, jetzero!!!  I'll try not to keep you waiting too long.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15 2019

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Who I Thought I Knew

So good! Can't wait to see how this plays out. I really wish Brandon could lay everything all out at once even tho its hard for him to do so... I strongly suggest therapy and. Then he can truely open his eyes to his past and especially where Marisol is concerned.They have to find a way through this they are both keeping walls up around their hearts but they are only hurting themselves.  They are still keeping each other at a distance playing tug a war / give and take with their hearts and one another. Wow they both have a journey on their hands both individually and together.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2019

Rated: All Ages
starstarstarstarhalf-star
[Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Follow the story of Luciana Esther Carter who is just another girl conditioned by the "she is better than me" mentality that plagues so many young females in the 21st century.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:Yes
Word count: 67208
Read Count: 75725
Published: August 17 2015
Updated: November 24 2015


Title: The Untitled Girl

Love this story. Both of these characters are so young I would love to see them grow maybe a sequel??? Very good writing a lovely story. It's definitely a fav of mine! I hate to see it go in a couple of days. But you have gained a new reader.can't wait to read more from you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and I definitely do agree with characters being so young - we'll just have to see what happens :-P

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2015

Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 378]
Summary:

Banner


COMPLETELY UPDATED


(Chapter 19,  20, & Epilogue uploaded as of 12/19/2018)


Growing up in a southern town like Glenmount, Alabama was never easy for Mercy Stovall especially if your personal demon eventually grow up to be 6'4'' and over 200 lbs. Then one night at a Halloween party, everything changed. It all started with one spanking and spiraled downward from there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73730
Read Count: 98867
Published: November 03 2015
Updated: December 19 2018


Title: Chapter 6: Open Seas and Olive Branches

Loved this story the first time around can't wait to see where you take it this time! I'm ready!

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.