Ahhhh this is amazing! I'm gonna do a rain dance or something in the hopes that you'll update this soon, because this is one of the best stories I've read on here so far. The way you write your characters is phenomenal. They're all so flawed and honest, so HUMAN. It's what makes your stories soo addicting. I've read all that you've put up and I'm obsessed. Your writing inspires me to work that much harder on my writing and perfecting my craft. Thank you so much!

That being said, I need to vent about this story.

Okay, I have a HUGE soft spot for Chase. I mean, I definitely appreciate that the two of them weren't intimate while he was in high school (for a while I was worried they would cross that boundary), but after graduation I was initially hoping that would work out for them. I was both surprised and pleased when she actually went ahead and gave Jack a chance. I didn't think they would end up together. When I saw how well they for each other though, my heart immediately went out to Chase. How awful would it be to see someone who has become your world, begin a relationship with your (seemingly) insensitive brother? I would die. Okay, no I wouldn't, but still, I hope everything works out for Chase (maybe he'll find his own chocolate shorty @ Harvard?). *fingers crossed* I really hope Jack wasn't responsible for the pics. I was just starting to like him.

Personally, I think it was that blonde girl Ashley. She's been trying to get Chase's attention for some time now, and I think it killed her to see how much in love he was with Lila. I get that's frustrating, but I didn't appreciate the fact that she got all in Lila's face at the beach. She's still a teacher, and you blondie didnt really know what was going on. I would have had to lay her out. Lol.

If the blonde's not responsible, I definitely think the Grandma might be to blame for the creeper photos. Something about the way she was grilling Lila rubbed me the wrong way... I could be wrong, but I've got my eye on her. 

This story is so good, please please PLEASE update soon. I'm in love.

Come back! 😭

Come back please! 😭

Please come back! 😭 this story is just too good to go unfinished. I'm hoping you're safe and doing well CaramelGal! d84;a039;

FUCK BRANDON AND FUCK MARISOL'S HOMEWRECKING SELF. I'm so upset right now. Diya definitely does not deserve all this toxic crap Brandon is throwing her way. If she can't see that, then both of these idiots deserve each other. This whole chapter was so hard to read. Everyone acted like a bunch of children and under NO circumstances should Rafe have stomped Oscar out in front of the kid. I think Diya should run farrrr away from this BS. Brandon and Marisol wanna play house under the guise of "friendship" and it's disrespectful ASF. Ughhh I'm so upset. PLEASE tell me the next chapter is almost finished, because this I HAVE to see. 

Omg I was gonna be so pissed if they stopped! Thank goodness for Chef! 🙌🏾 I really hope that that Sugar can get over her insecurities! Chef is a good man and she definitely deserves someone like him. 

I just binged this entire book and now I’m sad there’s not more. Poor babies! 😭 I hope they can get it together after all of this Zhang drama fades away. They both love each other sooo dearly, and little Noah’s so amazing. d84;a039;  This is such an incredible story, with incredible character development, and incredible heartache! I’ve added this to my tracked stories. I’ll be eagerly waiting! 😊