Chapter 19: Chapter 19
wow... can I say this chapter was amazing. I 'm happy that Tristan finally made a move and that he and claudia finally had a chance to talk even if all wasn't said between them.
jump to the end- wow gosh you are a wonderful writer. you made me realize just how strongly I feel for Lucas. At first I wasn't a big fan of his but the kid grew on me. I can't have him end like this. I want him to be able to find himself, grow into a great man, and learn and push through it all.(I'm still all about tristan tho) But I felt this pain run through me as I was reading that last paragraph. ugh just amazing writing that I never knew pulled me in until I realized how close I am to these fictional characters.
any way great chapter can't wait to see how this all falls in to place!
Well THANKS, jetzero!! Yes, this only the beginning of Tristan cming out of his shell. I do have more planned in the future, but at the same time, I will definitely be staying to the special qualities he has. He will still be Tristan, but since he is maturing and nearly going to college, I felt he was due to go through some changes.
Oh thanks, you are so sweet to that!! :) Good!! That's part of what I was hoping for - to make people realize that perhaps they do care for Lucas, and was curious to see if they would feel any sort of attachment to him. Up until this point, I have slowly been revealing more of him, fleshing him out and making him layered. So I am glad to hear that you do indeed care for him, and was affected by what happened tohim in this chapter.
Oh yes, I have some plans for Lucas, that's for certain! Lots in store for him, but then again, there will be lots in store for pretty much all of the characters. Lately, though, I have been jotting down quite a few notes for Lucas, so it seems that he is ready for those changes as well. :)
Oh thank you, sweetie. Your kinds words are so very appreciated. I do work hard and put my heart and soul into my writing, so it's always wonderful to hear that people are pulled in and enjoying the stories that I write.
Thank you for taking the time to leave feedback!!
Reviewer: jetzero Signed
Date: September 19 2014