Chapter 11: The Need to Know.
I'm sorry but Finch & Definitely Monica is the ones to blame in this situation. They act like they weren't around for the whole saga of the Jake & Sierra relationship. It's obvious they have unfinished business and love still lingeres there. Hell, Monica new this much because she wouldn't of confronted Sierra to stay away if there wasn't something there. Monica brought this whole thing on herself, I can't stand those "wait around" chicks. It's pathetic IMO, you can't just stick around and hope one day this dude will love you... especially when he loved another person so much that not even her being on drugs and cheating stopped him from being with her. Monica was blinded by her own wants even though the truth was staring dead in her face
And Finch has no concept of Guy Code, no matter what went down he should of had his boys back, and if he wanted Monica, all he had to do was tell jake and I'm sure he wouldn't of started shit with her. He saw this whole thing coming, I don't get why he was so pissed. Finch is a bad friend, he puts Jake down practically every time he see's him, calls the person he loves horrible names, and now backstabb's him. Friends don't do that, no matter how frustrating your friend's decisions are you never throw it back in their face. You can tell them your opinion but never ever force it upon them because at the end of the day it's their own decision to make. The test is how loyal can you be after that desicion. For me there is no love lost in that friendship.
Also does anyone get that being on drugs is a disease. Yes at first it's a choice but there comes a point were it gets so bad that it's a disease that is extremely hard to get rid of. That's why I wasn't shocked when Sierra bought drugs and almost relapse. I was very glad she didn't but it was understandable why she did it. I just hate that Jake's "closest" friends keep calling her a crack whore when they don't know shit about her disease or what she's been through.
Maksim seems really interesting to me. I would love to learn more about him and neema's relationship. I don't know if they have a thing going on but I kind of want them to. There is just something about Maksim.
Now for Sierra, the girl is all kinds of screwed up but for some reason I'm rooting for her. I want all of her hopes and dreams to come true. I want her to get her revenge, I want her to get her man back, and I want her to beat her addiction. I think your doing a great job writing her, because someone I should hate is actually someone I really care for. Only a great writer can get you to sympathize with such a screwed up character lol. I want her and Jake to have their happy ending but her buying a gun to kill viktor doesn't seem like such good path for it. Can I hope for her kill him and no one ever find out lol. This story is really really good, I can't wait for your next update.
Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed
Date: March 08 2014