Penname: jlly16 [Contact]

Real name: Mel

Member Since: December 18 2013

Membership status: Member

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[Reviews - 22]
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In NYC, all species come together with out fear of being shunned for who they are. Well, unless they got caught up in the Black Market, of course. It's the city where you can be yourself, as long as you have the power to back yourself up. Love and Life. Little Fae, Jacqueline Sabi, has a lot to learn when it comes to the outside world. When being the last of your kind makes you #1 on everyone's most wanted list, who can you trust? Vampires? Witches? Or the race that imprisoned you, werewolves?


 Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 6605
Read Count: 3469
Published: February 03 2012
Updated: February 04 2012


Title: Chapter 4: Bad Beginnings

Just found this story, now i'm hooked. Can't wait or an update.

Reviewer: jlly16 Signed
Date: November 11 2014

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 288884
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 21

You know you've got an excellent story on your hands, when most of us readers are so vested in your chracters and thier lives, like they are real. I agree though, Val is draining me, she really needs to stop attending the pity party for 1, it's like 1 step forward 15 back with her. I feel like a pigeon that you're throwing bread crumbs at, I would like the whole loaf instead of bits and pieces :) ( more updates, pretty please) You really have a way with making this story so life like.

Reviewer: jlly16 Signed
Date: December 06 2014

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[Reviews - 702]
Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

your storytelling makes me want to live in the space in your stories. What a great ending.



Author's Response:

What a fantastic compliment.  Thanks jlly16!!!  : D

Reviewer: jlly16 Signed
Date: July 18 2015

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Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215322
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6

Love it. Thanks so much for using my suggestion. 

Reviewer: jlly16 Signed
Date: October 15 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I like it. This is different than other stories on this wonderful site.

Pictures please, I'm curious as to who you would choose to fill these roles.

But if I had to choose I could definitely see Camille Winbush as your leading lady.

Dougie Poynter as your leading man and Bo Derek as the mom.

Just a thought.    :)

 



Author's Response:

I was actually going to use your suggestions. However I was wondering if you had any idea how to get these pictures up

I'm having trouble and I'm pretty sure everyone wants to see the cast if you can offer any help it will be greatly

apperciated. Thanks

Reviewer: jlly16 Signed
Date: October 09 2014

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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Daniel has always been late for everything in his life. He's been late for puberty, dating girls, and even the "monkey in the bush". When he discovers his new neighbor next door is a woman, a very pretty woman, will he take a chance and ask her out? Or will his former bully, Nick Young, beat him to it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 7978
Read Count: 10465
Published: January 23 2015
Updated: May 12 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

James Marsden is hot in a geeky, want to keep him forever kind of way. You chose the perfect Daniel.

Please continue, I like this story.

Reviewer: jlly16 Signed
Date: January 24 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

"summertime fine" I love it.

Reviewer: jlly16 Signed
Date: February 03 2015

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 142]
Summary:

Lynne and Saul had been married for 25 years when he committed the ultimate betrayal. Lynne attempts forgiveness, but memories from her past make it hard to do that.  She loves Saul, but will she ever be able to trust him enough to take him back?  And when a new man enters her life, will she even WANT to?

 

This is a new version of the story I started earlier this month. In a comedy of errors I deleted the original version from my hard drive AND The Chamber.  I was depressed for a minute, but took it as an opportunity to re-work the story.  So here is the new, and hopefully improved, story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17066
Read Count: 74999
Published: March 19 2015
Updated: April 05 2015


Title: Chapter 14: Blood and Tears

I want a Malcolm. Taking Applications. lol j/k

In a relationship I can work through anything but cheating. That's a no-no, especially with all these diseases floating around. eww, my skin crawls with the thought of it.



Author's Response:

He really is a sweetheart.

Reviewer: jlly16 Signed
Date: April 03 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 470]
Summary:

While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 54201
Read Count: 121647
Published: August 12 2015
Updated: March 02 2017


Title: Chapter 5: DAY 8

I'm waiting for Sterling to get really sick and Anika having to take care of him.

Reviewer: jlly16 Signed
Date: August 18 2015

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Summary:

 

Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 301697
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021


Title: Chapter 16: Show and Tell

Thank you for re-writing this story. It flows alot better now than the original.

Reviewer: jlly16 Signed
Date: February 13 2016

Title: Chapter 9: Clean, Bone, Destruction

I'm really  enjoying the flow of this re- write. Before, it seemed rushed. I like how we're seeing more of a relationship building between them in a slower fashion, then the prior first write. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am not denying that the first posting of the story was rushed because it was. The relationship, the plot, everything was very rushed. Being able to go back, change some things around, and fill in the blanks has definitely made the story better and made me a better writer. Thank you.

Reviewer: jlly16 Signed
Date: October 06 2015

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Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

 

COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 284032
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet

I'm like a slave hanging on your every word and story. You really are a great author and I love the Pinterest board, I can see the story come to life as I read every chapter.



Author's Response:

I am so happy you like the Pinterest board. I will be adding to it when I can, so keep an eye out for updates. I hope you enjoy what I have in store for the story. 

Reviewer: jlly16 Signed
Date: July 19 2017

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.