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Floraison d'Amour (Blossoming Love) by tpeezy22
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

 

Grace Bullock takes nothing from no one. A woman in her mid-thirties, Grace faces many battles. She must deal with being a single woman in an traditionally-based small town in Alabama. Living in a place that is behind the times, she is the co-owner of a flower shop along with her friend and mother figure Dorothy-Mae. She constantly deals with the town’s known racist sheriff, Holland. Her life seem to go nowhere until she received a phone call from her longtime friend Miriam, a foreign exchange student from France. This phone call leads Grace to visit Miriam in Paris, France which changes everything in her life.

Now with corrected French and translations!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46755
Read Count: 43693
Published: February 06 2010
Updated: February 26 2011

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Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great update. Grace needs to tone it down a bit  and give Henri a chance to do his thing.

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Date: March 08 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh oh, trouble is about to start. Poor Grace, she doesn't need this stress.

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Date: January 08 2011
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Glad those bastards got caught. Hope they put them away for life. They were abusing the badge. Glad Grace decided to go to Paris. Hope they can get their HEA.

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Date: February 27 2011
The Clause by Dsmoothone
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 452]
Summary:

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Danielle Roberts affectionately known as Dani to everyone, has what everyone else seems to want, money, power and respect.  But she doesn't have the one thing that she wants, love.Chad Collins is everybody's All-American. He's got the career, the money and the chicks throwing themselves at him, but he doesn't have the one he wants, Dani.


They've both signed the contract with "the clause".  Will they be able to overcome it and find the true love they've both been waiting on?


Another Installment of Kerrington & Associates


All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43047
Read Count: 76819
Published: March 17 2010
Updated: April 02 2012

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Title: Chapter 11: Things happen

Chad, Chad, Chad... you need to talk to Danni man. I think its gonna blow up in his face. He needs to be honest with her and take whatever consequences like a man. Why was he drinking like a fool anyway if there was a possibility of him being drunk???!!! Loved the update.

Author's Response:

:)

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Date: April 23 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Uh-Oh...

Dani, Dani , why didn't you let him explain instead of jumping to conclusions???? Now they're both about to be stupid! Great updaste. Can't wait to see how they work this one out.

Author's Response: Thank you ma'am.  I won't let them be stupid for too long.

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Date: March 28 2010
Title: Chapter 1: The Introductions

Me likey. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Good I hope you enjoy it!

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Date: March 18 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Nashville, TN

Oh Boy!!! Talk about some hot loving. Hmmm, I fear this love fest is gonna be bust soon if that skank Heather shows up again.

Author's Response:

:)

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Date: April 24 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Karaoke Night!!!!

Loved it and love a man who could sing!!! Yeah!!! They are in sooo deep. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it....

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Date: March 27 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Lunch with the big dog

Loved the update. Mr K is a very smart man and can see more than they think. I agree with him that they are smitten with each other. Heather needs a reality check and soon by the looks of it!!!

Author's Response: She will be getting her reality check soon

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Date: March 26 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Let's talk about it

Hmmm, interesting. What's up with Heather by Chad's place???

Author's Response: You know how ex's do...

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Date: March 25 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Twisted Taco's and Emotions

Oh oh, is the sh*t about to hit the fan now???? Hope Dani gives him a chance.

Author's Response: Nah its too soon to have any drama happen...

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Date: March 23 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Meet My Brothers

Loved it and glad she met the brothers. Hmmm, seems like the parents might be a bit of a problem. Hope not. What the hell is wrong with Heather??? Something isn't right with her. She's becoming a stalker!!!

Author's Response: I'll tell you now, it's going to be Mama and Ben... Heather is going to be stalkerish...

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Date: March 31 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Monday Mornings are Monday Mornings

Interesting update. Can't wait until things really start heating up.

Author's Response: Thank you. I don't want to rush it.

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Date: March 20 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Easy like Sunday Morning

Oh I can't wait for their reactions. Loved the update. Hopefully Dani gives him another chance. I'm so loving this story.

Author's Response: Thank you.  I think you will be pleased with the reactions.

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Date: March 30 2010
Title: Chapter 13: That was awkard...

Loved it!!! Also really loving me some Carey!!! He has me cracking up. Oh oh, Heather is BAD news and I can see the drama coming. If I were Chad I'd be scared right now not knowing when Heather is gonna blow. Hmmm, I'm thinking she drugged him or something, then stagged the whole thing. I don't know if I'm feeling Shelly either....What a snob!!! I'm sorry but it makes me wonder about Brian because I'd have called her on her sh*t. Is she really that shallow??? Brian really is into her??? Sad!!!  That sh*t shouldn't be tolerated. WTH is up with Ben giving Dani the cold shoulder????

Author's Response:

You know when you're in love you can't see the forest for the trees. 

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Date: April 27 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Lunch with the McKenzies

Great update. Love the way their "friendship" is progressing. Hope they can work it out with Mr K.

Author's Response: Thanks ma'am!  I think it will work out eventually.

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Date: April 07 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Rehearsal Dinners and Punches

Wow!!! The truth is out!!! Ben is a racist!!! Didn't see that coming. What a shithead!!! Its such a shame especially when I was thinking all the brothers were cool.  Hope Ben's black "friends" realise what a shit he is. He definitely hide it well as he didn't come off like that initially. How embarassing for his family. Hope Shelly took note, racism will not be tolerated in that family especially with her trying to snob Dani. Hope Brian doesn't tolerate that from Shelly as Ben's wife did . I really hope Chad tells Dani the truth before Heather gets to her or his family. Also hope Ben got a wake up call from his stupidity. Still see more drama coming. Absolutely loving this story!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, well I had to throw a monkey wrench in there some kind of way.  Shelly is gonna be easy to deal with.   Thanks for still reading and hanging in there with me.

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Date: April 29 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh hell nooo, I hope they put Heather in jail!! She's a menace!! I'm so upset at Mr Kerrington right now for firing my girl. Hope he doesn't regret his decision. Hope she finds something better.

Author's Response:

updated today...

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Date: July 09 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh oh, please oh PLEASE let Heather's downfall begin and let it be painful. Carey needs to release the tape now too.

Ben also needs a reality check and I hope he eats crow when the truth about Heather's whoring ways are exposed. Its a pity he feels its ok for Chad to marry a slut. Chad deserves better than that!!!

Author's Response: Thanks girl!!!

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Date: July 03 2011
Title: Chapter 25: FINALE

Absolutely loved this story!!! Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

thank you for reading

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Date: April 03 2012
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Release the Hounds....

Loved the update. Yes!!! Heather finally getting hers!!! About time!!! Can't wait to see what she has to say. That skank has been doing too much damage without consequences. Both she and Ben need a reality check. Maybe she'll think twice about messing with Chad and Dani in the future. Enough is enough!!!

Author's Response: Ben is ugh, well like that one relative that gets on your nerves but you tolerate because they are family... More to come this week!

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Date: July 07 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - NYC Here we come

Glad they're gonna give each other a chance eventhough she hasn't told him yet.

Author's Response:

Of course she is... those blue eyes are amazing...

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Date: June 30 2011
Title: Chapter 17: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

Oh sh*t!! Mr Kerrington done laid down the law!! Who's gonna go?? If only Chad had kept his distance and kept his jaw from flapping!!! Please, please let there be some payback for that skank Heather!!

Author's Response:

Heather will get hers... Carey is gonna make sure of that...

 

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Date: June 29 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Apologies a little to late

Poor Chad!!! Wow, Heather really screwed him bigtime. I hope Carey spills the beans so that crazy Heather could get a grip on reality and leave Chad the hell alone. WTH is the matter with Ben???!! He's a racist jerk!!! He needs a reality check too!!

Author's Response:

Ben is a good ole country boy, a little outta touch. Carey is gonna handle it all...

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Date: June 27 2011
The Daily Grind by mikki215
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 73]
Summary:

At the Chicago Day Times, columnist Maxine Baker goes through the same routine everyday and wants a change. She really wasn't expecting murder. New shoes or a cute guy sure, but not murder....



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Mystery
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11989
Read Count: 41902
Published: June 02 2010
Updated: September 19 2012

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved the update but I feel Maxie is gonna go looking for trouble.

Author's Response:

Just like most nosey folks are. :) Thanks for the review!

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Date: June 03 2010

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.