Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 21
Honestly, I found myself skipping some if Henry's talk on his past. It seemed to go on to long and I really felt I wanted him to worry mire about Val. I mean...I love Val and Henry fucked up. While his background story with his father, drinking etc was important it just was too long for me. Sorry. I thought Val would get more from him. Anyway, I hope he comes to her correct. Begging, living apologizing and proposing. She feels so bad about her weight he better love it and tell her she's perfect. And please please don't let him have brought a date to this damn wedding. I think I'll pass out. Glad you're updating again...I was wondering about this story. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for this response. I do need to truncate Henry's revelation about his past, as well as most of the story in general. I have a problem with length when it comes to writing and will hopefully be able to make things more readable/shorter in the editing process.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed
Date: December 09 2014